I Can Upgrade the Shelter

I read dozens of chapters of this book in the beginning and thought it was good. Later, I started reading it regularly on weekends. Then I was addicted to the plot when it was released, and I kept reading it. Also because except for a few books that I have automatically subscribed to, I have used the 90-day limit I drew to avoid free prostitution, so I have not spoken. I finished it all in one breath today and caught up with the plot of rescuing the city next door. I couldn't help but want to write some thoughts. It can be regarded as my personal opinion on those who keep repeating the mediocre plot comments. Among the settings and plots of this book, my favorite part is the upgrading of the shelter and the change of the environment. It can be regarded as a hypothesis under a strict setting. The previous chapters have the fun of farming in popular science, which can be regarded as opening up a new sub-genre. Some of the branch designs and development directions of the upgrade are also well designed. It is expected that the author will develop a land-based mobile fortress shelter like Mule's Island, or the shelter will develop upward into a space elevator space station, or the shelter will develop downward into deep geothermal heat. These are all things that can be written a lot, and even become a great benefit to the world after they are fully developed in the later stage. But many people may think that this is a preparation before the arrival of some kind of big scene in the apocalypse, so they have been calling it dull, causing the author to start writing emotional dramas and searching for relatives over a thousand miles. But to be honest, these plots have more ups and downs than the previous ones, but they don't make people feel exciting. The reason is also very simple. These apocalyptic plots have been written by predecessors in many more dramatic and heavy-tasting works. The author wrote it, but if it is not more prominent, it will make the readers of farming science popularization dumbfounded. It's a two-sided situation. However, the author still did not stop after the family search plot ended. Maybe he thought that the readers of the apocalyptic genre who still called it a dull story wanted to see conflict, so he wrote about mercenaries. When the response was still not good enough, he wrote about rescue Linshi. . . In fact, readers of the apocalyptic genre love descriptions of disorder, chaos, and even tragedy and cruelty. The author has stated from the beginning that he wants to write a story in which the protagonist finds a way to develop and revitalize human civilization under orderly conditions. This conflict is too difficult to reconcile. In order to get rid of the label of "bland plot", the author constantly writes various side copies to try to find what readers want. This also leads to the author not maintaining the original rigor. This work has changed from "I can upgrade the shelter" to "I can upgrade everything in the world regardless of the outside world". . . Starting from the plot after the mercenaries, the technology tree of this work suddenly went out of control. The mass production of nuclear batteries already required careful consideration of how fine detail would change the overall development, but they immediately started to develop exoskeletons and geothermal. . . I would be able to accept it if the writing style completely changed like this. However, the style of painting changed, and it took more than ten chapters to build the now domestically produced well drilling machine, submersible shield machine and pipeline technology. You would think that the author would have stopped writing in detail, but the small nuclear fusion equipment was built in one go.

This book is the best I have ever read on shelter. After reading so many types of books, few are so attractive to me. The setting of natural disasters is also good, development and trading (I don't know why the author doesn't write more about collection and scavenging. Even if gj is prepared, I think there will still be gains. Some people say that the plot after the plot is a bit watered down. In my opinion, there are a few chapters that are watery, but it does not affect this. This is a very good novel. Big boost for the author! Don't let the monthly ticket get you dizzy. @ I am planting a field in the apocalypse. Palm Seven Stars 🤓 Stock up! Stock up!

Let me first say thank you to the author for your hard work. This book is a very reasonable post-apocalyptic farming story. Personally, I like the background setting and the golden finger. I like to see the protagonist make good use of the golden finger to improve his own life (including other people). I don't think the details in the process are trivial, but are the characteristics of this book. I kindly ask the author to pay attention and try not to write about topics that are easy to get 404. I don't want this book to be blocked. I would like to write more about how to use the system to transform various black technology items, and set out earlier to pick up people. The harem can be completed faster, thank you. Help the protagonist get an all-terrain RV. For reference, this luxury RV can be used by the protagonist with his parents and three girls.

After reading Chapter 71, let me talk about my feelings so far. First of all, the good points: 1. The subject matter is very good and very attractive. It's really fun to watch the imagination at the beginning. I am also a fan of the principal (fossil middle finger ⚠️warning) 2. The description of the country's handling of natural disasters is better and more realistic, much better than many situations where the end of the world is about to destroy the government. 3. Some details are convenient, especially in the environment, scenes, etc. Then there are some painful disadvantages: 1. The author's explanation of some knowledge and common sense is somewhat one-sided, and there are often inconsistencies and loopholes. 2. There are limitations in the subject matter structure. There is neither the exciting atmosphere of the apocalypse stream nor the climbing of the technology tree of the farming stream. I hope the author can deal with it in the future I have written so much for now, but overall it is still readable. I hope the author will continue to work hard in the next step. pls: For knowledge description, you can check more information and do more homework, or you can not explain it at all. Above Is there a book club group😜

It's very well written. It's much more real and meaningful than the article about zombies taking crystal cores after evolving. I hope to add more.

This book is well written, but it feels a bit too bland.

It is strongly recommended to add monsters and the collapse of order, otherwise it will become more and more boring and the author will not be able to write well (after all, you can update so much when you are so stupid, I am a Buddha) You can still change it now, otherwise it will be too late (after all, it is purely apocalyptic, it is not to blame that the order has not collapsed, and the system is boring after looking at it for a long time)

Update once a day😭

I like this novel very much. It is my first time to read the novel. I paid to read the original version 😌. I hope the author will update it more and pay attention to your health at the same time.

Happy Double Day, should I post ten or eight chapters to celebrate?

Although I woke up this morning and read two chapters, it still seems like there are not enough socks.

Update once a day? ! ! ! 😭

Come on, the author 🌹 Come on

Update quickly, your update is too slow

The writing was good at the beginning, but it was a complete mess at the end. The protagonist of this book is a novel author who knows a lot and got a golden finger that can upgrade the items in the shelter. But this setting became a mess in the later stages. Especially the protagonist's character became very unlikable later on. The protagonist often interferes in scientific research, military, politics, diplomacy and other matters without increasing his knowledge or becoming smarter. Although I understand that the novel is centered on the protagonist, writing it this way makes it seem like all talents in the country cannot compare with the protagonist. This wisdom-reducing halo is too wide. If you really want to write it like this, you can use cheats to increase the protagonist's knowledge and IQ. Anyway, the protagonist in the later stage seems to be very self-righteous and has a hand in everything. All kinds of behavior are very willful.

There are only 26 chapters in total, and then Chapter 22 Golden Finger arrives. Just getting to the point! There is no one left! 😁 I want to arrest the author and hand over the manuscript. Then I was locked up in the shelter and coded all day long!

The author's book is of excellent quality, but the problem is that the writing is too messy. There are too many unnecessary instructions and urban texts interspersed in the middle, resulting in a very poor reading experience. The content of the farming development system upgrade that you most want to see is greatly diluted by these unnecessary things, and many of the explanatory essays you wrote cannot stand up to scrutiny and contain factual errors. The urban essay content is even more embarrassing, and the dialogue between the characters is as childish as junior high school students chatting online. Abandoned.

It's too early to get into the trap. I think you should release more words, at least 100,000 words. Goldfinger came out and started planning and upgrading the construction of the shelter. This can be better. It's hard to be hooked now. I hope the author can work harder and update more in the future to attract more readers. Now that the update has more words, it is really more attractive. No reader likes a beast with less words. The plot setting logic is also better. Come on, author.

In fact, the biggest bug is the function of improving the quality of life. You can go to the government directly, create things out of thin air in person, and communicate them directly to the Supreme Court. As long as the protagonist lives a good life, he can provide a lot of supplies to the people in the country's shelters every day. It is simply a new national treasure. And there is no need to worry about the so-called kidnapping and coercion. That kind of thing can only happen in the beautiful country. If you want to ask why, if the existence of the protagonist is discovered by Guo Jia, based on his characteristics, it is estimated that he will live better than LDR. For the long-term sustainable development plan, you will not resist or wait for an opportunity to escape, or directly come to Ning. No matter what you do, someone will bring you a meal as soon as you open your mouth. The luxurious apocalyptic life 24 hours a day is well arranged for you, so it is impossible to be blackmailed or threatened. However, daily monitoring and accompanying bodyguards are indispensable, but they are all to ensure your safety in life and save the only system host from dying. But if this is the case, this book will be of little value.

I would like to add that it is also an instruction manual. Let's see how Lingao Qiming wrote it. Technology is for development, and instructions are for hardcore explanations. The eternal truth is to make readers happy, not to make them unhappy.

How should I put it? The author has actually worked very hard to rationalize the plot. No matter how comprehensive he thinks, it is not as comprehensive as hundreds of thousands of people think. What's more, there are some people who know some relevant knowledge. There are not many authors similar to this... At least I think so. Don't argue with me, because I generally won't read these things when they are distributed. As for a bottle that is less than half a bottle, a little self-consciousness is better than anything else. Also, I didn't tell anyone, so please don't take it personally or misunderstand me. There are other... Well... Some that are a bit whimsical. Let's first talk about whether the unnecessary power consumption increases after the upgrade of VR or other entertainment electronics. His exquisite picture quality, or how to solve the energy consumption of the hardware, what to do when there is no power, everything is useless. Isn't it whimsical? Introduce a few words briefly, is it really just a casual mention and then the other party refuses, just ignore it. Even if his parents are here, how can he live in such a place? He didn't have any special system at that time. What to do? The author's motivation is very clear. He wants to tell us that the protagonist in his novel is alive and he is just the most ordinary ordinary person. You can see a person who is biased toward reality, who is scared, confused, at a loss, or makes some stupid mistakes. The struggle of such a person in the apocalypse is what I want to see, because there are too many Long Aotian, I am a little tired of it, and I want to change my taste. Whether it's me washing the floor, or anything else, you can start if there's something worth mentioning.

Emm, the book is very good. I just suddenly thought that if there is such a system, you should just cooperate with the country. In this situation, the country cannot do anything to you. It is too late to protect you. It is not efficient to use the power of the country to save materials and points to directly upgrade those large shelters. Not to mention post-disaster reconstruction, I feel like I have emigrated to Mars and flown into the universe in a few years 😁😁

The farming development in the early stages was quite interesting, and the results were good, but later the author's thoughts ran away from readers who complained that the plot was dull. I don't know whether the general direction of the author's writing was originally like this or whether it was to cater to some readers' ideas.

In fact, I have never quite understood the purpose of building the Great Wall to defend against insects. Wouldn't that thing be able to dig tunnels and monitor hundreds of meters away? If an insect digs a tunnel thousands of meters underground, then it will be eaten directly behind the detour...🙂

Recently, some people have complained that the plot is mediocre, and I would like to hear your opinions.

Too boring to watch. The order of the apocalypse has not collapsed, there is no plot of struggle for survival, and there are no points of conflict. After reading almost 300 chapters, the protagonist is just changing resources and upgrading the shelter. It's so boring. Whether it is an apocalyptic theme or not, there must be contradictions and conflicts to have a wonderful storyline. If you don't write about evolutionary superpowers, then everyone is an ordinary person, and the protagonist is also the bottom struggling to survive in the apocalypse. Otherwise, there will be evolution. Whether it is an ordinary person or evolution, the prerequisite must be that the order has collapsed or is gradually collapsing or is on the verge of collapse. Otherwise, here we are, what can you do, and what can others do? No matter who farts in the shelter, they can come to you to talk about life. It's incredible that I can write 100 chapters.

I drew the base I wanted

It's a bit confusing. It's easy to heat up a closed space, but it's useless to reheat an open space. Therefore, if you don't recover the heat lost through ventilation, your shelter won't be able to heat up. Is it so difficult for the ventilation system of the shelter to be direct exhaust? Have we all become primitive people and have our HVAC engineering skills been lost?

My god, it's so rigorous. Except for the system, almost everything is traceable. I read this book after reading a bunch of fast-food novels such as Doomsday Shelter. It felt like a primary school student's essay that had been approved for a year suddenly asked me to review it. A top article There are actually a lot of redundant explanations and the theoretical explanation part of the article is a bit bloated But it is also because of this that it makes some plots more exciting I feel that this article can almost be said to be a textbook for apocalyptic novels (in terms of setting)

Damn it, I just found out that this book is number one on the bestseller list. Congratulations!