I Can Upgrade the Shelter

The beginning was well-written, but the later parts became a complete mess. The protagonist of this book is a novelist with a wide range of knowledge who gets a cheat ability to upgrade items in his shelter. However, this setup goes completely awry later on. The protagonist's personality, in particular, becomes quite unlikable later on.

There are only 26 chapters in total, and the cheat system only arrives in chapter 22. And that's when we get to the main point! Unbelievable! 😁 I want to arrest the author, make them hand over their saved drafts, and then lock them up in a shelter to write all day!

The author's book is of high quality, but the problem lies in its disorganized writing. Too many unnecessary instructions and urban fantasy elements are interspersed throughout, resulting in a very poor reading experience. The farming, development, and system upgrade content that I most wanted to see was greatly diluted by these unnecessary additions.

I've jumped in too early! I think you should release at least 100,000 more words, introduce the cheat system, and start planning, upgrading, and building the shelter. That would be much better. It's frustrating to be kept in suspense like this. I hope the author will work harder and update more frequently to attract more readers. Higher word counts are definitely more engaging; no reader likes short, drawn-out chapters. The plot and logic will also be better. Keep it up, author!

To add to that, look at how Lingao Qiming wrote his instruction manual. Technology is about advancement and progress, while instruction manuals are about explaining the essentials. The ultimate truth is to make the reader feel good, not bad.

Actually, the biggest bug is the "improve quality of life" feature. You could directly approach the government and have them create something out of thin air, then relay the message directly to the Supreme Court. As long as the protagonist is doing well, he can provide a considerable amount of supplies to everyone in the country's shelters every day, making him a new kind of national treasure.

Well, the author has actually tried very hard to make the plot plausible. No matter how comprehensive his ideas are, they can't compare to those of hundreds or thousands of people. Not to mention those who have some relevant knowledge. There aren't many authors similar to him... At least in my opinion. Don't argue with me, because I generally don't read these kinds of posts.

I read the first few dozen chapters of this book and thought it was good, so I started reading it regularly every weekend. Then I got hooked on the plot when it was first released, and I was constantly skipping around while reading. Because I only subscribed to a few books automatically, and the rest I read for free using a 90-day free trial I won, I haven't commented on it until today.

Hmm, the book is pretty good. I just suddenly thought that if such a system really existed, you might as well cooperate with the government. In this situation, the government wouldn't treat you like that; they'd be too busy protecting you to even think about it. Pooling the nation's resources and points to directly upgrade those large shelters would be incredibly efficient.

The early stages of the story, focusing on farming and development, were quite interesting and achieved good results. However, later on, the author's writing style shifted, seemingly catering to readers who complained about the plot's lack of depth. It's unclear whether this was the author's original intention or a deliberate attempt to cater to a segment of the readership.