My Phone Might Have Transmigrated

I find your book full of inconsistencies. It starts in 2003, which I think is wrong. Back then, having 10,000 yuan a month was considered wealthy. And what about charging 100 yuan for a photoshopped picture with Andy Lau? I specifically asked my mom; her monthly salary in 2003 was only 300 yuan. She worked in a factory, and many others worked in offices or held positions.

What was the author thinking? Facebook was launched in 2004, and by 2008, the whole world had entered the market, except for the US. They just watched Zuckerberg develop it, and the US never raised any funding for a global internet company, nor did they give their employees stock options. Did they really think they were some kind of arrogant overlord?

I've read a bit, and here are my thoughts: First, the emotional portrayal is immature. Not only are every woman he encounters beautiful, but they all seem interested in him – a bit toxic. Second, there's an inexplicable pretentiousness. While his business acumen and problem-solving skills are on point, the dialogue and disjointed passages are confusing.

I saw this on Jiyi Books List! The cover is very appealing! Keep it up!

I couldn't stand watching anymore after seeing how tightly the protagonist held onto his shares; it made me think like a petty bourgeois.

The part about the accountant embezzling funds and running away was absolutely intoxicating, it almost killed me! Dude, you keep saying it reflects reality, but you need to understand you're writing a novel, this is all fiction. Can't you write it more smoothly and make it enjoyable for the readers? Why do you have to be so cruel to us?

The protagonist read a few books and started several companies? He became rich in just two months! No preparation, no learning, no startup team—a high school student without a second chance at life, his knowledge is insufficient. It would be more reasonable if he were an adult. It's completely baffling that he's a high school student just to get into university, padding out the college storyline?

This author is criticizing Li... Well, how should I put it... If it were a few years ago, before Li withdrew from the mainstream, there would have been authors who criticized Li like this. It can only be said that such people are very brave and dare to speak out.

I looked at a few more pages and figured out the problem with the book. Ultimately, the problem lies in the author's inaccurate characterization. The beginning, where the protagonist obtains a futuristic phone, then meticulously studies it, gradually seeking opportunities and slowly deducing and analyzing, gives the impression that the protagonist is very rational.

Give him back a web novel, damn it, what a pretentious intellectual, is he sick in the head?