The Vast Immortal Qin

Good! The scene is grand, but you have to think about the layout. The pattern determines the size! Write slowly and don't rush. Slow work leads to careful work, and a good book will surely live up to its creator. Here's the ticket for you, please add some juice! ! ! !

Please correct typos, history, and other errors. The author will read the posts every day. Posts that are not corrected will be deleted (otherwise it will be difficult to calculate, so please forgive me). For every 200 posts filled with corrections, an additional chapter will be added. PS: The author is a famous salted fish, please show mercy!

I was about to subscribe, but I lost contact. Fortunately, I searched the author's name and found a new book.

Guess what big things Zhao Zheng will do after getting help from the protagonist? For example: Conquer the West or sweep the Huns or...

Let me explain, the fabrication was made because of religious issues and was spotted by the 404 Crab Beast under the Heavenly Seat. At present, the author has not completed the modification.

I'm going to make up myths and save money! It turned out to be fruitless! Can we still save it?

The book is a good book, and the subject matter is also a good one. However, it is really uncomfortable to read the half-full classical Chinese. Every time I read it, a strange dialogue suddenly pops up, and the sentences are still unclear. It is really uncomfortable. Different from tasteless ribs, this is more like a good dish. The chef was smart enough to add an extra half bowl of salt, which made it very salty. If you really want to write dialogues in classical Chinese, please read through any of the four major classics. Even if you only learn 30%, it will be enough to use it, instead of just reading some classical Chinese in online articles and using it.

In Chapter 80, where we entered the apocalyptic world, the man saw the protagonist waving his hands to kill the zombies, and such a man was thinking of plotting against him! The protagonist is still pretending to be cool with them, I'm really fascinated! Another sister comes out, she has the qualifications of an empress, and she also has a cold tone, I know it! What the hell👻Little girls in the apocalypse are so greedy, don't they just have the most basic respect for a strong man? 🐷

The book Xian Qin is still worth reading when you are short of books. According to the book, Zheng Ge's journey from proton to emperor of heaven should be twelve or thirteen years ago. It is too fast. The protagonist obviously wants to lay a solid foundation for the Qin Dynasty. The highlight should be here, slowly watching Zulong build worlds one by one, and finally build heaven into the ending or sequel. However, a large part of the article is about the protagonist conquering the world alone. The role of Zulong here is more to constantly receive rather than conquer, which is obviously off topic. It might as well be called "About me leading the Qin Dynasty to conquer the heavens". Having said the shortcomings, let's talk about the advantages. Except for the inexplicable girl's cruel treatment in the first apocalyptic world, the other worlds have their own characteristics. At least there are no obvious poisonous points, and the writing is relatively smooth (there are a lot of typos). I spent a week of free time to read it, and I didn't feel unfinished. It shows that the author did a good job of ending the story at the end (¯ㅂ¯crimin). Well, this is not considered an advantage. Finally, I hope the author will write better in the next book and achieve better results (｢･ω･)｢Hey

What do you want me to say? The chapters posted these days are really cool. I read ten chapters together and finished it in a few minutes. The plot became less and less attractive to me. The beginning was well written and attracted me. But after the writing of the apocalypse collapsed, especially after the writing of the character Wang Wuyi collapsed, I felt that the writing was unsatisfactory. What can I say about the role of Wang Wuyi? What is its purpose? Let's say she is a key character. The character is poorly written and her role is not much. If she is insignificant, there is no need to write it twice. She is still at a key point. If it is really insignificant, you don't have to write it. But after watching the plot, she will definitely appear. I reward you for writing this character well, because this place is really unsatisfactory. I should read the readers' comments and try to round out the character, or change the previous plot, or at least make this character more pleasing to the eye. But in the end, nothing was done. I don't know whether the author hasn't written it yet, or is unwilling to write it. I have rewarded it, but I really don't want this book to deteriorate from being a good book to having no choice but to give up on it.