Douluo Dalu: This Sun Is Really Too Sun-like

You start by criticizing Xuanzi and Zhou Qi. Did the author consider that these two characters have already been criticized tens of thousands of times in other Douyu 2 fanfics? The beginning gives the impression of offering nothing new; it's just filler.

I feel like I've gone off-topic. If I'm writing about social science, why not historical fiction? Fantasy mainly focuses on individual superpowers.

Defeat Shrek Academy! Rescue Tang Shenwang!

This is too weak. I thought it would be "The Emperor's Sun," but it's actually "General" 😅, which is far worse than the previous ones.

The water has run dry; a small matter has been stretched into nearly ten chapters.

This is a complete trap set by the second version of the game. In low-level matches, it's better to just buy it directly, and in high-level matches, it's completely useless. With the time spent learning this, you could have leveled up your soul power several levels earlier.

This novel was alright at first, but a single event stretched into fifty or sixty chapters, and the protagonist started with level 17 cultivation before becoming a Great Soul Master in the 80s. There weren't any major flaws, but nothing particularly outstanding either; it was neither enjoyable to read nor worth abandoning. It revolved around petty, trivial matters, which wasn't very interesting.

It's incredibly long-winded, wasting a lot of ink on trivial matters and diminishing the reader's interest. The stories of ordinary people at the bottom of society could have been glossed over, but the author insisted on going into detail, almost as if he wanted to write down the resumes of everyone present to pave the way for the protagonist to gather faith.

This is so bad! If it's still like this after it's officially released, I'll subscribe to your channel. 👍🏻

The protagonist is still a Great Soul Master even at chapter 80, while Tang Shenwang was already hunting for his third Soul Ring at chapter 80.