My Pet Beast Is Super Fierce

A good book, a good story, plus originality. But it's a bit annoying to watch. The most interesting thing is the interaction between pets and characters. The negative point is the psychological description of the protagonist, which feels very wrong, like a Japanese light novel translation style mixed with traditional literature. The writing style is like youth literature in Xiaobai's novels. The author carefully wrote the hints of the background and the foreshadowing of the characters, but the description was very blunt. Since there is a star classification, it is necessary to express the role of levels. Hierarchy is unattractive at this point. I just feel that if the star level is high, I will be strong, and if it suddenly becomes high, I will cause trouble.          , After reading this chapter, I realized that the protagonist is a college student. The protagonist is like an over-protected child who only embodies the need to be strong but does not embody self-reliance.       This book and the Beastmaster Evolver are both original genres, with good settings, good backgrounds, good interaction between humans and pets, and a stable and unique relationship between humans and pets. The old novels in the past had pet charms, and now there are starting with the contracted elf (this is not a Pokémon novel) and the elf leader (this book has a good setting, full of originality, but it is indeed a Pokémon system novel. However, after writing it, I just felt that the protagonist was too real, there was no cover up of the reality, and the drama could not be felt) . It feels like the fate of the protagonist is tragic. As a college student, you must at least have the idea of ​​working hard. Although you may be beaten and give up, you must be determined to die. The protagonist feels like a 12-year-old boy in college. I don't see how it will end. Most of the fantasy novels have selling points, cute points, and explosive points, but they don't feel exciting. This is a good book, but it feels like it's not good enough. It has elements of fire, and the author's intentions are evident. But the book's characteristics are not reflected in its coolness. It makes me feel like I'm heading towards a novel about raising a dragon and a sadist. The soup is good, but after drinking too much, I couldn't hold it in until it was released. I read it later at night. I found it interesting and it took me half the time to read it. But I still want to say a word of support to the author, thank you for your hard work!

Full support, please tell me first to avoid being criticized What do you think of this book? I feel that the author wants to write a warm and exciting world. The emotional development of Qiuqiu and Qiuqiu in the early stage is well written. Although the villain is not clearly written, the breaking point is still ok. I can give it nine points In the middle period, the relationship between Lingling and Lulu was relatively flat. Maybe the author didn't know how to develop on both sides (Beibei's daily dementia), and then the school competition was smooth and smooth. Maybe it's because I didn't recommend it well enough, but I still gave it a 7:5 rating. In the later period, the level of emotional description between Whale and Yaya recovered (maybe because although they are two pets, it is a one-line story), but the plot seemed to be rushed (as if I didn't recommend it and wanted to finish it). It kept going and going, and many settings and villains were released. I'll probably give it a five-point rating here (I almost gave up the book because of the plot) Then now, the editor has recommended it and my mind is at ease, so the main plot is back to normal, but I haven't written too many bad reviews yet. The essence of the book is relatively good and can basically be read as long as you are not afraid of the acceleration of the plot. If it wants to become a magical book, the writing is not good enough, the character description and interaction are poor, and the pet description and interaction are very good. That's roughly it. Of course, this is just my personal opinion.

The author is a new writer, so he may be careless about the future, or there may be bugs. I hope readers can reply to me here if you have any comments or suggestions.

Let me comment on the psychological descriptions in this book. The main thing is that individuals have their own preferences. Some people like to read combat descriptions, some like to read strategic and psychological chess games, some like to read cool stories, some like to watch darkness, etc. Everyone has different expectations for the same type of literature. This is what I want to focus on from now on. The style of a book will slowly change as the plot develops. So don't stick to the style of a book at the beginning, even if the style doesn't change much during the middle of writing. You can just abandon the book. If you don't abandon it, it means that this book is actually acceptable from the bottom of your heart, but you just hope that it can develop in the style you want to read. But the problem is that there are a thousand style preferences for a thousand people. Much the same but also different. So if you still can't accept it after you first read it, then give it up, or post a post about the style you want to see before giving up. Let's read quietly. As long as the book doesn't intentionally make the main character pornographic, ntr, etc., Then we can just keep silent or post a short and non-swearing post. After all, no one wants to see some weird posts all the time in their favorite book circles. We can accept the existence of controversy, and we can also accept the use of our own preferences and opinions to express what we think are poisonous points. These are okay and human beings. But if you can't stand it, but you post uncivilized posts for some trivial reasons, then I just want to say stay away. Everyone uses bad words, but we know how to restrain ourselves. If you have a good book friend circle, don't make it a mess. Isn't it nice for us to quietly and civilly like to dispute it with our own opinions? Maybe you will be persuaded by others and be able to slowly accept it. That's all. The last thing I want to say is that I personally like the description of the intersection of people and pets in this book. It gave me a feeling of smiling as I read on, and some parts even made me feel warm. The summary is that this book can make me feel ups and downs (although mostly warm feelings), so to me it is a good book, at least in my eyes, this book's status is at least average. Of course, everyone is welcome to express their opinions in this post, but if someone is deliberately uncivilized, that's okay. We will fight to the death. This is my insistence. Thank you

The next plot should require multiple characters. Interested friends can reply below, such as. Name: Shao Zifeng Gender: Male Pet: Armadillo Lizard Talent: Dry Aura: XXXXXXX I may change the specific skills or talents slightly according to the plot. Thanks

I reached chapter 470 and couldn't hold on any longer. The cute pets were a bit interesting at the beginning, but later there were inexplicable conspiracies and inexplicable characters. The bad guys were not punished and the good guys were not rewarded. I guess the author also had this mentality and slipped away.

As for this book, well, it is a classic development article. The main point is that the protagonist already knows through the system at the beginning that the five-star atavistic pet will definitely be very naughty in the future. In the future, it will be ok to gradually advance and cultivate feelings. So here to say "Why is my pet so fierce?" It feels a bit... Emmm... Of course, there is nothing wrong with the work itself, and the content is remarkable. I hope the author can consider the title and introduction of the novel

I was a little confused. After reading the last chapter before it was released, a city was thrown into chaos by a group of third-order spiders. The two departments didn't seem to have much effect. It was a bit embarrassing for the author to force the plot.

I've read half of it now, so I'll give you my personal opinion. It's purely my personal opinion. It's okay for the protagonist to hide the golden finger, and it's understandable to hide the dragon's identity, but is it too much to hide even the awakened fire element? It is necessary to properly demonstrate your talents and abilities, otherwise why would you get more care and resources? Resources have always been reserved for those with talent and family power. What is the benefit of hiding this and that? Nowadays, it is impossible for novels to write about Guo Jia as a villain. Isn't it crucial to show one's talents under the protection of decent forces to obtain the resources he deserves? It's so painful to watch

This is a eunuch. Let's break up