Rising Up in the Hong Kong Crime-Fighting World

The author is scolding himself, and he deserves it. It doesn't matter if he doesn't accept the Fang sisters, but he is committing suicide to focus on the description. Focusing on description rather than taking credit deserves to be scolded.

The protagonist wants to be a stock god, the strongest athlete, a top student, a big shot in the upper class, and also wants to be a member of the world. Based on the main mission and goal, there is a high probability that he will enter politics in the end. You want to be everything and want everything, so it is inevitable that you will be a little smart in your actions. When the protagonist has good social resources and a certain amount of assets, the people he desperately wants to help are still living in the slums. It is to highlight the protagonist's status and excellent skills when encountering criminals and unfair treatment in the slums. Too smart. I saw that the protagonist wanted to take care of the girls around him, but felt that the girl plot was too miserable, so he introduced Haonan and his friends to a girl's family for a friendship. What a good friend, a good brother, just so damn good. I'm afraid you haven't watched the complete series of Young and Dangerous

Is the author a prisoner of literary youth disease? What does it mean to write such a ghostly beginning? It's just baffling, goodbye.

Before Chapter 16, it was a god-level novel, and the writing was not to mention, but after Chapter 16, it was just garbage. The plot in the front is vivid, detailed and down-to-earth, but the writing in the back is rough, the plot is too fast, and the acting is stiff. I just saw chapter twenty-seven and couldn't stand it. Don't waste time if you don't want to write well. It's not that you don't have the ability to write well, so why are you doing it?

It is extremely poisonous, not to mention giving away girls, but also deliberately giving a girl to Chen Haonan to harm others. What the hell

This book was quite good at the beginning, such as the plot of a small stutter, swimming to earn fame, and forming your own team. It was all very good, but then it collapsed. The world we were originally in was the Hong Kong TV world, and we added the extravagance of traveling through the world. That's it. The two biggest problems are Problems arose. One was the collapse of technology. Suddenly, there were a large number of extremely important patents that disrupted people's financial paths. The moat I built with investment in swimming at the beginning was vulnerable and could not stop coveting. Later, all the bad things were caused by the heat of the head. The second is the collapse of the time-travel world. You are obviously in the martial arts world of the Republic of China, and then you come to martial arts, and then cultivation. It really answers that sentence. If you don't have money, you want to be rich. If you have money, you want big money. Four or six are unreliable, and it's a mess. It's better to do it one world at a time.

This book does not supervise my live streaming of diarrhea while standing on my head, and this post is proof! ! ! I can't even eat steamed buns and pickles at this level.

Giving away girls is too cruel, especially after saving two girls with the front foot, and then giving the back foot to a lone star like Chen Haonan. Is it because they don't die quickly enough? Hong Kong has become a comprehensive program, and it is still acting like a gangster, and the pig's feet are suddenly brainless? Will following Chen Haonan have a happy ending?

I originally thought it was something like Hong Kong Financial Entertainment, but after more than a year you turned into a hero type who punishes evil and promotes good. I really don't think it's good-looking. The first part is good, but the protagonist rises too fast and becomes a billionaire in just over a year. I don't know what I'm writing in the second part. I also want to find a stepfather for myself. The main character's mother loses weight and works out and pursues the protagonist's subordinates. That's enough.

Has the author made another update? For the sake of new readers, I still have to say something : The protagonist gives away his daughter and then his mother.