Building a Super-Fantasy World

The protagonist in the author's writing has absolutely no class, which makes reading it very uncomfortable. The protagonist can be said to be one of the top 100 people in the world, but I didn't see any pride in having opened up a new path or the confidence of someone who has achieved success at a young age. Instead, he seems rather humble.

He died from the poison; the Tianyin Sect is too ruthless.

There's no sense of immersion when the protagonist is an indigenous person, especially one with special abilities like this.

Because the physical bodies of the Immortal Emperor's world are different from those of Lu Ming's world, one day when Lu Ming returned to the bamboo forest and saw the divine runes of heaven and earth, he suddenly thought, why not refine the divine runes into his body? But how could he refine it into his body? He pondered this for nine days and nine nights in the bamboo forest.

Knowing that the protagonist only has 500 years to live, he shouldn't be so hesitant in his pursuit of the Dao. With overwhelming strength, why be polite to the Qin Yin Holy Sect? It's just a sword. Even if the protagonist did break it, so what? It's broken, so what? If he's not convinced, then fight him until he is. Every sect has a few spineless cowards.

What's the point of designing the Tianyin Sect like this? ... The protagonist just wiped out over twenty innate masters and tens of thousands of troops, and then he goes to the Tianyin Sect to prove his innocence? The ruthless butcher suddenly becomes a Dao Ancestor, compromising with the weak? ... This character development...

This idea seems really weak. Using oneself as a base to transform and purify spiritual energy? But spiritual energy is finite; a small world can't generate much. What use would the amount you transform be? Using oneself to transform and purify spiritual energy?

That part about the Heavenly Sound Sect was really a bit cruel. Instead of currying favor with a living, breathing person right in front of them, they offended a master of the same level for the sake of a dead object made from someone who had been dead for almost two thousand years. Were these people out of their minds?

Did you not use your brain when you wrote the latest chapters?

It was abandoned just like that. I quite like this style of book, and this one is one of the better ones.