Rule-Breaking Player

The first world is considered golden. I subscribed and read it all. It turns out that the author must have died in the second copy world. I can tell by reading the comments. There are obviously not many comments. I was impatient and hung there until the limited exemption. I thought it was unlimited streaming, but it turns out that the first world is very long. In fact, it is okay. It is not necessary at all. The strength improves so fast and the writing is so high. As a result, the second world starts from the beginning, so it's okay to start from the beginning. Before we like to go away, we have to describe some actual martial arts content. As a result, you good guy, the blood can flow directly, and there are more than 10 chapters describing the progress of my daughter's martial arts. In fact, it is completely different from the strength of Zhujiao. There is no need to describe so much at once. The update is slow in the first place, and it is double-edited, so I should give up this book. It should simply be completed as soon as possible. Otherwise, the new book will not be updated. Judging from the author's description, he should still be a college student. I have graduated from college for 6 years. In terms of creation, as well as the description of the relationship between men and women. At least it's the kind of thing the diaosi author describes. As long as there's no dog-licking plot, it's at least qualified. Come on, the first book is a pity.

Royal National Knights

The first world was a god-level work, but then it fell off a cliff, which was a pity

If it can be said that before protecting the princess, it can be said to be food and grass, then the princess chapter can only be said to be hay The writing is too scattered, with a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. I know the author wants to use this to introduce the world view, but the impression is really not good.

Don't tell me that all the previous strength is gone and you have to recover and level up again. This kind of routine is boring! I'll take another look. If I start leveling again, I'll have to give up. I don't like this.

It is much better than those mindless novices, but there are too many unreasonable plots, and I can't help but want to complain from time to time. I just added some plot points and the main character has read the whole book without any sense of violation. Moreover, I arranged for the main character to have a disabled hand and replace it with a machine, which is very conflicting with the body strengthening potion. Although it is considered an artifact in the early stage, it will be left behind when he reaches extraordinary level. There is a huge flaw in the story, either to regenerate the limbs or to find more advanced mechanical upgrades. Although this can add a main line and develop a branch line, the author has no foreshadowing. Realizing this makes people uncomfortable. When these things accumulate, I don't want to read anymore. Come on, author, I will look for something else to read first 🙏

After changing the dungeon, the previous physical fitness and ability were gone. I changed from fighting all over the planet to being a black boxer. Is there any meaning in writing unlimited flow like this?

The first world is truly the pinnacle and essence of this book. It is the golden beginning that every good book must have. The problem lies in the second world, the fantasy style and the modern martial arts style do not match And the protagonist starts from scratch and starts training again, which is equivalent to writing another book, except that the protagonist has the same name and an extra golden finger. So there is something wrong with the continuity of the dungeon. You can make a transition through a dnd, magic mod, biohazard, poisonous milk powder dungeon, or even the game world. The protagonist only has a heart and soul, and he can also be the boss behind the scenes to cause trouble.

It's normal when it's over. The style of the painting changed, and he suddenly brought his daughter with him, which lost many readers. At least I'm one of them. Although I haven't canceled the collection, I don't like the recent content very much, so I haven't read it.

I understand, the protagonist is like a leader. The Metal Sea is the abyss hell that is expanding and swallowing the world. The protagonist uses his ability in other worlds to send coordinates to the Metal Sea. In the end, the protagonist grows up and gets the maximum authority. He is the abyss.