Demon Slayer: Seraph

Collection: Ghost's name, face, clothing, blood ghost magic or physical abnormality, sad past... Write down the ghost in your heart, it can be detailed or brief. Readers who want to come up with novel characters can comment below. The author will choose a suitable ghost to add to the book, or he will turn into an evil ghost and be killed and rescued by the protagonist, or he will turn into wings to fight alongside the protagonist. By the way, some book friends' comments or posts have disappeared. It should be because some sensitive words have been deleted by the system. Except for posts with disgusting words, no matter how good or bad the author is, they will not be deleted. Book friends' creative ideas accepted: Matsushita, Sleeves, Bone Girl, Haruna, Yagyu Hei, Hojo Tea Temple I will not reply to all the ones I received again, see in the book.

Well, reading this book made me feel very good (like my constipation was cured), my heart was filled with joy, I was amazed, and it was very good at describing the details, which made me feel more relaxed.

I feel that the writing is really good. As for the portrayal of emotions, at least it really makes me feel the sadness. The characters in the original work are also quite consistent. The descriptions of the supporting characters are light and heavy. The plot and logic are ok. I think it is a masterpiece.

Important: Spoilers involved. The writing style of this book is above average, and it is good at describing character interactions, which means that the world the characters live in is more real and easy to understand. This is one of the reasons why I was very disappointed in the later period, because the beauty in the early stage is the most heartbreaking disappointment in the later stage. The author's grasp of character creation is weak. As long as you read carefully, readers can find the deviations between the original characters and the original characters. The differences vary in size. For example, Shuizhu, who is loved by everyone, is taciturn, cold-tempered, and his whereabouts are unknown and unpredictable. Therefore, such a mysterious appearance gives a higher space for secondary creation, and many personality deviations become insignificant. But like the original protagonist, Touzhu, who is nicknamed "Little Angel" by fans, is a mature boy appreciated by nearby residents, a filial son in the eyes of his mother, and a good brother supported by his brothers and sisters. He is considerate and possesses a rare fraternity. This kind of character design is very unique, and any deviation is extremely obvious. In the original work, he has never been prejudiced against ghosts. He understands the tragic past of ghosts. He also understands the difficulties and lack of freedom of ghosts because of his sister. Therefore, even if he kills an evil ghost who has killed countless people, he will not deny his dignity when he is still a human being. He is a ghost-killing warrior who carries out "kindness" to the end. But in this fanfic, he actually laughed after avenging his brothers, instead of smiling bitterly, being silent, angry, crying and laughing, which is a huge and obvious difference from the original character. I pointed out the problem here in this chapter, but I guess the author had his own ideas, so he still didn't make any changes when I posted. Another example: When Butterfly Ninja met the protagonist Kawaliu who was a ghost, she later discovered that the protagonist was a ghost queen who maintained a sense of justice, and her impression of ghosts had changed. Based on the friendly relationship between the two, we can deduce the result of "the butterfly ninja began to accept the ideals of his deceased sister", right? At the same time, facing the real-life example of "three ghosts who can remain rational without eating people (the protagonist, Nako, and the handsome guy)", the butterfly ninja's attitude towards ghosts should logically be greatly improved. Coupled with the protagonist's previous experience of helping, chatting and getting along with each other, Butterfly Ninja's mentality at this time is no longer as extreme as before. Right? However, the author later repeatedly emphasized that Butterfly Ninja's bone-deep hatred for ghosts has not diminished at all. Doesn't that mean that the long-laid emotional route has been wasted? This psychological journey was so poorly written. It can be seen that the author lacks grasp of the changes in the psychological journey of some characters. The much-anticipated chapter 185 has come, and the ending of the battle against the Ghost King is revealed! The Ghost King was seriously injured and was about to die, but in an instant, he burst out with a strong desire to survive, which actually gave him some signs of evolution. Faced with Wu Mei, who was dying and unable to move, the protagonist did not use the ultimate killing move "Sunlight Feather", but just slashed hard with an axe. It was ridiculous! The characteristics that the protagonist has shown in previous plots include: staying calm in the face of danger, perseverance, sticking to his heart, taking decisive action but also retaining a certain amount of empathy, and his IQ has never dropped off the line. I admired him even more when he fought with the mace in the cave, but at this moment, everything collapsed! The plot armor forcibly renews its life, giving Muzan a chance to evolve again and again, causing his strength to greatly increase and his injuries to fully recover. The bruised Demon Slayer Aces are in danger, but Muzan runs away. The cautious, powerful, arrogant, cold-blooded, cruel, decisive, and ambitious ghost king could disintegrate the last line of defense of the human camp in just a few moments. However, faced with the easy-to-get victory once and for all, he ran away. The successive collapses of the characters made me feel extremely uncomfortable. The author destroyed the image of several characters that took hundreds of chapters to build in a short period of time. I felt very bad. I believe that the author himself is also aware of the serious problems of this plot, so in the "Writer's Note" of 185, everyone is asked to ignore this plot and treat it as the protagonist's small universe explodes to kill the ghost king and complete the story. Seeing this, I just want to say that the real story should actually end in Chapter 185. Even if it doesn't end, it shouldn't continue in this way. Narume summons other wind strings for reinforcements, the ghost king eats his own flesh and blood/other ghosts make up for the loss of important parts of the body to escape, and the demon slayer team is threatened and unable to kill (for example, the head pillar is captured, the ghost king orders other ghosts to attack innocent humans in the city), these are more reasonable than forcibly exploding seeds. If someone wants to refute me with "Why can't the protagonist explode the villain's guts?", Let me first say that I also hate plots where the protagonist explodes. Author, I'm leaving first. I have always voted for recommendations before, but I won't vote for it this time. I'm sorry. I wish you better and better as you write.

I also don't understand. The reason why Zhu hates ghosts so much is because he was hurt by ghosts. Why can't he understand that the protagonist has never killed anyone, but he was also hurt by ghosts and forced to become a ghost. No one wants to become a ghost. It is obvious that the whole family was killed by ghosts. One survived, and the other was killed and turned into a ghost. It seems to be the worse one. Can anyone explain it?

Seeing this, I feel too raw 🌿

It's the best among all the Demon Slayer fanfics I've watched.

Good guy, I thought you were a eunuch. You, the author, are really perseverant. I saw that many of the books that stopped updating for a week were basically eunuchs. I didn't expect you to update hundreds of chapters one after another and finish it. It's wonderful.

I don't know what each of you authors are thinking. I have watched the anime. I didn't come to read the novel to see the time-travelers become like aboriginals, knowing nothing and understanding nothing. There are many things in the anime that I regret, such as the protagonist's family at the beginning. I didn't read the anime to get upset, but read the novel to get upset. Why can't the popularity increase? Why don't you feel confident? Fans, time travel, why do time travelers always get ahead? It's because they are foresighted and familiar with the plot. If you write like this, you can't be original. . .

Old school old school writing style, nothing new, generally so-so. But under the circumstances that there are not many good articles about Zhu Mie fan, this complete and neat fan article is still very valuable.