Fierce Soldier

1. Lao Gao's new book should be about fighting for supremacy. It's very good. I like to see Lao Gao's way of writing the protagonist's ruthless methods and his cunning and domineering ways of dealing with enemies. But I hope that Lao Gao's novel can come up with some new ideas in some aspects For example: As a time traveler, in the future, in terms of governance, political structure, people's livelihood, and economic methods, there will be some advanced ideas that are different from the ancients, such as the prime minister-cabinet system, a parliamentary system with some auxiliary powers, submission of bills, and supervision of officials (House of Lords, Han Dynasty) The lower house of the gentry has some political and economic rights in local areas. There are some parliaments elected by the civilians to supervise local officials. The rights of the house are only in politics, people's livelihood, and economics. It has no military power, allowing some civilians to supervise the rights of officials to a certain extent. Abuse), create and establish a national high-level scientific research and innovation institute, encourage various military and civilian technological innovations, create an economic department to manage industry and commerce, promote business development, establish a dedicated and independent tax department that collects taxes with arms, try to avoid corruption, and establish The financial audit and approval department has established a specialized anti-corruption department (such as the Anti-Corruption Department, and local anti-corruption reporting departments that are vertically and independently managed by the central government). In the military, modern methods and ancient humanities are used to improve the military establishment structure and expand the establishment of specialized intelligence agencies. Departments, such as the Military Intelligence Department, the Royal Security Service (Foreign Intelligence Department, Internal Intelligence Department, Secret Service Department, etc.), The establishment of an independent central vertical management of the Judicial Yuan at all levels, the Judicial Procuratorate, the establishment of the Police Department, military schools, medical schools, hospitals, agriculture management of agriculture Department, the Royal Land Department that manages and verifies land and land transactions, etc. In short, it is to let the readers who act as the protagonist feel that the protagonist has some superiority over the ancients in some thoughts and knowledge, and bring some superiority and satisfaction to the readers if they were in ancient times. I think it will make the novel more attractive. Of course, I am not suggesting that Lao Gaoda should engage in black technology inventions and create things that he said he did not want to write more about. It is just to change the previous writing methods based on the ideological theory of governance and bring some new ideas to the novel 2. I suggest that in future novels, more plots of the emotional interaction between the protagonists and the heroines can be added. To put it simply, it means adding more descriptive plots for the heroines in the novel, adding more scenes for the heroines, describing their daily lives, their emotional interactions with the protagonists, and the various aspects of the heroines. Emotional thoughts, for example, some struggles between their interests, including their own, the future of their children, their balance of interests between their family and the protagonist, their interest disputes among their own families, etc., Write a full description, give some scenes, and look at the books written by Lao Gao before , it seems that only the book "Famous Family" has some descriptions and deeper shaping and drama of the heroines, while other novels really don't have much description of the heroines, and some even barely write about them. They just mention their names, take them into the palace, and then put them on the shelf and deal with them by passers-by. So, I suggest In this book, and in the books written in the future, if we add more dramas and various emotional portrayals to the heroines, then the novel will be more full and vivid 3. Why do I like Lao Gao's books? It's because there are some things I like in Lao Gao's books, including plotting, ruthless iron-bloodedness, hegemony, war, and of course some The harem, so I hope that Lao Gao's new book will be about scheming, iron-blooded hegemony, and war. In the harem, there will be more distinctive heroines who can help the protagonist in some aspects. For example, the daughter of a wealthy family in political marriage (and a woman with political wisdom) people), the daughters of military generals (female generals with martial arts abilities), the daughters of merchants with financial support (women with business talents, after the protagonist strives for power, in return, the businessman's status will be slightly improved and business development will occur), the daughter of the leader of the martial arts forces who can help as an intelligence agent (It can help the protagonist integrate the world, recruit people from the world, and join the establishment of the intelligence department). During the process of establishing power, when the weak are weak, in the current court, there are intelligent royal princesses, princesses, daughters of important court officials, and other wives and concubines. Of course, as an adjustment, arrange some of the above mentioned Thousands of gold, multiple dowry personal maids, kept as concubines, to enrich the protagonist's harem, the fullness is close to the ancient humanistic scene written in the novel (in ancient times, people of a certain status married women, multiple dowry bed-warming maids, plus two dowry daughters of common people is a common custom), it will be better to satisfy the readers

Just let the pig's feet have no relatives, they are smooth and smooth, Lao Gao, this is a rhythm that has no emotional scenes at all!

The writing is completely low-quality white text. To be honest, there is no trace of the demeanor of a great god at all. It is either a martial arts competition or a martial arts competition. How could there be so many local martial arts meetings in the Tang Dynasty? It is completely nonsense. It's not that the author doesn't understand, it's just that he wrote it like this on purpose to cater to novices. Either he is a ghostwriter, his appearance is too ugly, and he has written books without thinking.

My goal is to be all set, hehe!

The title of the book is very well written. I have read more than 300 chapters, but the main content is not explained clearly. There is a lot of ramblings. The warriors do not want to join the army yet, but they are always working as assassins. There are no serious descriptions of battlefield battles. The description of the emotional scene with the female pig's feet made me extremely disgusted. The supporting characters are brainless and the pig's feet are invincible. It is not interesting. I do not recommend reading. The setting is extremely unreasonable.

After reading hundreds of chapters, the protagonist is just a tool. He has no desires, goals, and no plans for the future. He does things without purpose. You can't tell what the protagonist's thoughts are at all. This character description is worse than that of an elementary school student. In addition, the plot is seriously delayed and watery. Many plots do not advance the main plot at all. I have no idea why the author wrote it. I guess it is just for the sake of water.

This book, well, to be honest, the protagonist kills enemies when he sees them, and never moves his head when he can do it. This alone makes the story feel interesting. After seeing that the protagonist still doesn't have a decent opponent in chapter 150, it feels like an invincible story In chapter 150, there is actually no one who can fall in love with the male protagonist. , Or girls who fall in love and want to kill each other, don't think about it. The author's skill in writing male and female plots is 0. It's normal. Authors of cool novels basically can't write this kind of thing. I read the protagonist's fight scene in Chapter 150, and most of the scenes are about the reckless man rushing up and knocking one down with one blow. This is really... Reality, in an alternate history, the setting of the protagonist cheating? Reality? Okay, if you want to talk about reality, is it realistic that meditation can increase physical fitness? Is it realistic that a body that has been trained to the extreme can maintain its current state by training for only three hours a day? To put it bluntly, the protagonist is allowed to be unrealistic and the others are all normal people. How to fight? Is it fair? Does the protagonist deserve the key? Is he worthy?

This is a soulless book, like chewing wax. I still don't know what the protagonist wants to do! Abandoned, wasting my time.

Remove the no heroine label, disgusting

I don't know why I always feel that the books written by these great writers are becoming more and more watery and tasteless.