Swamp Lord: I Have an Intelligence System

I dedicated a chapter to complain about this weird setting that only 16-year-olds can inherit! ! Think about it, think about it! On the battlefield, the nobles fight for the king again! Snap! Died in battle! Then, if the heir reaches the age of 16, the family title will be canceled or the family title will fall into the hands of a side branch (note that this is not the death of the main line) This kind of country or law is weird. Under normal circumstances, the interests of the aristocracy cannot be guaranteed. How can the person in power exist without being overthrown by the aristocracy? By force? I'll change the country! Is this true across the entire continent? My own class recommendation! Are there gods in this world? The gods don't care about this kind of law, they only care about faith!

Violent Poison, like so many desperate authors from Qidian, must have been a reader for a few years before writing. Don't you really know what poisonous things everyone hates? The author started having an intracranial orgasm within a few chapters of the opening chapter, completely ignoring the rigor of the story background, the logic of the plot, and the creation of the characters.

It really made a group of your fathers burst into laughter.

No, buddy, you don't know how to use it. When you meet fishmen, you kill them, frogs, frogs, as long as they are alive, you kill them all. It turns out that there are only a few hundred people in the small town. Since you have the authority and lead the team, why don't you kill them half to death? Isn't that how the lizard people were subdued? What if the fishmen were used as slaves and the frogs were used as guards to form a swamp mixed army. Wouldn't this snowball quickly? As a result, I killed the supply lizard man by force. As a result, the lizard man still can't defeat the frog. Why don't you catch the baby and control it?

Ah, in what age is there still such ancient literature? The protagonist in the slums is almost like a beggar. Guess what? The flower of the north and the proud daughter of heaven became very interested in the beggar protagonist when they first met him. In addition, the protagonist is not invincible or a master, but just a waste who knows some information. Who gave you the confidence? A dead genius is not a genius, a beggar is blaming the sky and the earth 😅😅

I have just read five chapters. The first three chapters are of a very high level. The writing rhythm, plot arrangement and golden finger setting are no worse than the fantasy glory works I have read. It can be said that I have very high expectations. When I saw this, I was shocked why the data of this book was so poor. But I understood it from the moment I arrived at the doorstep of the genius magic girl holding forty-five magic saplings. First of all, there are typical mistakes in common sense of life. I am holding forty-five saplings with soil. This small problem can be ignored. I talk to the guard at the door and use ancient Chinese classical Chinese lines. The western fantasy atmosphere directly breaks down to the bottom, and the content of persuasion is very wordy. Then the description of the female character is still in place and the character is very high. As a result, two big poisonous points immediately emerged. One is the female character's various low-level behaviors that are not in line with the character. Forced to speak, it is full of mindless novel-style character motivations and line tone; secondly, when the protagonist faces the low-B performance of the female character, he perfectly uses his own low-B answer to completely match the tone and line. Do you know how rare this is? The two people's levels are actually on par! I don't know what kind of mental state you were in when you wrote this paragraph, or whether you used up your talent in the first three chapters. As for the subsequent plot, I will patiently read it again. If it is the same as the first three chapters, I will advise you to seriously revise these two chapters. This book can still be saved; if these two chapters are all brainless, I will leave silently and settle down.

It was said that there was authority in the swamp, but when we arrived at the swamp, there was nothing written about this authority😅

I have read two books by this author (the last book, Desert Lords), and found that they have a common characteristic, that is, the protagonist likes to show off excessively, and is inexplicably inflated. I don't know if he is pretending to be for the plot characters or for the readers. Confidence is a good thing, but excessive self-absorption is a bit ridiculous

Reading strategy: Be fast and don't let your brain react!

Is this fragment of the godhead still worth two stars? Why are you trying so hard? There is a fragment behind it. If you upgrade to a level, don't you have to eat several more? Speechless