Swamp Lord: I Have an Intelligence System

The writing is good and it reads smoothly.

I dedicated a chapter to complain about this weird setting that only 16-year-olds can inherit! ! Think about it, think about it! On the battlefield, the nobles fight for the king again! Snap! Died in battle! Then, if the heir reaches the age of 16, the family title will be canceled or the family title will fall into the hands of a side branch (note that this is not the death of the main line) This kind of country or law is weird. Under normal circumstances, the interests of the aristocracy cannot be guaranteed. How can the person in power exist without being overthrown by the aristocracy? By force? I'll change the country! Is this true across the entire continent? My own class recommendation! Are there gods in this world? The gods don't care about this kind of law, they only care about faith!

Violent Poison, like so many desperate authors from Qidian, must have been a reader for a few years before writing. Don't you really know what poisonous things everyone hates? The author started having an intracranial orgasm within a few chapters of the opening chapter, completely ignoring the rigor of the story background, the logic of the plot, and the creation of the characters.

It really made a group of your fathers burst into laughter.

No, buddy, you don't know how to use it. When you meet fishmen, you kill them, frogs, frogs, as long as they are alive, you kill them all. It turns out that there are only a few hundred people in the small town. Since you have the authority and lead the team, why don't you kill them half to death? Isn't that how the lizard people were subdued? What if the fishmen were used as slaves and the frogs were used as guards to form a swamp mixed army. Wouldn't this snowball quickly? As a result, I killed the supply lizard man by force. As a result, the lizard man still can't defeat the frog. Why don't you catch the baby and control it?

Ah, in what age is there still such ancient literature? The protagonist in the slums is almost like a beggar. Guess what? The flower of the north and the proud daughter of heaven became very interested in the beggar protagonist when they first met him. In addition, the protagonist is not invincible or a master, but just a waste who knows some information. Who gave you the confidence? A dead genius is not a genius, a beggar is blaming the sky and the earth 😅😅

I have just read five chapters. The first three chapters are of a very high level. The writing rhythm, plot arrangement and golden finger setting are no worse than the fantasy glory works I have read. It can be said that I have very high expectations. When I saw this, I was shocked why the data of this book was so poor. But I understood it from the moment I arrived at the doorstep of the genius magic girl holding forty-five magic saplings. First of all, there are typical mistakes in common sense of life. I am holding forty-five saplings with soil. This small problem can be ignored. I talk to the guard at the door and use ancient Chinese classical Chinese lines. The western fantasy atmosphere directly breaks down to the bottom, and the content of persuasion is very wordy. Then the description of the female character is still in place and the character is very high. As a result, two big poisonous points immediately emerged. One is the female character's various low-level behaviors that are not in line with the character. Forced to speak, it is full of mindless novel-style character motivations and line tone; secondly, when the protagonist faces the low-B performance of the female character, he perfectly uses his own low-B answer to completely match the tone and line. Do you know how rare this is? The two people's levels are actually on par! I don't know what kind of mental state you were in when you wrote this paragraph, or whether you used up your talent in the first three chapters. As for the subsequent plot, I will patiently read it again. If it is the same as the first three chapters, I will advise you to seriously revise these two chapters. This book can still be saved; if these two chapters are all brainless, I will leave silently and settle down.

It was said that there was authority in the swamp, but when we arrived at the swamp, there was nothing written about this authority😅

I have read two books by this author (the last book, Desert Lords), and found that they have a common characteristic, that is, the protagonist likes to show off excessively, and is inexplicably inflated. I don't know if he is pretending to be for the plot characters or for the readers. Confidence is a good thing, but excessive self-absorption is a bit ridiculous

Reading strategy: Be fast and don't let your brain react!

Is this fragment of the godhead still worth two stars? Why are you trying so hard? There is a fragment behind it. If you upgrade to a level, don't you have to eat several more? Speechless

The opening is too classic, not the storyline but the writing technique. The desire to advance is suppressed first. The beginning is about how difficult it is and how difficult it is, without considering the rationality behind it.

This book is a bit childish. In fact, the structure is not bad, but it really writes about the experiences of junior high school students and below. You can see toys with your eyes. He burst out laughing. Excitement at best. The princess has all kinds of buffs, it's so spacey. But the author's writing style is okay and the outline is not broken. I feel that I should give it a few more years to settle down, at least before I start writing after I go to college. Not in a hurry.

After reading it, there are too many flaws: Long Aotian. The human race passed through the human race and then ceased to be human. Although all my men are upgraded to evil and watered with flesh and blood, I am still a good person (god)

The author's level is limited and his ability is average. This book was conceived by me with limited skills. There is no way to satisfy everyone, and there must be many loopholes. But this has been written by me after much thought and effort, but my ability is insufficient. Welcome to complain here. As long as you don't engage in personal attacks, you can complain as much as you like. If you have any good suggestions, you are welcome to make them. If you can change it, you can change it. If you can't change it, everyone will scold you. Don't be unhappy. It doesn't matter if you don't like this book. I'm also very picky about reading books. I usually click "cross" on a book title if I don't like it. There's no need to feel bad about yourself, just find an exciting book to read. Thank you for coming. 🙏🏻

Is it really okay to be an enemy of all the gods? It will easily collapse later.

It feels like the gods and demigods in this book are simplified versions of simplified versions, too weak. 😥😥😥

It hurts to see pigs' feet living in the ninth block. It's so poisonous. How can a mud horse be qualified to apply to open up a territory if he is so depressed? Descendants of nobles? Would aristocratic people who were in such a state of poverty still recognize such a rubbish descendant of an aristocratic family? Is this how difficult it is to shape? What's the difference between a pig's trotters and a beggar in their current state?

It's no longer possible. He's already dead from the poison.

I have read sixty or seventy chapters of this novel, and there are no big logical problems to complain about. But I want to say that you, the author, are already a level 5 writer. Are you writing a novel or a running account? It's an infrastructure-style novel, a farming novel. Look at what you're writing before. The protagonist is either going to fight monsters or on the way to fight monsters. He's either on the way to defeat his subordinates or on his way to collect his subordinates. The plot is highly homogenized. The protagonist seems to believe in the laws of the dark forest. Dangerous targets around him must be eliminated. You can clear them as long as you clear them. But what's the essence of a farming novel? How have you developed? How are the residents under my command doing? If you just start a story where the protagonist defeats monsters and becomes a god, other elements are either briefly mentioned or not written at all. Are you writing a war style or a farming style?

The more I read, the less I can stand it anymore. Either you don't write yourself as a human being. After watching for so long, you are a human being and all other monsters in a territory. It's also weird. Then all the monsters can break through the upper limit when they come to you, or you don't mention the upper limit of this monster in the first place. Do you know what the upper limit is? 😰😰

I've just read a few chapters and it's so hard to watch, especially the one thousand kilometers of land reclamation. A mortal can't use the Broken Godhead. How can he complete the distance from the capital to Shanghai?

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is super, super, super, super rubbish. It's hard to read.

I keep eating the previous plot settings over and over again, but I'm still convinced, 😅

After reading it, I actually feel pretty good

Abandoned. The two chapters are the same and have not been changed for several days.

Originally, it was fine if I drank a little water or something, and I could still read it to pass the time. But after a few days, do you plan to change these two chapters? Just pretend you don't know? Then we don't plan to watch it either 🤫

Dear book lovers, come and check in if you have nothing to do and help this book get out of the circle!

The god of the swamp is so rubbish, he only became an apprentice mage at level 3 after 10% of his godhead was fused?

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