Pokemon Dream Master

To be honest, the writing about wild Pokémon was a bit disgusting. Pokémon is Pokémon, and the way you wrote the protagonist encountering other people's wild Pokémon gave me a nauseating Furious-obsessed vibe. Also, it's fine for a Pokémon story to not have a female lead, since the focus is on the relationship between the protagonist and the Pokémon, but you didn't need to add a trope that women dislike. Frankly, this addition was ridiculous, felt forced, and didn't fit the book's style at all.

Damn, we can really talk about the old books a bit before, but with the new ones, you just launch them without a word, and they fizzle out so quickly. I'm really afraid you'll just give up halfway through writing this one too.

This is the nth time the book has been opened without any response. I'm a bit speechless, but I still want to say: Keep it up, author!

The author should probably promote the new book in their previous Pokémon works.

One outrageous claim is that the author's forte is actually otherworldly elf stories. I only read the beginning of this book and the previous one about romance before giving up. After glancing at the comments section, I noticed a small problem: the author isn't actually good at writing about Pokémon world creatures.

The books "Marketing Accounts," "Strange Tales," and "Ghost Stories" were clearly very good, but their data wasn't good, so they were cut. Waterbird writes very diligently, but it feels like she's given very few resources.

The writing is quite good, but there's one problem I've wanted to complain about since the last book: the scenes of Pokémon getting close to each other. Every time someone gets close to a Pokémon, Officer Jenny pops up, leading to a detention room. I'm really tired of this trope. It happened at least ten times in the last book, and now it's happening again in this one.

Seeing the battles is really unbearable. Judging from the current level of the protagonist's Pokémon, the leveling up will be slower as you go on. Okay, let's add a way to disable Pokémon. But unless you can frequently change your ace Pokémon or all the Pokémon in your team are at the same level, you might not be able to get away with this rule. But is that even possible?

I wouldn't be surprised if the main character had multiple eggs in his bed someday.

The author's books always resonate with me, but they always seem to add other elements that make me both want to read them and not want to. I hope this book can be a bit purer.