My Pet Beast Is Super Fierce

A good book, a good story, plus originality. But it's a bit annoying to watch. The most interesting thing is the interaction between pets and characters. The negative point is the psychological description of the protagonist, which feels very wrong, like a Japanese light novel translation style mixed with traditional literature. The writing style is like youth literature in Xiaobai's novels. The author carefully wrote the hints of the background and the foreshadowing of the characters, but the description was very blunt. Since there is a star classification, it is necessary to express the role of levels. Hierarchy is unattractive at this point. I just feel that if the star level is high, I will be strong, and if it suddenly becomes high, I will cause trouble.           ， After reading this chapter, I realized that the protagonist is a college student. The protagonist is like an over-protected child who only embodies the need to be strong but does not embody self-reliance.       This book and the Beastmaster Evolver are both original genres, with good settings, good backgrounds, good interaction between humans and pets, and a stable and unique relationship between humans and pets. The old novels in the past had pet charms, and now there are starting with the contracted elf (this is not a Pokémon novel) and the elf leader (this book has a good setting, full of originality, but it is indeed a Pokémon system novel. However, after writing it, I just felt that the protagonist was too real, there was no cover up of the reality, and the drama could not be felt) . It feels like the fate of the protagonist is tragic. As a college student, you must at least have the idea of ​​working hard. Although you may be beaten and give up, you must be determined to die. The protagonist feels like a 12-year-old boy in college. I don't see how it will end. Most of the fantasy novels have selling points, cute points, and explosive points, but they don't feel exciting. This is a good book, but it feels like it's not good enough. It has elements of fire, and the author's intentions are evident. But the book's characteristics are not reflected in its coolness. It makes me feel like I'm heading towards a novel about raising a dragon and a sadist. The soup is good, but after drinking too much, I couldn't hold it in until it was released. I read it later at night. I found it interesting and it took me half the time to read it. But I still want to say a word of support to the author, thank you for your hard work!

I think it is well written, and I have collected and invested in it. I am very interested in the evolution and battle of pet beasts, but I feel that the emotional description is too long, especially the description of the protagonist's single-parent family. This may be a buried plot clue, but I am still more interested in pet beasts than humans. After all, there are humans in every book, but not every book has pet beasts, so the pet beasts themselves are the selling point and feature of this book. I hope the author doesn't put the cart before the horse.

I almost lost the book if I kept it😰

The author's writing is really good, the writing is smooth, and his ability to describe the bond between the pet beast and its owner is better than many authors. The setting is not novel but very interesting. I hope the author can work more on the bonding aspect and write more stories about supporting characters in addition to the protagonist. Come on, come on

Full support, please tell me first to avoid being criticized What do you think of this book? I feel that the author wants to write a warm and exciting world. The emotional development of Qiuqiu and Qiuqiu in the early stage is well written. Although the villain is not clearly written, the breaking point is still ok. I can give it nine points In the middle period, the relationship between Lingling and Lulu was relatively flat. Maybe the author didn't know how to develop on both sides (Beibei's daily dementia), and then the school competition was smooth and smooth. Maybe it's because I didn't recommend it well enough, but I still gave it a 7:5 rating. In the later period, the level of emotional description between Whale and Yaya recovered (maybe because although they are two pets, it is a one-line story), but the plot seemed to be rushed (as if I didn't recommend it and wanted to finish it). It kept going and going, and many settings and villains were released. I'll probably give it a five-point rating here (I almost gave up the book because of the plot) Then now, the editor has recommended it and my mind is at ease, so the main plot is back to normal, but I haven't written too many bad reviews yet. The essence of the book is relatively good and can basically be read as long as you are not afraid of the acceleration of the plot. If it wants to become a magical book, the writing is not good enough, the character description and interaction are poor, and the pet description and interaction are very good. That's roughly it. Of course, this is just my personal opinion.

The author is a new writer, so he may be careless about the future, or there may be bugs. I hope readers can reply to me here if you have any comments or suggestions.

Let me comment on the psychological descriptions in this book. The main thing is that individuals have their own preferences. Some people like to read combat descriptions, some like to read strategic and psychological chess games, some like to read cool stories, some like to watch darkness, etc. Everyone has different expectations for the same type of literature. This is what I want to focus on from now on. The style of a book will slowly change as the plot develops. So don't stick to the style of a book at the beginning, even if the style doesn't change much during the middle of writing. You can just abandon the book. If you don't abandon it, it means that this book is actually acceptable from the bottom of your heart, but you just hope that it can develop in the style you want to read. But the problem is that there are a thousand style preferences for a thousand people. Much the same but also different. So if you still can't accept it after you first read it, then give it up, or post a post about the style you want to see before giving up. Let's read quietly. As long as the book doesn't intentionally make the main character pornographic, ntr, etc., Then we can just keep silent or post a short and non-swearing post. After all, no one wants to see some weird posts all the time in their favorite book circles. We can accept the existence of controversy, and we can also accept the use of our own preferences and opinions to express what we think are poisonous points. These are okay and human beings. But if you can't stand it, but you post uncivilized posts for some trivial reasons, then I just want to say stay away. Everyone uses bad words, but we know how to restrain ourselves. If you have a good book friend circle, don't make it a mess. Isn't it nice for us to quietly and civilly like to dispute it with our own opinions? Maybe you will be persuaded by others and be able to slowly accept it. That's all. The last thing I want to say is that I personally like the description of the intersection of people and pets in this book. It gave me a feeling of smiling as I read on, and some parts even made me feel warm. The summary is that this book can make me feel ups and downs (although mostly warm feelings), so to me it is a good book, at least in my eyes, this book's status is at least average. Of course, everyone is welcome to express their opinions in this post, but if someone is deliberately uncivilized, that's okay. We will fight to the death. This is my insistence. Thank you

The next plot should require multiple characters. Interested friends can reply below, such as. Name: Shao Zifeng Gender: Male Pet: Armadillo Lizard Talent: Dry Aura: XXXXXXX I may change the specific skills or talents slightly according to the plot. Thanks

I reached chapter 470 and couldn't hold on any longer. The cute pets were a bit interesting at the beginning, but later there were inexplicable conspiracies and inexplicable characters. The bad guys were not punished and the good guys were not rewarded. I guess the author also had this mentality and slipped away.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ As for this book, well, it is a classic development article. The main point is that the protagonist already knows through the system at the beginning that the five-star atavistic pet will definitely be very naughty in the future. In the future, it will be ok to gradually advance and cultivate feelings. So here to say "Why is my pet so fierce?" It feels a bit... Emmm... Of course, there is nothing wrong with the work itself, and the content is remarkable. I hope the author can consider the title and introduction of the novel

I was a little confused. After reading the last chapter before it was released, a city was thrown into chaos by a group of third-order spiders. The two departments didn't seem to have much effect. It was a bit embarrassing for the author to force the plot.

I've read half of it now, so I'll give you my personal opinion. It's purely my personal opinion. It's okay for the protagonist to hide the golden finger, and it's understandable to hide the dragon's identity, but is it too much to hide even the awakened fire element? It is necessary to properly demonstrate your talents and abilities, otherwise why would you get more care and resources? Resources have always been reserved for those with talent and family power. What is the benefit of hiding this and that? Nowadays, it is impossible for novels to write about Guo Jia as a villain. Isn't it crucial to show one's talents under the protection of decent forces to obtain the resources he deserves? It's so painful to watch

This is a eunuch. Let's break up

Isn't the protagonist from our world? He doesn't know that his disguise is meaningless in the eyes of the government. He doesn't know that he's been targeted by evil organizations. He doesn't know that he distrusts the government very much. What kind of label will he be given by the government for his repeated violations of the law? If we say that the male protagonist at the beginning was a bad record left by an elder in the family who escaped from the battlefield. After his subsequent behavior of completely distrusting the government and his very stupid concealment behavior, it is impossible for the government to trust him again.

Lingling

The first pet armadillo lizard appears, here is a beautiful photo

Can a department without humanity really exist for a long time? If you can sacrifice others casually today (mainly not voluntarily), tomorrow you will be a town, then a city, a province, the whole country and even the world.

The giant dragon is so fierce! OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoI fail not only? By the way, no one likes Charizard Y? Personally, I think it's pretty cool, so whisper it.

Funny

Eunuch Wang, come out! ! !

Is this updated from time to time or is it just a bug?

In fact, I am still interested in such articles, mainly because you started writing about snakes and I am a person who is interested in snakes, hahaha. I didn't find any big problems in all aspects. I think it's very good. The plot may be a bit bland, but I don't think this is a big problem. I just don't know what other readers think. Haha, good luck with the above

At first glance, I saw that there was no idiom Jielonglou, so let's get one! After the rain, it will be sunny

It's been four days. It's time for Yinchuan to update from time to time.

Potential, this should be designed so that the five virtual stars represent the full potential value, and the real stars represent the developed potential value. As for what it is, let's see how the author answers it? 😌 Then, if you ask for more refinement, I don't believe he won't contribute some points to me! 눈_눈

Come on, I'll give you more support when I have time.

A post created by an author does not need to be refined or pinned to the top It will sink directly to the bottom In order to prevent some current readers from not seeing it, I will create another one here Collect all kinds of pets and characters 🤓 The College Cup, where various supporting actors will appear, is coming soon. If you haven't handed over your favorite characters and pets to the author yet, hurry up! 😁 And finally, please improve, my operations officer is almost healed. Heehee😄

{"NickName":"Drinking Horses and Looking at Qinchuan","UserId":335600699}Please add refinement As we all know, mutation is an extremely widespread phenomenon. If mutation really occurs in nature, what impact will it have on humans and other characters in the biological chain? (Humans next issue) 1. Creatures without mutations are eliminated slowly or quickly, and hybrids are eliminated quickly As mentioned in the previous article, hybrid species will be eliminated quickly because they cannot obtain greater abilities after mutation. However, because most hybrid species rely on humans to survive, the impact is not significant. However, there are a few (such as killer bees) that survive in nature. You must know that killer bees are extremely powerful creatures, and they are now cool. The author believes that since mutation has an atavistic effect, it must be essentially related to blood (evidence: General Li's red carp and Li Yu's three-color koi). Therefore, the young (eggs) born by mutated creatures are definitely more likely to mutate than ordinary ones. Therefore, creatures without mutations will gradually be diluted in terms of competition for mating rights and natural selection. 2. Some rare creatures will become extinct There is a chance of mutation. The fewer creatures, the harder it is to adapt to mutation. Humans should protect it, but there will still be a very small number of nearly extinct creatures that increase the probability of extinction (such as the functionally extinct white-tip dolphin 😭). Most of these species are K countermeasures (referring to the biological plan of eugenics and eugenics), so their mutations are bound to be very strong and there is a possibility of survival, but the remaining unlucky ones will become extinct in the end 3. Rewriting of the food chain, r-strategist affects k-strategist First of all, the r-strategist refers to the creature that wins by quantity, and then it is the probability of mutation. The r-strategist is obviously more advantageous. Therefore, if there are too many ants to kill the elephant, the non-mutated k countermeasures will be eliminated by the mutated r countermeasures. Obviously, the r countermeasures will eliminate most of the unmutated k countermeasures 4. Species invasion is more difficult Since species are exclusive, it is inevitable that the originally familiar creatures will continue to survive, but the invasion comes, tsk tsk Okay, the following is the author's point of view, give it a thumbs up and leave

{"NickName":"Drinking Horses and Looking at Qinchuan","UserId":335600699}Please improve it According to the current chapter, the pet beast will retain its original name after mutation, and the name will change after evolving again, such as: thin dog → moon chasing dog. There is also a problem here, how to distinguish between unmutated animals and mutated animals (the protagonist has a system, others do not), it is impossible to move the entire laboratory to experiment -_-|| In this case, the mutation must be different from the prototype, such as being larger than the prototype, having more spots, etc. That's why Li Yiming knew that the lobster was mutated (it's also possible that he saw the lobster being caught with his own eyes, but it's unlikely) Are there any pet beasts that cannot evolve and can only exist as mutations? I don't know, but it's possible In addition, there is an essential difference between mutation evolution and mutation. It seems that mutation evolution can only occur after the first evolution (name change), and it will evolve towards mythical creatures. Why do human mythical creatures affect pet beasts? This is a question, maybe only the author knows it (it's okay to make one now). Finally, mutation evolution can be artificially created (Split-Eyed Demon Spider) One more thing, how will creatures like koi (carp mutation) and killer bees (hybrid) evolve? Killer bees are extremely powerful in nature, but it may be difficult to evolve based on the mutations of native cats and dogs (it may not work after evolution). Also, will native cats and dogs repel each other? If not, does it mean that they have become a new species? As for the koi, after friendly exchanges between the author and the author in the group, the author said that the koi he wrote was not an artificial mutation, but a new species selected artificially. This illustrates another thing: artificially selected species can evolve alone, but they may not be able to evolve after they have mutated. The following are some of the author's small opinions. If there are any mistakes, please feel free to raise them.

On the possibility of non-evolution As we all know, the creatures in this book have three evolutionary directions: group, individual, and mutation. Are there any that do not evolve? For example, in PM (Pokémon), there are non-evolved creatures such as Kentaro and Big Milk Tank. So, is it possible that there are non-evolved creatures in this book? What do you think, lovely author? 🙂🙂🙂