Monster Synthesis Master

What should I say about this novel? After reading Chapter 660, at least I understand why my grades are not good now. The plot drags, drags, drags! Can't distinguish the key points, it feels like there is no outline. I have wasted too much time in the wasteland and failed to see the advancement of science and technology, almost in one step. So the question is, can the technological development of a few star clusters of advanced civilizations be inferior to a few parts? And that parrot, I'm really convinced. It was just a joke in the beginning. Don't drag it on for so long. Just abandon it as soon as possible. Why don't you just leave it in the wasteland to retire? With so many forces following along, it's the same as trying to fight a warship with a few mice in real life. What's the use? It's the same after one shot. There are 1,600 people in total, only half of the players. Isn't this a big deal? This design is extremely unreasonable, and the golden finger of the protagonist has not played its role at all. When meeting someone, he will come out with flies and mosquitoes to show off, and the low-level ones will be left in the wasteland to retire. Just like Pokémon, if you can use Mewtwo to solve the problem, you have to put Squirtle on it for a few rounds, Charmander on it for a few rounds... Have you never played this kind of game? It's enough to have a powerful one in your backpack. The green-level Zerg will kill them all across the universe, right? The Diva also had no place to dig a hole to fill, and she dug a hole again by force. The Heartless in Cosmic Plague was made by a banshee. Why does she need a starship if she is so strong? Is this a level 0 civilization? This is level 10 civilization. The writing of a good subject matter is poor, and the forces of low-level maps are not let go, and the leeks are not cut back and forth. You leave the players to do whatever, and the group portraits are written on pets. This is outrageous. The pets have legends, and they are dragging along a few ants. If you drag them with you, you should upgrade them. If you drag them, you should strengthen them with technology. Players should use them. I saw the other channels that were listed on Qidian, but I really couldn't stand it anymore.

Abba Abba, to be honest, I feel that the rhythm is a bit messy now, especially when it comes to monsters. The monsters created by the protagonist are all very humane, but as we all know, the Zerg are a race with high obedience and low autonomy. Although the author has some fun writing it this way, it is very messy and weird, and there are often some loopholes. Maybe it's because I can't control the subject matter. The author's current structure is very similar to Super Mechanic, but overall it is faster than it. For example, suddenly an emperor can stack 99 levels of Wangqi, and suddenly there are 100,000 wild wolves. It feels a bit cheating, and I personally don't like this direction because it already has a "Long Aotian" tendency. In general, I think the first 100 chapters are quite high-quality and were written with care. Now I feel like I am just pushing the outline, without a lot of foreshadowing and details. I hope the author can consider it.

Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it I think the author emphasizes the scope of gang hegemony too much, but makes personal strength have no sense of existence. You can refer to the mechanic next door. His personal strength is extremely outstanding. One person can become an army, which is extremely exciting. The protagonist, the Zerg, is not essentially different from the machine cannon. I feel that the author has gone astray. If he keeps writing about gang wars and so on, the book will become more and more boring and boring, and the results will not increase! My personal suggestion is that if the author thinks it makes sense, just use it. If it doesn't make sense, don't bother with me.

After watching it, I felt a strong sense of fragmentation between the plots. The style of the joke is very strong, but like the baggage of cross talk, it first doesn't give you a laugh, and second, it rushes down the process without giving you time to think and laugh. The coordination is too poor. The whole book is like Guanyin soil. You can definitely eat it, but you won't be full of it. You can definitely read it, but it's definitely not good.

The first time Zhuifeng read the author's book was in 2012. At that time, he was still a high school student. Now he is married in the blink of an eye, but the author is not yet married 🤔

[Pet Synthesis Creativity] Flea·Nanorobot·Signal Base Station/Upgrade to Add Explosives Nanoflea Acquire intelligence and can combine different functions through remote signal command

Lion King + Special Gene Liquid + Zerg Regeneration Gene = Undead Lion King. ps: It is an aging male lion. Once, it was also majestic in its own territory, but not many things can withstand the erosion of time. It was defeated by the new lion and fell from the throne of the Lion King. He is the wisest among lions, with the wisdom of a 12-year-old child. Therefore, he knows that what defeats him is not other lions, but time. It vowed that if someone could make it experience the feeling of youth again, it would always be loyal to him. ...... I just read this novel. And it seems like this is the first time I have written such a long book review, so please give me a thumbs up (┯_┯).

Little turtle + frying pan + thorns = anti-armored turtle Passive: Each point of constitution adds an additional 2 points of defense, and 15% of the total attack value is returned to the attacker Skill 1 Head-shrinking turtle: The anti-armored turtle retracts its body into its shell, increasing its defense by 200%, but it cannot move at all during the period (PS: How can I run with its legs in) Skill 2 Rocket Head Mallet: The anti-armored turtle uses its powerful head explosive power and invincible iron head to inflict damage of 150% of the enemy's defense value (PS: Hit me, I have an iron head) Skill 3: Roll, Baby Turtle: Use inertia to quickly retract into the shell and launch a collision with the enemy, causing 200% of the defense value damage, and a 15% chance of causing 2s dizziness to yourself (PS: Don't roll, I'm dizzy)

Although the setting of the book at the beginning was that the protagonist traveled to the game and became an NPC, I still felt that the style of the game changed when players joined later. It doesn't feel as good as just setting it to the real world. If you add players, there will be too many variables and constraints.

It's too watery. There are already 300 chapters and the game hasn't been released yet.

See chapter twenty. I don't know if the author has watched Super Mechanic. I feel that the protagonist is similar to Great Mechanic Han in many places. For example, the lucky value at the beginning is 1. Of course, I know it will change later. For example, the protagonist has the idea of ​​​​taking advantage of the player, which is also similar. Occupational divisions are similar, but also different. A main quest that has not been developed in the previous life has also been developed. That's it for now. After reading The Super Mechanic and then reading this book, I will inevitably be picky.

You can go to Victoria first, solve the problem, and then meet with the first sequence. The first sequence should invite the protagonist to drink tea. At this time, the first sequence will definitely do something to the protagonist. After all, in their eyes, the first sequence is low-level, but there is a mechanical fortress, and then become the boss to work on aliens. When fighting against the first sequence, you can find that many high-level officials are from alien stars. Or maybe you are dissatisfied in the first sequence at the beginning, but later you are impressed by the protagonist's domineering spirit, and follow the protagonist to do things Collect a wave of people to come to the 3.0 Era and get in touch with the larger universe. Players can go to complete tasks every week, and the protagonist can let his players go, establish a power control area, develop the Zerg, and the protagonist provides protection Then you can discover something about the origin of civilization in the wasteland (and other planets), such as ancient Egypt and the Pharaohs. After all, it is a novice planet and there are big problems You can also update some other races, such as elves, titans, goblins and so on Because the author said before that there are version 6.0 And more, the map may be very large ———————————————————— Pets 1. Space-time worm: build wormholes, link locations 2. Parasitic beasts: parasitize others, control others 3. Developer: Brain is a very np specializing in scientific research 4. Starborn: Refining star core, and then it can be turned into a weapon or core energy source 5. Doraemon: Cross out the treasure box (bushi)/ 5. Ordinary ornamental flowers: can change the planet's climate on a large scale to suit human survival 6............................. First time

It's an okay book, overall, its flaws outweigh its flaws. There are a lot of minor issues at the front, but they are bearable. The ending is also okay. Although it cannot be said to be amazing, it is much better than most novels. The logic of the book is generally complete, but as the author said in his final remarks, there are not many flaws overall, but there are still some small errors in the proportion between versions.

I just saw him and the reporter looking at each other, and I wanted to ask if there is a female protagonist. Is the female protagonist the reporter?

Mouse King's Diary ①: After this Mouse King escaped from the ugly Link by a trick, he was as carefree and happy as a fairy. The white mouse girl next door flirted with this Mouse every day, but what kind of mouse was this Mouse? She remained unmoved in the face of this temptation. She didn't lick my hair to tell me what she liked. She just coveted my Mouse's body. She was despicable. Of course, if she was more careful, it would not be impossible. This mouse is hungry again. Rattlesnakes are always good. After all, it is impossible to find food. You can only survive by going out and fishing. This mouse is the king of the desert. Can being the king of the desert be called laziness? And the rattlesnake smells really good!

To be honest, I am getting better and better at writing, and I have ordered them all so far. 1 The Zerg setting should have many types of soldiers + powerful explosives, and can be restrained by attributes. Now it is completely written as individual power. If the setting does not meet the requirements, it should not be set as Zerg in the first place 2 The author may not have played online games. This world view is based on planets. There are hundreds or even thousands of people in a small gang. The top gangs are still wealthy bosses, and at least tens of thousands of people are needed. It takes n top gangs to gather 100 people. Don't talk about elites. Normal online game elite gangs with high execution ability can have 20-30 people in a gang. 3 love lines. If you meet a woman, you will like the protagonist, but the protagonist doesn't like it. Otherwise, write the heroine as the main character, or don't write it. Single female protagonist and double female protagonists are fine. You have written it, but it seems that you have not written it

I have read Chapter 58 so far and have a few thoughts. One is that the author suppresses the protagonist's ability. There is obviously no limit on the number of the protagonist's abilities, but the protagonist upgrades many times without using gold fingers, which wastes health points. In my opinion, the core of the book is synthesis. As a result, after the protagonist synthesized 4 monsters in the early stage, he never synthesized them. The other is that the author has repeatedly emphasized that the protagonist will be reborn six years later, but the protagonist's performance has always been unexpected. There is also the fat man. So far, the effect shown by the fat man is really minimal. Finally, there is a setting of luck value. Fatty is lucky 9. The label means that all wishes come true (it seems to be, I forgot the details). The protagonist's luck value exceeds that of Fatty, and the result is unlucky... Anyway, the protagonist has not accomplished anything so far, and there is a lot of trouble. The rhythm is too unreasonable.

Rabbit + Horseshoe + Four-leaf Clover = Lucky Rabbit Racial Talent Good Luck (increases one's own luck) Luck Blessing (can avoid enemy attacks with a probability) Disaster Offset (can resolve certain disasters)

Isn't it bad to be alone? You have to bring a good-for-nothing fat guy. Don't say that the fat guy is lucky and the protagonist is lower. Low luck just means bad luck, but it doesn't mean bad luck. It's good to be alone in the early stage, just like Han Xiao in the Mechanic, aren't they all the same person?

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It feels a bit like the Super Mechanic, but I can't write it like that. I personally think it's too grinding and the layout can't be opened.

This is incomparable with the Mechanic. The Mechanic actually has his flaws. The most enjoyable one is in the Planet Chapter. He knows the plot of the hidden characters and so on. The pace is fast and the impact is strong. After reading it, I just cut leeks to develop. But this book... There is no main line in the whole book (Although The Mechanic does not say it clearly, the hidden line is to be an NPC. (C) If you don't improve your strength, you will die easily), but in this book, except for the beginning and escape, I didn't understand the development of the gang at all. It took a long time to develop, and I wrote almost a fifth of it. I still worked within the rules and planned step by step. I haven't used synthetic animals much. Can it be a little violent? This kind of novel originally relies on golden fingers. Quickly upgrade to widen the gap. Soldiers only appear in twenty chapters, and then they are gone after a swipe... Compared with the early stage of Mechanic, on the planet, go on a killing spree, use golden fingers, and have a full sense of rhythm, instead of slowly developing the Gouba gang, nmd, the gang leader is only level 25-30, below the company commander Not as good as any of the guards captains. Many spelling mistakes or bad seals, and then forget to fill in the holes. The best way is to be a killer, mow the grass without a pair, steal money and get treasures as a treasure hunter, boast about upgrades, kill gangsters, and then escape from Sandu, trap incoming soldiers, divert trouble to the east, and explode troops to eat up the Wasteland Gang. Alas, I can't watch anymore.

Boss, there is no need to forcefully write emotional scenes, it feels a bit stiff

Lizard + Alien Radiation Energy + Cockroach = Alien Crustacean Ability: 1. Alien Energy Breath Alien energy fusion is formed in the Alien Crustacean Lizard. The energy in the body is endless, which will cause the Shell Lizard to grow continuously. After continuous enhancement, it will be proportional to the body consumption. It can mobilize the alien energy to spray from the mouth 2. Toxin resistance Characteristics of Cockroach The fusion of sex and lizard characteristics makes it resistant to most toxins 3. Flight With wings on its back, it can fly 4. Self-healing A steady stream of energy can make his body recover quickly 5. Severed limbs The tail can be severed and then explode Don't ask, it's a second creation of Godzilla

What can I say, Xiaobai pretends to be a good writer, no one has a strong character, all the descriptions are blunt, everything is a blunt and embarrassing way to praise the protagonist, and many places are just pure words. The reaction of the boss (the legendary killer, who was shocked that a threat that was not a threat actually had a panic reaction? Are you still trying to show off in front of the protagonist during an assassination?) The reaction of the elite (the boss's bodyguard's first reaction after encountering a problem was unexpectedly impossible, and then cursed? Do you have to see it yourself before arranging troops?) A small suggestion, you can take a look at (Da Feng's watchman) instead of pushing it, the people in it have a strong character, and their style is somewhat similar to yours, but a bit more slutty. Of course, if you deliberately write a noob pretentious article, just pretend that I don't exist (￣▽￣)~~ ps: I don't know if you will delete the comment, but it will be fine. After all, I am not qualified to make irresponsible remarks. Sorry to bother you.

Pet imagination post: Living dead/ghosts (green and above) + medium thermal weapons (green) + high concentration of fire element agglomeration (blue) = withered creatures (blue) [Wither]: Normal attacks cause a negative state that can be cleared on the target (the duration is very short, the specific effect of the negative state depends on the surrounding environment) [Guest from the Other Side]: Cannot recover voluntarily Blood, immune to all buffs [Grudge]: After fighting the same target more than twice, starting from the third time, all attributes of each battle will be temporarily increased by 30% Giant ooze monster (dark green) + gene repair liquid (green and above) + magic blood (blue) = slime (light blue) [Magic Beloved]: immune to all physical damage, spell damage × 500% [Magic Gel]: Produce a capsule that can restore 10% of the current blue bar [Gene Plasticity]: Can disguise its own cells into any biomass (irreversible) Ancient Fungi (Blue) + Router/Radar/Portable Signal Base Station (Green or Light Blue) + Psychic Crown (Blue) = Zero Realm Mushroom (Dark Blue) [Psychic Undercurrent]: Enter in advance The instruction is to indiscriminately transform the subconscious of creatures within a certain range after the child body matures (the speed of transformation depends on the mental resistance of the affected person) [Rapid Split]: The hyphae spread rapidly in a certain direction, or launch a spore bomb at the target to generate a new colony [Composite Spore]: The spores are extremely light in weight and have excellent energy conductivity, and can build energy or information transmission channels

As the first novel that I can subscribe to from beginning to end, I just want to say, Zhuge Villager, get up and code.

"Super God" has too many shadows, this book

Selling dog meat in sheep's clothing is the result of synthesis.