The Uncanny Descended by My Side

It's well written, but I can't complain about the monetary system. Why are relics so cheap? Isn't this one for everyone? Kill ghosts with your life and get hundreds or thousands of dollars? Might as well move bricks

When I see the name Liangfeng, I have a picture.

I feel like this book is quite good. Although it has various small shortcomings, they are not major problems because this book still has many advantages. It is impossible to say that every book is perfect. It can only be constantly improved, written better and better, and slowly changed , just like "The Demon" , I relied on selling meat at the beginning, and my writing was not very good, but I also made progress little by little later. So don't get into a quarrel just because of a small problem. Some of the shortcomings of this book mainly focus on the monetary system, the relics are too cheap, and the supporting character Ning Bai has too many scenes, old It's a show-stealer. The protagonist's character is wavering. He treats some supporting actresses too well, such as Sister Xu. If she were the heroine, she would be about the same, but she's not. Also, the protagonist was not motivated at first, but it has changed a lot now, and it's a bit too routine But, these are not big problems. , Currency is not an important thing in the first place and can be ignored completely. What we are looking at is not how much money we are looking at. Other problems can be made up for, and the author should also be very serious about writing in a good direction. The protagonist's character has obviously changed a lot before the handover, and he also chose a female protagonist before. The character, although I feel that the author is just a formality and has not given Ning Bai and the young protagonist too many scenes recently. The protagonist has become less stubborn recently and will take the initiative Moreover, this book has many advantages. Let's just say the simplest one, the golden finger of this book, I don't think it is very innovative. Is it very interesting? I think the system of this book is very interesting. The relics and guardian spirits are too monotonous. Each person only has one relic or guardian spirit, but the ghost raiser can raise many ghosts, and each ghost has different abilities. I feel that the relic user is too weak compared to the ghost raiser. It should be balanced. For example, we should strengthen the use of relics Hey, don't make it seem like you have suffered something because of some minor problems. Yes, we are readers, not the authors. Whatever the author writes, we are done. If you think it is good and interesting, just read on. We can make some suggestions, but it is the author's business to adopt them or not. , Although I have always disliked Ning Bai, I just complained and continued reading, because, what I want to read is this book, and Ning Bai is just a small episode, not worth it. Forget it, I won't say anything. I feel that the more I talk about it, the worse it gets, so I won't say it anymore. I just want to say that I will be more productive when I can. It's not enough.

Let's keep it for now, and strongly request more updates for Xiao Yuan! ! !

Write Auguman seriously, you bastard! !

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Namo Gatling Bodhisattva, six pure depleted uranium bullets. One breath lasts 3,600 revolutions, bringing great mercy and compassion to the world. I am the Buddha who is compassionate.

After reading the introduction, I thought it was a cool novel in which the protagonist pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger, but then I saw the story pretending to be a pig. The protagonist has escaped from death in various ways, been bullied and schemed against, and the protagonist still doesn't think about how to become stronger, but also wants to be a good student and a good baby in the eyes of his parents. If it weren't for the protagonist's aura, grass would have grown on his grave.

The writing is okay, but I feel uncomfortable when I cheat from time to time. I hope someone can tie the author up and whip him if he doesn't write.

After reading a few chapters, one thing that feels very awkward is that the protagonist is set to be 17 years old, almost an adult, and has just graduated from junior high school and is about to be a freshman in high school. Although this situation is not unheard of, most 17-year-olds are in their second year of high school and preparing to take college entrance examinations. A 17-year-old freshman in high school is definitely older than many of his classmates. I wonder what the significance of this setting is? I hope it will be explained later. After all, even if you want to write about daily life on campus, there is no problem if you set the age of 17 as a senior in high school and about to enter a freshman year. The creative standards for a college setting are looser, and the protagonist has more freedom of movement and a wider range of contacts. If it is to highlight the young genius of the protagonist, then since he is almost an adult at the age of 17 after graduating from junior high school, he is not considered a genius. It is okay to be more mature and better than his classmates at this age. In short, I feel that this basic setting is very awkward. Let's look at it later.