One Punch Across the Myriad Worlds

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First of all I would like to give a general review of my personal feelings about this book. Overall, it is worth reading. Of course, there are also areas of dissatisfaction, but after all, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. Let's talk about what I think are the advantages first. On the whole, the writing is online, the plot logic is smooth, and there are basically no intolerable poisonous points. Throughout the whole article, we can also see the author's progress, which can be said to be getting better. Of course, I think the advantages of this book have been discussed in other posts. The specifics are left to the readers to discover by themselves. In this post, I mainly want to talk about some of my personal views and suggestions. First of all is the change in the protagonist's mentality. It is understandable that the invincible power leads to the disappearance of emotions, but this does not mean that the protagonist does not have his own likes and dislikes, nor does it mean that the protagonist becomes a "blank" person in a relative sense. Especially since this is a novel after all, readers come to this book for fun, so writing this way would be boring. Moreover, the protagonist's thoughts have changed many times without much foreshadowing. The turning point is very sudden. Now it feels like he suddenly regards himself as a god. To be honest, it is not good to write like this. My mentality at the beginning was actually quite good. I'm not a good person, but I'm not a bad person either. I'll help you if I can and if I want to. I don't owe you anything, and I'm not your mother. I have to take care of you for the rest of your life. With a little more decisiveness in killing, it would be a very successful character, and readers would love to read it. At least I think it's pretty good, hehe. However, being decisive in killing does not mean that people are considered careless and people are killed without batting an eyelid. Now the protagonist has this kind of momentum. To be honest, he is not likable. You may indeed be invincible, but this does not mean that you are truly God, Heaven, or superior to others. Treating the opposing enemies as ants is called dominance, treating everyone as ants is called idiots. It can be painful to watch, especially if you watch it too much. Aesthetics will be tired, let alone some plots and settings that make people uncomfortable. Secondly is the protagonist's emotional handling. Invincible power doesn't mean eternal life, right? It is not so much that he has no friends, but that he has rejected everything, friendship, love, and even family affection. I think Chen Dachui and the others treat the protagonist as a relative, but the protagonist himself chooses to alienate all this. The biggest problem with invincible novels is that the protagonist is invincible as soon as he comes out, so there is no main plot, so various branch plots, the connection of small stories, the portrayal of supporting characters and the portrayal of emotions have become the main means of enriching the book. For now, the supporting characters do not have impressive characters like the old lion, the black king, and the iron feather king in the reincarnation paradise. The emotional subplots are often what readers like to hear. Third is the protagonist's "arrival". I think the author portrayed this matter very poorly for the protagonist. This is the most annoying thing I've seen so far. The reason why the protagonist goes to different parallel worlds is, to put it bluntly, to see different scenery and experience different lives, not to become stronger or to help people realize their wishes. However, as of now, the protagonist has a very poor sense of his own identity. He is like a bystander, controlling a vest and playing an RPG game. There has always been a sense of separation between him and the Advent identity, especially since the author has been deliberately mentioning this, which is not good. Let me ask, with such a mentality, can he really gain anything in the parallel world? How can you get the slightest touch from "Arrival" that has no sense of substitution? Take the first world and the current world as examples. In the first world, he could have brought himself into that identity, felt the family affection, and could also handle things better, but he didn't. He himself put up a wall between him and his "relatives" and didn't do the finishing work well. It was foreseeable that what he left to Wang Yu was a mess. And the current world, to be honest, is my favorite chapter, but the pace is a bit too fast. The protagonist can definitely learn more things to disguise himself, and why can't the protagonist bring himself into this "hero" identity? What's the harm in being a real hero in this world? Why do I always have to remind myself that this is a persona and the real me is not like this? Is it the power that makes you cold, or is it you who has rejected that ray of light? An invincible strong man does not necessarily have to be ruthless. I think more people are still willing to see a flesh-and-blood character, rather than blindly killing and simply being strong. Having said that I think there are problems with this book, I would like to make some small suggestions to the author at the end. 1. The end of each world is too hasty, and the beginning is also very abrupt. You can explain it in these two paragraphs. It won't take much pen and ink, but it will look much more comfortable, especially for a reader with a bit of obsessive-compulsive disorder like me. You will feel like this No beginning and no end. 2. I still suggest that the author sort out the book reviews, because some people's meaningless negative comments really affect the reading experience of other people who are willing to read and want to read. It's a good thing to make serious suggestions, ask questions, and keep them, but as soon as you start this chapter, you see one or several comments like "Abandoned, xxxx", "xxxPoison, xxxx" and similar comments, which are really off-putting. Sometimes even people who think it's okay at first will feel more and more uncomfortable as they read. Don't think that it's better to say good or bad things than no one says anything. For some negative remarks, the person who posted them slaps his ass and leaves after saying it. It is the subsequent readers who suffer the negative impact, which will really affect the readers' stay. 3. Pay attention to typos and sentences that are not smooth in the text. Although these are just some minor flaws, they still affect the reader's reading experience. If there are too many typos and the sentences are unreadable, who would want to continue reading? Solving this problem is very simple. Just read it again after coding. It doesn't waste much time, but it is very good and is good for both the readers and the author. The last thing is that I hope the author can read my review and seriously consider my suggestions, especially about the protagonist's character and approach to things. Of course, This is just my personal suggestion and opinion, and it only represents my personal opinion. This is also my first time to write such a long comment. It seems a bit too long. I don't know if anyone will be happy to read it. Just let it go. I think this book is quite interesting, and I hope it will get better and better. PS: Update quickly, this is the top priority, and it must be slow enough 😏

Having read so many books, this book is indeed a masterpiece. Speaking of which, I haven't read books written by great masters for a long time, because in the past, those great masters wrote quite well, but after so many years, some great masters have not changed their writing style. To put it nicely, it means not forgetting the original intention, but to put it unfavorably, it means being old-fashioned and unable to keep pace with the times. Like me, many readers have changed their tastes after reading the book for so many years. This is normal, but what is abnormal are those masters who refuse to change their writing methods. Of course, many people may say that I am wrong, and this is normal. After all, those great masters make a lot of money, so naturally they don't want to improve their writing methods. However, this book is really good and makes me want to read it. Although the previous supplementary points are not included in the introduction, I also want to read it. What I want to say to the author is that if your later parts are as exciting as the first, then I will keep following you. Speaking of the reasons why I can't read many books, the first is that the logic is confusing, and in the end the author doesn't know what he is writing. The second is that it is too cliched to pretend to be a slap in the face, as if the protagonist did it when normal people would never do it anyway, and the villain is not intelligent enough and actually let the protagonist run away. Third, the hole was dug too big and not filled in properly. He smashed his feet and hit his face. It was mentioned earlier that this character was a great villain, but later when a larger map came out, it was discovered that, oh, it turns out that this was just something that was casually dealt with by someone. The fourth is plot stomach medicine, for example, the heroine or important female supporting role is written to death or given away due to some normal or abnormal reasons. I'm sorry, most of us readers have a very difficult life and want to find some solace in novels, but you still write like this. I don't know about others, but I will never read any novels written by that author again. Don't give readers stomach medicine. Such a story that is plain with a little storm, a little turbulent in development, and finally reunited may be the story we want. After all, ordinary life is life. Finally, if the author thinks what I said is acceptable, please add more details.

Fuji is just a newbie, and with the recommendation in the previous paragraph, some things made me very nervous, so the quality may have dropped. If you brothers are patient and willing to give me expectations, I will continue to work hard to write it well. If I really feel that it is not possible, there is nothing I can do. As I said before, I will work hard to write and strive for progress. I don't know whether it is good or bad. I will take it one step at a time. Here, I am very grateful to the friends who are willing to stay and read my books. Thank you very much. Even if it is for you, I will work hard and not let you down.

The protagonist wants to learn from Qi Jingchun. Then what I wrote is the epitome of the two novels Xue Zhong and Jian Lai. Among them, Persimmon and Laohuang have already come out. The following pictures show Chen Pingan taking Li Huai and others to study. Not bad. The main thing is that villains just don't get attracted to beautiful women. Chen Zhenghua didn't even dare to write like this. . One last thing. He Chen Zhenghua knows nothing about swords

Thank you for the recommendation, brother. I really appreciate it. Thank you all!! I wish you happiness, good flowers and a full moon, and early birth... Ahem, code words, I will work hard to make it as comfortable as possible for you. Thank you, my gratitude cannot be expressed in words, thank you very much.

He died of poison in the first twenty chapters. In order to save a second-generation martial arts girl who was raped by a young man, the protagonist's friend deliberately said that she was ugly. The rescued girl and her father came to take revenge. They knew that the protagonist's friend was actually the girl's savior, but because of the sentence "she was ugly", the girl wanted to teach the protagonist a lesson, and her father wanted to kill the savior who was resented by the girl because his daughter did not like it. Then the protagonist's friend was seriously injured and was about to die, so the protagonist stepped in to save him. At this time, an elder teacher appeared and taught the protagonist various principles of life, asking him to stop fighting and to be reasonable. The protagonist then stopped in frustration and distress. At this time, the girl who wanted to retaliate against kindness was rude and rude to the protagonist, but the protagonist did not react at all. I don't know what is in the author's head. Anyway, I want to break the hands and feet of its relatives and then talk about the truth to make it understand that fighting for world peace is wrong.

What a nonsense, a town has a powerful blacksmith, an enigmatic teacher with a story behind it, and the mysterious so-called powerful family of Li Yi? It feels like it's just a place where the protagonist appears, and any dog ​​that walks by might be a mythical beast!

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After just reading a few dozen chapters, the protagonist gave me a feeling of hypocrisy. No matter what he does, he has to find an excuse for himself. He is a very contradictory person. He does not eliminate evil and does not help when good. He always waits for evil people to do evil before eliminating evil. He waits for kind people to be hurt before helping. He kills people to find spiritual sustenance for himself. Generally speaking, it is hypocrisy.