My Invisible Combat Maid

Summary: This is a collection of short stories with a main line, written in the ultra-slow narrative technique of daily light novels. I have read Chapter 400. How should I put it? I feel that the separation between front and back is too serious. The beginning is actually okay. The story has no background and other explanations are pretty good. It has a strong light novel feel. But what happens after that? I don't know the author very well, does he have an outline or what is the logical plot arrangement, but the progression of this plot is really hard to accept. Author, you need to consider that you are writing a novel, not a biography or a collection of short stories. Maybe the author feels that he is writing about daily life, but no matter from which aspect he looks at it, the story has nothing to do with daily life. At the same time, the extremely large number of branch plots and the extremely detailed background descriptions of the small characters have made it impossible for me to figure out what the main plot is talking about. Maybe the author feels that daily life is just a series of short stories one after another, but the problem now is that the author has written the main line well, and it is completely unfolding like a drama. Then a new character or a new scene appears, and then starts to recall, or background description, or other messy things, and the plot is dragged down and cannot be unfolded at all. One step into the main plot, there may have been two short stories interspersed in the middle, which even made me have to go back and see what the author had written previously. Then there is the sense of fragmentation of the plot. In the beginning, the protagonist sneaks into a girls' school for the purpose of eating, which is completely OK. Just when I thought the author might start from the classic contradiction of boys entering a girls' school to show us the daily life in the extraordinary world in his mind, the author uses events one by one (no matter whether it is logical or not) Tell me this is a real drama, so that's okay, but after that, it intersperses endlessly with content that has little to do with the plot, and repeatedly struggles with the problem of the Virgin Mary with twisted logic (The Virgin Mary's character itself has no problem, but a large part of the characters in the plot simultaneously display the unlimited Virgin Mary character and syncretism, which gives me the feeling that both the protagonist and other characters are tools used to connect these logically twisted branch lines) , which made me feel that my reading experience went from being pretty good at the beginning, to slowly and continuously declining, to the point where I couldn't stand it at all near the 400th chapter, and even felt nauseous. In addition, there is a lot of watering, such as the press conference after the plane crash that I just read recently. There are only a few paragraphs about the press conference itself, but how did the author write it? From the time the dean came to the stage, he spent a lot of time saying that people are watching here, people are watching there, and people are watching everywhere. Then he showed the power map, and then asked, how does this person feel when he sees this map? How does that person feel when he sees this picture? Then, another sentence was said during the press conference, followed by who and what reaction he had when he heard this sentence, and what reaction the other person had when he heard this sentence. After four pictures, the matter was finally settled. To be honest, if it wasn't intentional, I think junior high school students would get 0 points for writing essays like this, which is too much. So I'm sorry, I really can't stand it anymore. I have read the book at Qidian for so many years, and I will leave you with the first long review. It's just too much. To summarize, this is a collection of short stories with a main line written in the ultra-slow narrative technique of daily light novels. It also has unacceptable water content, making the reading experience extremely poor. It's not that I haven't read a really bad book. It's a reading experience that makes people unable to stop reading after reading two chapters. But this book, in terms of evaluation from all aspects alone, is above the passing line in every aspect. It even has a good beginning, but when mixed together, it creates a magical experience where the more you read after the beginning, the more you can't stand it. It even makes people doubt that this is not a work written by an author.

Boys👍

My classmate's house changed it, I feel so ashamed.

The name of this book is "My Invisible Fighter". Ji: a beautiful name for a woman. From the title, we can tell that this book is probably about women. As soon as you enter this book, the style of painting changes suddenly. Ahem, I won't introduce it. (See for yourself🤫) I would like to take this opportunity to teach you how to magically change the title. 1. Grasp the keywords😃(Function: to arouse readers' interest) "The Bizarre Adventures of the Cross-dressing Boss" "I Finally Became a Cross-dressing Boss" "Tips of the Cross-dressing Boss" "My Life of Evading Debt" Two, Seize the feelings (function: make the nostalgic crowd infiltrate) "Thinking of those days..." "Song of My Youth" (it seems to be a coincidence with the title of the book, but don't care about those details 😜) "My Life in a Girls' School" Three, the longer the better, the kind of rap that makes people doubt life. (Effect: Look serious🤓) "Although I am a man, women all think I am a woman, so maybe I am a woman" "Don't think I don't know that you think I am a woman, but in fact I am a man's story" (I felt a little dizzy at the end [f n=14]) FourSeize a point for debate (function: turn an irregular novel into a serious novel) "The Wonderful Effect of Psychological Suggestion" (How to turn a real boy into a real girl?) Five , write a very serious title (function: prevent 404?😅) "101 Secrets Men Have to Tell" (seems like a not-so-serious Yazi) "Keep the original intention, firm belief" (Inspirational text: After several years, I am still so strong, still so poor, still so hungry...) 6. Start with a question(Function: attract readers) "What did this child go through in order to have enough to eat?" "(Fighting for food with a horse, I really live forever.) "Why am I so good at eating? Why am I so good? " "How can I change from a male protagonist to a female protagonist as I act?" Seven. Speech from the Shock Department (the clickbait party needs me) "Shocked! A man sneaked into a girls' school, but no clues were found for more than ten years! "(Criticism and Reflection on Education) "Surprise! A man entered a girls' school for this reason! (It's all for eating, the feeling of the big eater) Miracle! Men can actually sneak into a girls' school. Is this a loss of morality or a distortion of human nature? (Into Morality) 8. I don't know how to classify it (function: it looks fun anyway) "Don't blame me, it's the world that's wrong" (I should have been a woman) "This is a man/woman who is destined to be single. "People" (Forget it, I don't know which one to choose, the key is how to get married if this is the case. Otherwise, it is a gift from the author.) "Invincible's Immortal Operation" (There are too many flaws, I don't know which one to complain about...) "Invincible is so lonely" (This wave of snakeskin moves, dodged my waist.)

Not much to say, just the picture. Finally, if they were in class together, it would probably be this person:

To be honest, this is the inspiration I got from other books The author of that book said that women's clothing can be added in five updates I don't ask for five updates, I hope that because I am so beautiful and enchanting, I can add one more update The reason why I didn't post the photo in the end is because my cat also dressed up as a woman, It's fair for cats to replace their owners

By the way, most of the comments are not very good about this book_(:з∠)_In fact, I feel that the content at the end is a little inconsistent with the beginning. The beginning feels like a gimmick, a bit like some cool articles, where you rely on your superpowers and identity as a man to win over a bunch of girls. However, when you look at the end, it is still a common style. Each special character has his own biography, and everyone has his own unique personality, just like the pet king before who collected pets. Each pet has a different story. This book is about a boy who goes to a girls' school to collect different girls. Different girls also have different stories. However, this collection does not have the element of glamor and passion. It feels like an everyday story in an extraordinary setting, so it will be dissatisfying to some people who are looking for passion and excitement. You should read this book slowly and don't read this book with a traditional hot-blooded slap in the face, "Thirty years in Hexi and thirty years in Hedong" mentality. In fact, compared to Pet King, I think this book Po Po is an improvement. There are some foreshadowings in the book, but there are not many meaningless dialogues and watery plots. However, I would like to raise a few questions, that is, a lot of content in this book does not revolve around the protagonist, but it is not like a group portrait. Although each character is very special, some characters are not closely related to the protagonist. It is as if Popo was written to write a character with rich experiences, and it does not have much effect on the advancement of the plot and the enrichment of the protagonist. For example, the story of Catherine. In fact, when I saw her telling 33 that her mother bit her father to death in front of her because she was bitten by a vampire, I thought it was enough. I could probably guess what happened to Catherine, but then I wrote about Catherine's experience in detail. Although I like this description very much, I don't know why I wrote it here. There may be a story, but it feels like it's not placed in the right place. It feels like the rescue and escape story between 33 and Catherine has been cut off. However, this story explains Catherine's character and the reason why she is obsessed with Lilith very well, and is connected with the previous description of Catherine. I have never written a book, so I don't know much about it. How should the story be inserted? Also, the story of the squid tentacles is also well written, but I always feel that this story is a bit detached. I feel that although this story explains the origin of the squid tentacles, the detailed description of the experience does not have much effect on the advancement of the plot, and the subsequent plot has little connection with the story of the squid tentacles. I feel that I still need a clearer and more coherent main line (that is, the protagonist must have a more convincing reason for doing these things and a clearer goal), and then develop various branch lines outwards, and the description of the branch lines will be somewhat helpful to the development of the main line. In fact, I haven't quite figured it out yet. I clearly know what the main plot is, but it feels like the protagonist enters school because he is too poor at the beginning, and later seems to want to know the truth about his parents, and also seems to help Squidward, which is a bit confusing. It may also be because I always stock up for a while before continuing to watch, so I can't remember some details. My expression is also a bit confusing. Anyway, I still hope that Po Po's book can be better~ and everyone can read this book without being impetuous~

I saw that many friends who came here after seeing the recommendation don't understand why the male protagonist never has enough to eat. He obviously has hands and feet and is very powerful. He can even move bricks to eat. How can he still be reduced to this situation? Even if it's because you don't have an ID card, or the creditor is collecting debts for other reasons, it's even more puzzling to go to Hongye Academy and not eat enough. After all, power practitioners must at least eat enough to be able to practice better. In fact, the author has explained these problems later. Of course, you may not have the patience to wait until later, so I will post pictures as proof first, hoping to solve some of your questions. However, I believe that everyone will not completely agree with this explanation. If you have any different ideas, please feel free to discuss it together. Another point is that this is a parallel fictional world after all. I hope everyone will not use the laws and regulations of the real world to discuss the world in the book. Isn't that just using the sword of the previous dynasty to kill the officials of this dynasty

There is nothing sincere about the title of this book. The name should be written like this: "The Bizarre Adventures of the Cross-dressing Boss" "What did this child go through in order to have enough to eat?" "(Fighting for food with a horse, I really live forever.) "Why am I so good at eating? " "One hundred and one secrets that men have to tell" "I thrive in stimulation" (What is more exciting than playing a girl among women.) "I feel so panicked when the boss looks directly at me" "Psychological suggestion: How to turn a real boy into a real girl? Why am I so good? "Don't blame me, it's the world that's wrong. "(I was originally supposed to be a girl.) "The little secret of a cross-dressing boss" "How do I change from a male protagonist to a female protagonist while acting" "This is a man/woman who is destined to be single" (Forget it, I don't know which one to choose, the key is how to get married if this is the case. Otherwise Sent by the author.) "Invincible Immortal Operations" (There are too many flaws, I don't know which one to complain about...) "Keep the original intention and firm faith" (Inspirational text: After several years, I am still so strong, still so poor, still so hungry...) I have written so much, welcome to add 🙏

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