The First Saint of Kunlun

The writing style is average and slightly above average, and the routines are 70% new and slightly old-fashioned, but. . Just, I collected it inexplicably, I read it inexplicably, I subscribed inexplicably, and there is nothing special about it. Overall comment: I always have something wrong with this book? ? ?

This book has shortcomings and advantages. As a fairy tale, it is unqualified, but as a romance novel, it is excellent. Everyone in the book has a vivid and vivid role. Ao Ye, who loves to be drunk and crazy, is the biggest laugh in the book. The eight princes who love to roast game, the boy who licks dogs, and the master who is like an old father, these characters are all fresh in people's memory. The heroine Xiao Yu is more like a lifelike character. The aloofness and equal dealings in the early stage have laid the foundation for readers' favorability towards her. In the middle stage, Ao Long Yu and Xiao Yu's "split personality" are opposites but have something in common (like Jiang Lan), which directly establishes the dragon. The sugar giving session in the later stage gives people a small gesture but also a warm feeling. It is hard not to love this pair of CPs. The male protagonist's "mournousness" makes this character stand out. He always has some strange thoughts in his mind. What caused Xiaoyu's leg to be cut off? Will the child of a dragon and a human be born as an egg or as a child? Isn't it time to find a mistress for the master? There is also the psychological description of "usurping the throne" that vividly displays the character's personality, so as the male protagonist, he is successful. The emotional line may be the biggest advantage of this book. It is not like most books. I don't know when and how I fell in love with it. I don't know why I fell in love with it. Is it just because of the gentleness? And then you fell in love? And then the party fight started out of nowhere? This book does not have the common problems of most online novels. Instead, it directly points out the changes in Xiao Yu's feelings for the male protagonist through the dialogue between Junior Sister Lin and Xiao Yu. This kind of slowly drawn and clearly felt emotional line is the core of a romance novel! It's not because I'm handsome, because I'm handsome, or because I'm talented. A truly lovable text should be about heart-to-heart communication, and then slowly getting closer! The shortcomings do not affect this book, but if it can be optimized, it can bring this book to a new level, such as: The main plot is not fascinating, maybe because the emotional line is so exciting, which makes the plot bleak, but the main plot is like a straight line with no end in sight. I don't want to guess why Gu Yu died? What is heaven? What is the Godhead? I don't have this idea in my mind. My opinion is that there are too few foreshadowings. If there are enough foreshadowings, it will make me look forward to the subsequent plot more, instead of just walking in a straight line and not caring about where the covered end is. Secondly, the fighting scenes are not good enough. As a book about cultivating immortals, fighting scenes are indispensable. As a Gou Liu, a little less is fine. However, if the fighting scenes are just the same nine-ox power to blast the opponent with one punch, it will be okay to watch it once or twice, but it will be boring after watching it too much. Most of the fighting scenes in this book feel like hand-to-hand fighting, Jindan fights hand-to-hand, Anti-Xu fights hand-to-hand, Juexian fights hand-to-hand, and magical powers do not exist. When it comes to fighting scenes, in fact, the strength of this realm is very vague. I only know that now it is the golden elixir, now it is the human immortal, and now it is the absolute immortal. This book does not give a good positioning for the strength of these realms. For example, the golden elixir can break a mountain, the human immortal can pick up the stars and the moon, and the absolute immortal can blow away dust for thousands of miles. This book did not, and only gave me, oh, the absolute immortal can only beat the heavenly immortal, why can he beat it? Just set it up to win. But in general, it has more advantages than disadvantages. The advantages of emotional drama cover up most of the shortcomings of this book. As a romance novel, it is one of the sweeter books I have ever read. If I have a monthly pass, I will buy it!

This title actually dissuaded many people. When people asked me what novel I was reading, I was embarrassed to say it 😅😅😅😅

There have been a lot of novels like this lately? Is it mass-produced?

Wouldn't it be better to change it to "My Taoist Companion is a Dragon"?

I feel like this is a novel ruined by its title. . . . . To be honest, I read this title several times without clicking on it. . . .

It's my first time to order a book in full, can you please add some details? Also, I originally wanted to recharge 30 and then make a full reservation, but I didn't know what I clicked on and quickly recharged 300. Why did I enter the password so fast in that second? . . Want to cry

This novel seems to be written like a running account, but I also want to read it strangely. The author should use this book to practice his writing skills. It can be seen that he is indeed a novice. I still recommend reading it. It is a good idea.

The beginning of the game will blow up the sun, I am going to write a book

I have subscribed to the whole book, but overall it is a bit disappointing. Many people think this book is a bit strange, and the word strange is very accurate In my opinion, the fundamental reason is that the author does not have strong foundation and writing skills, but always wants to control the huge world view. Mysterious language and foreshadowing often lead to half-sentences leaving readers confused. For example, why there are so many spies in Kunlun, and why the heroine's mother is so unkind to the heroine, were not made clear in the end. The inexplicable omission of language and plot greatly affects the reading experience The logic of the characters and the story is low. In the early stage, the female protagonist with such an important foreign identity was almost killed by a few golden elixir wastes. Such a powerful sect requires the male protagonist to be a hero to save the beauty... The master of the male and female protagonists with such important status did not even give them any life-saving equipment. If it weren't for the fact that the male protagonist died so many times during the cheating and training sessions, the master would have let the male protagonist go out with confidence... Just talking about this alone would be too much to give examples one by one Behind the plainness is the lack of writing power, and the basic elements such as fighting scenes and skill training are too simple. As a romance novel, it is still passable 😄