Saving the Myriad Worlds

The author can write less about martial arts, fairy tales and the like! There are so many books about Qidian Zhutianliu Martial Arts and Xianxia! I'm tired of looking at it! You can write more urban dramas! TV series like In the Name of the People, Bloody Romance, and the like! More refinement! Adoption! Monthly tickets and recommended tickets have been given out!

Dude, it's 7.5 Million words long. To say it's as plain as water is just a compliment. It's not exciting at all. Once it reaches its climax, it's all over in one stroke. I'm convinced.

You tell me that in ancient times, especially during the Da Meng Dynasty, the escort officials didn't want their sons to study and take the imperial examinations? They poisoned them to death. The Ming Dynasty was dominated by the gentry, but a bodyguard agency with no status was regarded as a low-class coolie in the eyes of the gentry. Opposing his son to take the imperial examination...

I always like to write a bunch of irrelevant things, with a lot of original plots. I often don't see the original characters in dozens of chapters. If you like to write original things so much, why do you write fanfics?

It's been writing for so long. The protagonist has lived for so long, arriving in a new world every time. It's still the same as when I traveled through time. No growth at all. A chapter can be written on a trivial matter, and one page is extremely short. The protagonist has lived so long and lived in vain. No progress at all. Not to mention the pattern, the protagonist is rubbish.

. . . This book is so awkward. I don't even know what to say. Several times I watched the beginning and then got more and more bored and ended up skipping the entire copy. I have never read a complete copy. Too bloated and boring. For example, the copy of Ode to Joy I am reading now has no twists and turns until chapter 40, which is bland. The only possible conflict is Qu Xiaoxiao's decoration. The author just mentioned it and then put it down. I don't know who the author of this copy is going to use to create conflicts and make the plot tense. . To put it bluntly, this article is as boring as boiled water. There is no conflict and no ups and downs of the plot. It is like I am not reading a novel but a running account. . Finally, the result of writing an urban copy is like this. . I don't mean to show off, but I'm speechless if you give me the entire diary. Okay, drop it again. . This is the second time I have abandoned this book. .

Damn, I lost the book for a few months. I picked it up because of the lack of books. I subscribed to the latest chapter and read it. The author still hasn't improved in writing. With a theme like yours, what we readers want to see is a story that is different from the plot line of the original work. We don't want you to follow the plot line of the original work. You follow the original work. Why don't I read the original work? You have traveled in time, and the plot has basically not changed. What are you doing in time? I have been following your book since you started it, and gave up several times in the middle. It is because you always follow the original work. This book shortage, I picked it up and read it, thinking that the author's writing power has improved. After all, there are millions of words, but I didn't expect that the writing power has not improved. You are always writing about the heavens. Follow the original work without your own changes and thoughts about the original work. How can you become popular? For example, the book next door (Wandering in the Heavens) followed the original work like you at the beginning. Not many people read it. The style on the right is directly adapted, and various plot lines are adapted to make people laugh. I directly became an LV5 author from LV1 because there are so many people subscribing to it. Now that book has almost 5 million words. For That guy is still writing because there are so many people reading it, and I am also subscribing to that one. I have said all this, just to tell you that with a theme like yours, you need to write a story in which you change the plot line of the original work, and the author's analysis of the original work. It is not based on a running account of how you followed the original work. Forget it, I won't go into detail. I just want to give you an opinion. Let the author think about it for himself. After all, you can write millions of words, and you are also a perseverant author. I sincerely hope you can become a LV5 author, come on I still remember reading a book (The Strongest Shopkeeper in History), that book was the biggest change to various original works, and then the author became LV5. The author must have his own analytical views on all kinds of books. Finally, I would like to give you a piece of advice: don't follow the plot line of the original work when it comes to themes about heaven and earth. You will definitely not be able to become popular.

The child of my cousin's family felt like a rebirth. My cousin is from Chongqing. She has been wanting to have a child for 7 years. After getting married for 7 years, both of them have had physical examinations and both are fine. I have tried all kinds of local methods but they are still not pregnant I found an old Taoist priest later. The Taoist looked at it and said that I am destined to have a child, just wait. Then last autumn, I finally got pregnant, and the family was happy and took good care of them. , I did a color ultrasound two days ago and found that the child had abnormalities, and the mouth and nose had been moving Various tests were done, but no reason could be found. Later, I found an old Chinese medicine doctor. The old Chinese doctor said that the child had something on his mind in his previous life, and his mouth was actually talking all the time Later, I found a professional to watch the color ultrasound video, and while recording the mouth shape, I realized that what the child said was "Update soon, when will it be updated, hurry up, hurry up, hurry up."

Give me more cum, in the name of my family, Ling Xiao

The protagonist travels through so many worlds. But every time I go to a new world, I don't act like someone who has experienced so many worlds. You can learn from Wang Yan. Look at how well others Wang Yan handles it.