This Sword Cultivator Is a Little Too Steady

Read the first one hundred and twenty chapters. The biggest feeling it gave me was that it was forceful. Forcibly adding settings, forcing sensationalism, and forcing plot killing. Fundamentally speaking, it is the author's lack of writing power. As the saying goes, if you have never eaten pork, you have also seen pigs running away. Let's do a brief analysis. First of all, the setting of sword cultivation is very powerful. Everyone who plays RPGs knows that basically every profession has many schools, but the sword cultivation in this book is very single. Moreover, forcibly adding a setting that only points to strength, and then classifying speed as an escape technique, this setting is very useless. How can one be strong without sacrifice? If it is reasonable to say that swordsmen give up defense in exchange for damage, then why can they make up for it through messy "escape techniques"? So what did they sacrifice? Secondly, let's talk about forced sensationalism. Among all online novels, the one that moved me the most was the part about defending the city in Crazy Lich. Through the contrast between several warriors, the bloody fighting and selfless dedication of the warriors of the Lan Kingdom are demonstrated. But the sacrifices in the ruins in this book are very dry. Let's talk about the plot. I don't understand that the protagonist is not suitable for joining the establishment team. Because the protagonist grows up very quickly, unless the team is written as a very important part in a large space, otherwise there will inevitably be a "small team" plot like this in this book, and then what? It can only be killed through plot. What about the changes they made to the protagonist's life? Some change the protagonist's character, some help the protagonist grow, some provide certain opportunities, and some change the plot. What about this book? It seems like he was just given an escape technique. As for game balance, I won't talk about it. Anyway, most game articles, unless the author is very good at settings, or directly borrows an existing system, will easily collapse. This is also a common problem in this type of novels. Overall, 3/5 points. I'm even more looking forward to the author's next book. If this is the first one, the writing is still okay.

The writing in the first four volumes is really clever, and I won't talk about the setting and other minor issues. The flaws are not hidden, and I can finish it in one go. There are two things that I think are bad. One is that the author wrote a vague sword sect, but the sword sect was not established at all. Apart from the author's self-satisfaction, what's the point of joining the Sword Sect? Did you use Sword Sect to speed up the upgrade? Or are you using the Sword Sect to attack the underworld? None, not even a few new skills. I was expecting the author to write about a sword sect of the Xuanyuan Sword Sect that was different from the swordsmen, but he didn't. The second thing is that the more I write later, the more I write it, the more it sounds like a beacon fire novel. The smell is too strong and I can't stand it.

I don't know if there are too many protagonists using swords. Now that I see a book in which the protagonist uses a sword, I don't want to read it. I'm probably not the only one who feels this way. No matter how well written it is, I will give a discount to the book if the protagonist uses a sword.

See it's finished. I have to say that I found a treasure. This book is much better than I expected. It becomes more and more exciting in the later stages, but the later updates are unstable (fortunately, I started the book after it was finished, otherwise it would have been extremely uncomfortable to follow the updates). With more than 10 years of experience as a book reader, it feels increasingly difficult to find books that suit my taste. I have read the ones at the top of the monthly list, but I feel that the quality has declined compared to before (it may be that my taste has changed after reading too much. The books that stand out to me now are often not necessarily top-notch. To be honest, I feel that many good books may have been buried because they are not ranked high enough on various lists). Although this book is a bit old-fashioned in some plot settings, I personally feel that the character creation and overall story are quite good, at least it is very consistent with my personal taste. Of course there are problems, but the flaws outweigh the advantages. The only thing I want to say is that I hope the author will change the title of the book (although he concluded at the end that he doesn't want to change the title). I didn't plan to read this title at first 😅. It was too cliche and not innovative, and it didn't fit well with the content of the novel. Finally, I look forward to the author's new book. 🌹🌹🌹

I'm a little speechless. The setting given by the author is in a rebirth time-travel game. The biggest advantage of this setting is the precious tasks, activities, and treasures that were known before rebirth. As a result, the progress of the game content is changed by the protagonist later, so what is the significance of this setting? I have only seen a little bit after it was put on the shelves, but this is the point where I feel that this novel is related to the game except for the fact that killing people has experience points, and the other settings are not the settings in the virtual world game novel at all. I feel that as long as some setting instructions are changed, it can be regarded as a fairy novel. For example, the protagonist's soul travels through the fairy world to obtain the game system, and he can rely on killing people to gain experience to upgrade. I think if the setting is changed like this, it can completely become a fairy tale type. I have only read about 130 chapters so far. I don't know if the later chapters are still the same as the previous ones. The settings related to the game are just this system.

I am an 8-year-old bookworm. If you like fairy tales, you can read this book. The story and writing are both okay, and it is still worth reading. Before reading, ignore cheats and systems, and ignore the setting of traveling into the game world. Just think of it as a fairy world. Don't complain about why so many protagonists use swords. Sword cultivators don't need swords to fight with you two.

The master of Shuiyue Temple, as a deputy observer of Tianji, shouldn't he see everything in the world? Why are you always shocked, always surprised, always shaken in your heart, constantly shrinking your pupils, always in disbelief? Is this like a powerful monk who is hundreds of thousands of years old and holds a high position? When he heard about the protagonist's talent as a legendary swordsman, the master of the Sword Sect was also surprised. The master of the Tianji Pavilion had his pupils trembled... Speechless.

It's all booked and written well. To be honest, this is the first time I spent money on an online article. This is not a matter of eunuchs. I want you to write well and ensure quality. Although the early stage was not satisfactory, the writing got better and better later on, and I became completely obsessed with Ji Chuan. I also tried writing articles myself, but gave up quickly. Decide on the topic, sort out the outline, and after writing it once, you have to polish it to see if there are any typos and fill in the gaps. If you accidentally mess up your logic, it is really not easy to be a writer of online articles. In addition, I hope this book can have its own physical book. If it does, no matter how many volumes it is, I will buy it and read it. That's all I can do. I don't want what I consider to be a masterpiece to die prematurely. By the way, I recommend you to revise the front part when you have nothing to do. The front part is indeed too discouraging. Come on, let's encourage each other.

The writing is good and the plot is ok, but I always feel that there is a common problem in novels. When you meet a woman, you will lose your wits (although there is no such thing yet, I saw chapter 27), but there are already signs. I sell some information, meet a woman, and start the next copy. It's also a woman... Really, this is not to say that writing about love or relationships between men and women is not good. The actual problem is that 99% of the authors now do not have that rich emotional experience or their writing skills are completely insufficient in this area. They are even more poisonous than Qiong Yao. As a result, many readers will directly criticize Yu as soon as they see a female protagonist or a harem story! Just follow the formula written in most novels with female protagonists, and combine it with reality. If you can really pick up a girl, you will be damned! Besides, most people are now so deeply involved that even basic social interactions are a problem, and being a girl... Isn't this nonsense? It's really too poisonous to think that the above-mentioned mentally retarded plot will not appear in the future. So far, the writing is good, good luck to the author! Of course, you, the author, have the final say in the novel you write. You don't lack me as a reader, and I don't lack your novel either. It's just my personal opinion and a family opinion. It's best if it works, and it doesn't matter if it doesn't.

After watching Qingqiu, I can no longer bear the poison. I can slowly resist the poison in front of me, but I can't bear it anymore. It has to be plot-killed just to give something to the protagonist, right? A snake that had been raising for fifty years in the Nascent Soul stage was snorted to death by Yi Lianxu? Then the one in the Nascent Soul stage was killed by a sword from the protagonist in the Golden Core stage? It's really unbearable. Even if this is the case, you can change it to Lianxu, which can accept serious injuries. It has to be written to death, and it has to be killed by the protagonist. It is so awesome that it is invincible in the same realm. The result? Killed by someone else. When I see it now, I don't see the highlight moments of the protagonist at all. They are all about following someone behind to pick up oil leaks, and picking up various kinds of things. My savior's ashes are comfortable to use, right?