I Became the Progenitor of the Vampires

People who read vampire stories should still have some expectations. After all, vampires always have a stereotype of being mysterious, powerful, and evil. It can be said that the biggest attraction of this genre is how to solve the contradiction between the evil characteristics/congenital defects of the vampires and their survival and development. It can be said that if the contradictions are solved cleverly or the contradictions are made vivid, this vampire novel will be successful. So how did this book solve it? The Vampires transformed directly and became the righteous servants of the people, known as the "Holy Light Vampires" (the country is terrible), and then through hard work in building the country, they educated the people and made the people in the country take the initiative to donate blood (to be honest, this explanation is also very cliché). Well, the conflict has been resolved. Your uncle has also solved the interesting points. The vampires in this book are neither mysterious, powerful, nor evil. I read a vampire novel just to read about you, the "holy light vampire"? Because the protagonist doesn't want to see blood, he drinks the so-called "bottled white magic blood" that is the same as Nutrition Express. ——You, the ancestor of the Vampire Clan, don't even bite the neck, why are you writing about Vampire Clan themes? It's better to just write about mage farming. To put it bluntly, except for the extremely cohesive and absolute obedience setting of blood link, which is somewhat useful in building an utopia (after all, this thing is equivalent to 100% implementation of the law), the vampire theme of this book is not helpful at all. It made me so angry. The theme bonus is completely bypassed, and the plot construction is also old-fashioned, so is it a dead end? Not really. But that is based on the author's enthusiasm. If the characterization is clear, the plot is ingenious, the intention is profound, and the development is novel and meets one or two of the requirements, it can be a good watch. However, after reading several chapters, it is full of the shocking lack of common sense exposed by the writing of Jianguo, there is not enough eye-catching plot development, and the creation of the main characters is useless. It feels very mediocre. Seeing the protagonist claiming to be the "King of Routines" with his mediocre routine operations, I really had mixed feelings. Then the theme of this book also very ambitiously adds players and double penetration. I can't see that much later, but I can foresee that, compared to the interesting points, it will more likely only be a burden that further crushes the book.

To tell a joke, the ancestor of vampires is younger than ordinary vampires.

There is a saying that this book collapses so much in the middle that it makes it seem boring in the later stages. There is a book called "The Super Mechanic". I recommend the author to read it. I think there are many techniques and writing rhythms in it that are worth learning from the author. Please work hard, author. I am very optimistic about you.

It's very interesting at the beginning, but the author loses control as it goes on... There are meaningless places, such as the sand sculpture players talking wildly, The really interesting conquests, battles, and farming are just brushed aside... The settings of the earth and the players are holding back...

Li De, does it seem consistent with your impression? ?

Extraordinary was so awesome in the early stage, but it was stuck for a long time without upgrading. In the later stage, it suddenly collapsed, and suddenly it became very easy to pop up a lot of them.

In the later stage, I was still eating books. The author wrote about an awesome career and then forgot about it. It had no sense of existence at all and made people feel like they were ghostwriting.

I personally feel that the role of the vampires in the later scenes is too low. In fact, you don't have to be so big-hearted and just write about the farming and development of the vampires. Isn't it fun to do something like blood elves now?

Don't bleed in front of me, because your blood will reveal my true colors.

The author's new book will be another one in the genre of the ancestors of the Blood Tribe. The creativity of several new books is not to my liking, but the Blood Tribe is still good-looking.