Dimensional Forum

Dongdong has always been dominated by settings, and the setting of the forum is eye-catching. At the same time, both the previous work and this one have completed the relevant animation worldview to a certain extent. These settings further expanded the worldview of the novel. However, Dongdong also has failed settings, and there are too many settings. The setting affects the coherence of the plot to a certain extent. At the same time, too many settings make the world view of the entire novel too huge, resulting in many pitfalls in the world not being filled in the later period. I felt that Dongdong was a little unable to control it in the later period, so I could only end it hastily, and the whole book felt like it started but ended. Just my personal opinion, please don't comment

Also, the dialogue between the characters is a bit childish, lowering the IQ of the characters in the original work by several notches. The protagonist's own words are sometimes incomprehensible. Even if it is meant to be lighthearted and funny, the IQ must be online... There are too many flaws, so I should abandon it. The people who get good reviews are probably elementary school students.

There are too many settings, the main line is unclear, and there are wild branches. Most of the other world novels are mainly about other worlds. The original world should not be written, but the original world should be written casually and a little too much Since the author still plans to write about the original world, the proportion must be right. Otherwise, after reading three to five hundred chapters, the protagonist of the original world has done almost nothing, making people wonder what he is doing There are too many branches, one world after another, even the first one to go, Naruto, has not finished until chapter 800, basically the candle is burning at the same time Because there are too many worlds, looking at them for a long time will make people tired. For example, after skipping Digimon, Saint Seiya World, and Bleach, you can still understand it, which means you have too much water. The role of the protagonist There are too many occupations, and a lot of settings are made, which are basically invalid words for water. The occupations in the back appear, and the occupations in the front are almost ignored. For example, in the graduation test of Eagle City, the protagonist does not even summon the Nine Lamas to fight The main line starts from Duran City, Academy, Camel Beast, Eagle City, Disha Bang, and Soul-Living Beast. If you look at it all the way, you will find that there is a lack of clear sense of coherence. It's like writing whatever comes to mind, taking one step and firing a gun. Many events are like going through a formality, changing the scene after one time And when the protagonist travels to another world, the forum in the other world will be disconnected. This itself has a serious problem. For example, the protagonist has been in Pokémon World for several months, and Dr. Oak's forum has been disconnected for several months. It is considered a serious bug.

I feel that the writing is average. The main world and Pokémon world are well written, but I skipped reading the Naruto world and the One Piece world. Can you not force the so-called technologies and concepts of real life into it? The hybrid rice, red concept, harmonious democracy and the like are really funny. You may think it is funny, but it is really not funny at all... This kind of world is about fighting and killing, so don't write it so blandly, okay?

Why is the book called "Dimensional Forum" and the forum's presence is so low! Why is a forum not used for communication and downloading resources? It is used to fight along the network cable! Why is the main world getting shorter and shorter? Isn't the main world really Pokémon?

Pokémon was okay, but then Naruto started and I started to feel sick.

There are too many settings, too many settings, and too little plot. Especially from the hunter to the gourmet chapter, the quality of the plot plummeted.

Skipping the main world, it looks great, but the author is not suitable for writing daily life and suspense at all, and he forces it to be written.

I don't support the wall, I just obey the author. Many of the discordant aspects of anime can be made reasonable using the worldview of this book. Awesome! But does the author dare to write about a cold world?

I understand the ninja sect, but what the hell is Mabel? A master of cultivation, training and coordination of female Pokémon who is so beautiful that she is so beautiful that she is as shy as a flower and the moon is frozen.

Every time I read a book, I thought it was okay, but when I looked at the book reviews and found out what was wrong with it, I thought the book was rubbish. Later, after I blocked the book reviews, I found that I could read any book.

I feel like the Pokémon world is still well written. Naruto wrote that it looked like shit. What the author means is almost the same as: The reason why several countries keep fighting is that guns are in the hands of the military. Now I will give guns to everyone. If everyone has a gun, there will be world peace. ? ? ? What kind of elementary school logic is this?

You may not believe it, but this is the best novel about Pokémon that I have ever read 🤭

Why is the character of this protagonist really like a naughty child? Shuangshang also generally has a playful attitude in his work style. You have been in the main world for several months and you still don't know anything about it and are not ashamed. You don't know the most basic knowledge about your own profession. For example, the summoning profession is too strong. Or is the main world safe and can be resurrected after death? Normally I don't see the protagonist working hard, just a loser who relies on cheats to hang out in forums every day and waits for death, right?

I strongly hope to add some drama to Big Pippi. Pippi in the comics is still very cute and suitable for making complaints about.

The Naruto arc is too taken for granted! The people are poor because of the war. Ninjas have power just like ordinary people have guns. Genin have pistols, chunin have machine guns, jounin have sniper rifles, and kage have missiles. How does the country restrain them? It organizes them into an army and restrains them with military law. Ordinary people holding guns are breaking the law and must be arrested. What restraint does ordinary people use when they have power? People are creatures of desire. If they have a little, they want more. In Naruto, ordinary people can learn chakra, which is equivalent to having channels to buy guns. With channels, can "ninjutsu" with guns be far behind? When there are more people, there will be conflicts. What should we do if there are conflicts? If you have a weapon in your hand, go for it! If the protagonist does this, it will only add to the confusion!

I came back to review this book. I really like the setting of this forum. I wonder if I will be able to find a book with such setting in the future.

I was stunned from the beginning and couldn't stand it any longer. When I saw their conversation, I felt like they were all mentally retarded.

But Ta Lin was so laid-back and looked like the mastermind behind the scenes, and he suddenly surrendered. The grievances and hatred between the Medusa sisters took up such a large part of the main storyline in the early stage, but ended up not appearing in the Qiankun World at all. This mess is comparable to that of Lingjian Mountain.

It's a very good subject matter. It's written as an explanatory text. Skills and occupations are explained over and over again. Putting aside these over 5 million words, there really isn't much plot.

I just said why this book looked so familiar, and it turned out that it had persuaded me to quit at the beginning.

It was okay in the early stage, but after the 400th chapter, it became more and more rubbish. I forced my wits to drop. I was a rubbish guy who spent all his time browsing forums and didn't feel ashamed to ask questions about his career. He changed his mind when he saw a woman. He didn't dare to refute but only dared to compromise and slapped himself in the face like crazy. He then said that forum points were not easy to come by while dying hundreds of times for a woman. It was rubbish.

The front part was okay, but the back part was so disgusting that I couldn't stand it anymore. The male protagonist is completely written in the direction of a shemale. The more I looked at it, the more disgusting it became.

When I read this article, which is full of settings and explanations, I wanted to kill myself when I was in the second grade of junior high school.

I originally thought that my poison resistance was okay, after all, I had resisted the soul-changing and body-changing plot when it was released. In the end, in order to save a beast, he signed a life-sharing contract with it. . . . Personally speaking, I have a fatal weakness. If this cat dies, the protagonist will die. He also traveled with him to expose his golden fingers. For Yu Gong, it directly led to the deterioration of the relationship between humans and beasts. Indirectly, the hunter did not cooperate in resisting the abyss, the pressure on humans increased greatly, and an unknown number of people died. It is equivalent to the protagonist threatening all mankind with his own life, because if the beast dies, the protagonist will also die. The human leaders do not want the protagonist to die, so they have a stalemate with the orcs. The orcs do not cooperate, and the human beings are under great pressure, and the pressure will cause high losses in battles. If it weren't for the book shortage, I would give up. . . . Um. . . So fragrant

It's too watery, and a lot of it is in the commentary settings. Originally, it was enough to streamline the commentary settings in the early stage, but in the middle stage, there was still a lot of verbose commentary settings, and it took a long time to talk about it. Water,,,,

I don't know how to evaluate him, he really behaves like a 🐢man, thanks to such a strong golden finger. The 14-year-old me in my second year of middle school may have been reckless, but at the same time I was also very motivated, especially if I had the opportunity to become stronger. If someone slaps someone in the face, if there is a chance, I would like to slap him back immediately. The salty fish hugging the thigh is really not the state of a middle-aged boy. This portrayal of the protagonist gives me a feeling that the setting is a setting and the plot is a plot. There is an obvious sense of separation between the main world and the sub-world. In today's terms, it's poison, right?

I haven't seen such a miserable protagonist in a long time. In the first chapter of the opening chapter, the protagonist is pinned to the ground by four big men! Then he was slapped hard in the face in public, and then he was hit hard on the head.

How to say? I'm curious if the author has watched Naruto. If the settings that the author changed have bugs or pitfalls in the original work, I will accept it, but if the settings in the original work have no problems, I can't accept it.

The dimensional forum is a mess. I can't stand the setting of the forum. It's a failure.