The First Saint of Kunlun

This book has shortcomings and advantages. As a fairy tale, it is unqualified, but as a romance novel, it is excellent. Everyone in the book has a vivid and vivid role. Ao Ye, who loves to be drunk and crazy, is the biggest laugh in the book. The eight princes who love to roast game, the boy who licks dogs, and the master who is like an old father, these characters are all fresh in people's memory. The heroine Xiao Yu is more like a lifelike character. The aloofness and equal dealings in the early stage have laid the foundation for readers' favorability towards her. In the middle stage, Ao Long Yu and Xiao Yu's "split personality" are opposites but have something in common (like Jiang Lan), which directly establishes the dragon. The sugar giving session in the later stage gives people a small gesture but also a warm feeling. It is hard not to love this pair of CPs. The male protagonist's "mournousness" makes this character stand out. He always has some strange thoughts in his mind. What caused Xiaoyu's leg to be cut off? Will the child of a dragon and a human be born as an egg or as a child? Isn't it time to find a mistress for the master? There is also the psychological description of "usurping the throne" that vividly displays the character's personality, so as the male protagonist, he is successful. The emotional line may be the biggest advantage of this book. It is not like most books. I don't know when and how I fell in love with it. I don't know why I fell in love with it. Is it just because of the gentleness? And then you fell in love? And then the party fight started out of nowhere? This book does not have the common problems of most online novels. Instead, it directly points out the changes in Xiao Yu's feelings for the male protagonist through the dialogue between Junior Sister Lin and Xiao Yu. This kind of slowly drawn and clearly felt emotional line is the core of a romance novel! It's not because I'm handsome, because I'm handsome, or because I'm talented. A truly lovable text should be about heart-to-heart communication, and then slowly getting closer! The shortcomings do not affect this book, but if it can be optimized, it can bring this book to a new level, such as: The main plot is not fascinating, maybe because the emotional line is so exciting, which makes the plot bleak, but the main plot is like a straight line with no end in sight. I don't want to guess why Gu Yu died? What is heaven? What is the Godhead? I don't have this idea in my mind. My opinion is that there are too few foreshadowings. If there are enough foreshadowings, it will make me look forward to the subsequent plot more, instead of just walking in a straight line and not caring about where the covered end is. Secondly, the fighting scenes are not good enough. As a book about cultivating immortals, fighting scenes are indispensable. As a Gou Liu, a little less is fine. However, if the fighting scenes are just the same nine-ox power to blast the opponent with one punch, it will be okay to watch it once or twice, but it will be boring after watching it too much. Most of the fighting scenes in this book feel like hand-to-hand fighting, Jindan fights hand-to-hand, Anti-Xu fights hand-to-hand, Juexian fights hand-to-hand, and magical powers do not exist. When it comes to fighting scenes, in fact, the strength of this realm is very vague. I only know that now it is the golden elixir, now it is the human immortal, and now it is the absolute immortal. This book does not give a good positioning for the strength of these realms. For example, the golden elixir can break a mountain, the human immortal can pick up the stars and the moon, and the absolute immortal can blow away dust for thousands of miles. This book did not, and only gave me, oh, the absolute immortal can only beat the heavenly immortal, why can he beat it? Just set it up to win. But in general, it has more advantages than disadvantages. The advantages of emotional drama cover up most of the shortcomings of this book. As a romance novel, it is one of the sweeter books I have ever read. If I have a monthly pass, I will buy it!

I have subscribed to the whole book, but overall it is a bit disappointing. Many people think this book is a bit strange, and the word strange is very accurate In my opinion, the fundamental reason is that the author does not have strong foundation and writing skills, but always wants to control the huge world view. Mysterious language and foreshadowing often lead to half-sentences leaving readers confused. For example, why there are so many spies in Kunlun, and why the heroine's mother is so unkind to the heroine, were not made clear in the end. The inexplicable omission of language and plot greatly affects the reading experience The logic of the characters and the story is low. In the early stage, the female protagonist with such an important foreign identity was almost killed by a few golden elixir wastes. Such a powerful sect requires the male protagonist to be a hero to save the beauty... The master of the male and female protagonists with such important status did not even give them any life-saving equipment. If it weren't for the fact that the male protagonist died so many times during the cheating and training sessions, the master would have let the male protagonist go out with confidence... Just talking about this alone would be too much to give examples one by one Behind the plainness is the lack of writing power, and the basic elements such as fighting scenes and skill training are too simple. As a romance novel, it is still passable 😄

The problem with this book is that the protagonist wants to hide his cultivation but keeps fighting. This will make readers more and more frustrated as they read. There must be a limit to pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. It is still the same tone after more than 200 chapters. The protagonist has no growth curve (not referring to his cultivation) and it is difficult to read.

It's rare that after reading it, your impetuous heart will calm down. The overall flow is very smooth, different from other books, it follows the upgrade flow, upgrades step by step, and moves forward slowly. The content is beautiful, with a single female protagonist, the time is accurate, and there are no bugs (at least I didn't find any) Finally, this novel is very good, I pinned it to the top, subscribed to it in full, and read it several times. Recommended to see😊😊

After reading it, I thought about it for a long time and decided to briefly comment on it so that new book friends can understand it more easily. When I first started reading this book, I had a very bad impression. I felt that the writing level of this junior high school student was all simple vernacular sentences. In addition, the author was incompetent in naming names (the same is true for new books), so I almost gave up on it. However, after reading a few chapters, I became more and more familiar with it. Although it is all simple and vernacular, it is strangely attractive. Coupled with the indifferent character of the protagonist, it will make people feel that this is the taste. This writing style does not have a high amount of information, but it is easy for people to read. It is inexplicably interesting, and it feels like a poor man's version of Cologne. The author doesn't like haircuts either. There is nothing sinister about the whole book, it is written in one go and very enjoyable. Although it is not a masterpiece, it is definitely an underrated masterpiece. However, I still want to talk about what I think is lacking, and there are spoilers. 1 There are still some problems with the rhythm of plot advancement. For example, in the later period, the relationship between the male and female protagonists basically stagnated (although it has reached a very deep level) and lacks some new ideas. It would actually be quite hurt if this happens in a novel with a single female protagonist. 2 The protagonist is a little too indifferent. Of course, it may be due to the limitations of the author's writing skills, which lacks a sense of substitution and interaction (the new book is much better). 3 The system is really annoying. It is not very useful. It does not promote the story well. It will not appear at all in the later stage. To be honest, it is better to say that the protagonist is just talented and can practice quickly. I'm also a little worried about the new book. However, the shortcomings do not hide the good points. Overall, it is a book worth reading.

It's rare that it's plain and not boring, and it handles the emotional line very well.

After reading more than two hundred chapters, I now only have a strong feeling of "I will die if I hear the Tao in the morning" I think this novel has truly created a naturally occurring world of immortality. The author and we are just bystanders rather than controllers Even if this book is now a eunuch, I will not regret reading the author's hundreds of thousands of words 😁

After watching half of it, I found that it was cheating, but not fully enabled, and that it was invincible, but not completely invincible. The realm is high, but everyone who knows is dead. Even if you say you are stubborn, you are not very stubborn. After watching it for two days, it was mediocre, but this is how I felt about cultivating immortality. I don't know if there will be an explosion in the later plot. After all, wealth will not return to its hometown, and you will walk at night in brocade clothes. I'm still looking forward to what kind of plot this author will write about pretending to be a slap in the face.

I am promising

Is this the title of the book "Millennium Invincible"? Still married, instead of the girlfriend changed to the wife, or changed the title of the book? This Yangyang almost lost the book

This book is really like "the sound of great sound sweeps away the shadows", like "pushing away the clouds and mist to see the blue sky". It allows readers like us to see hope and the future! A bolt from the blue and enlightenment may not be enough to describe it. The author's articles are rare; the clouds in Wushan and the flowing water in the Yangtze River are even more incomparable to the author's literary talent! Huang Zhongdalu is so enlightening! Your candle illuminates the world and you can see thousands of miles; the rain and dew bring benefits to all directions! Through your profound words, I seem to see your majestic and majestic posture; I seem to see your wisdom and demeanor with your hand as big as a raft, writing articles all over the world; I seem to see your heroic demeanor with your sword, looking around and pointing out the mountains and rivers! The author can be called an extraordinary person who knows the astronomy from above and geography from below.

The writing style is average and slightly above average, and the routines are 70% new and slightly old-fashioned, but. . Just, I collected it inexplicably, I read it inexplicably, I subscribed inexplicably, and there is nothing special about it. Overall comment: I always have something wrong with this book? ? ?

This title actually dissuaded many people. When people asked me what novel I was reading, I was embarrassed to say it 😅😅😅😅

There have been a lot of novels like this lately? Is it mass-produced?

Wouldn't it be better to change it to "My Taoist Companion is a Dragon"?

I feel like this is a novel ruined by its title. . . . . To be honest, I read this title several times without clicking on it. . . .

It's my first time to order a book in full, can you please add some details? Also, I originally wanted to recharge 30 and then make a full reservation, but I didn't know what I clicked on and quickly recharged 300. Why did I enter the password so fast in that second? . . Want to cry

This novel seems to be written like a running account, but I also want to read it strangely. The author should use this book to practice his writing skills. It can be seen that he is indeed a novice. I still recommend reading it. It is a good idea.

The beginning of the game will blow up the sun, I am going to write a book

Didn't I just post a chapter review in the new book saying that Tiandao Foundation Establishment was too pretentious, and I couldn't stand it and was banned? It's worthy of being the foundation of heaven. It's hard to say

It may be inferior as a fairy tale, but as a romance novel it is first-rate.

So I've read more than two hundred chapters and I haven't seen Kunlun fall.

The book is almost finished, and my fan level is still that of a disciple. Is this my problem or the author's?

It's a bit comical. No matter what realm the protagonist is in, the author's description of the fight is the same. Flash to the back, first a wave of death whispers "Looking for me?" And then punches him to death. Now that I have reached Juexian, I feel that there is no difference from the previous Jindan fights. The main reason is that the author has not written anything else. But this is not a fighting article. It would actually look better if you skip the fighting.

Can't you just say you don't like it? It's not enough to tell you the plot, but the chapter review contains a lot of spoilers. A manager with a glass heart who is rare in the book world, you are awesome, I look down upon you

This book is written in a dull and ordinary way, and the text is not amazing. How can I keep reading? Oh, I really have a connection with this book.

The ending was almost boring after reading it, but it's the best ending and at least it's not bad. I don't know why. Judging from the ending, I could have written at least about 100,000 more words. It made me feel like I was rushing.

Ten dollars is enough. To put it simply, the content is that the protagonist of One Punch is an ordinary cultivator. There are thousands of spells and magic weapons, and all fights can be solved with one punch. This is true from Qi refining to immortality

It's very rare that I, a bookworm for decades, have read the entire book...

After reading the author's next book, I came back to read this one and found out that the two books are connected. I was very surprised.