War Map of the Realm

It can be seen that Lao Gao has had a great influence on the Qidian and Chuangshi. It is still not on the homepage recommendation list. I have to go to the bookshelf to vote every day 😅 I have always wanted to make a small suggestion. Regardless of whether it is Heroes or Soldiers, Lao Gao has shaped the protagonist into a powerful character, so the early and middle stages are very attractive to readers who like fierce generals. The key is that in the later stages, after the protagonist takes over, there is almost no place for showing force, which is a bit regretful. I hope that in the later stages of the book, even if the protagonist occasionally shows his strength, it can satisfy readers like me who like this type of book. 😊

Chapter 3: Teaching ancient aunts to dance square dance, goodbye, stupid author

It's like garbage. Just seeing the special forces makes me want to vomit. The combat effectiveness of today's special forces was almost the same as that of ordinary soldiers in ancient times. Don't write in a bad way

Got it! Chapter 100 has not yet been reached and there are two women. They are here to watch the fight for hegemony. There are so many women scenes. I'm not against you writing about relationships and harems, but it's too rough! Are you going to fall in love with her after two chapters? ? ?

After more than 700 chapters, it becomes boring. They are all a mess. It always feels like the protagonist is conquering the world for others. Yes, although the nobles are indeed better, the one who drives past the emperor and kills them is not killing chickens. Yes, it makes them jump around. It is annoying to watch.

I just read the first chapter of Time Travel with a Gun and I lost interest in reading it...

Did you sell your account? How come it has reached this level?

First of all, the author does not seem to know much about romance or history. The capital of the Sui Dynasty was called Daxing City, which was later occupied by Li Yuan and then changed to Chang'an. The fake Thirteen Taibao refers to the patron king Yang Lin. Regardless of whether Yu Wen Chengdu has a history, if there is, it is just Yu Wenji's. Well, Yu Wenshu is his grandfather and brother. Can't stand it anymore, vomiting blood

The emotional description, the setting of the heroine, and the heroine's natal family are simply a failure. I said it looked like I had seen it before, but after reading more than 400 chapters, I realized that I had indeed seen it. I fell in love with that Lu girl who appeared out of nowhere in two days. Brothers are awesome! And if the time traveler doesn't find a powerful relative or a woman with some fame, it would be even weirder to find a heroine like this than the one who left after she got married on the grassland. The two women are not so different from each other, how can they fall in love so easily that they want to die? The Lu family is so clumsy and forcibly disgusting that I couldn't stand watching the marriage. I guess it was the same the last time I watched it. It was instantly boring. Later, when I thought about the presence of such a foreign relative and the inexplicable presence of the heroine's real wife, I couldn't stand watching it. Also, you fell in love with that woman on the grassland, but you haven't borrowed it yet. People say that the author is good, but he is an idiot in describing emotions, and it is better to have a political marriage when you reach a certain level. Apart from the author's earlier inexplicable description of the heroine as being so in love that she would not marry her unless she was you, what role does this heroine have? Even if you love him to death, can't you write about his family a little better? The writing is disgusting, and I'm going to bleach it again. Isn't this the one that Japanese people like to use the most? They are disgusting in the front, but they become a family in the back. Hey, what a great book! Grass!

I really hate the fact that this kind of romance is bigger than the official history, so I have to write so many romances. What's the point of this rubbish setting of Li Xuanba hammering Yu Wen to death in Chengdu? In the Qin and Han Dynasties, the overlords had no enemies. That was the case in history. But what about Li Xuanba? Just write a novel, what is the meaning of "heroes of the Sui and Tang Dynasties"? You can write a romance, but can you please combine it with the official history? The most powerful person in the early Tang Dynasty should be Luo Shixin, followed by Qin Qiong and Yu Chigong. Good guy, he is so weak. He can't withstand Li Xuanba's blow? What a mess. The Overlord is reincarnated, so why fight? Li Shimin➕Li Xuanba=Overlord➕Han Xin, invincible