The Eagle of Humble Origins

Lao Gao, I sincerely hope that you write at the end that Li Yanqing is forced to wear a yellow robe, otherwise there will be no way to follow the next book. You have to understand the mood of reading. We spend money to enjoy reading. I have been following this book for more than a year and spent more than 200 yuan. The final ending is not good and I really can't follow the next book. I hope Gao Da understands our feelings when reading.

Maybe it's because I've been reading novels for a long time and I'm tired of reading all kinds of novels. I also want the author's writing skills to be good and the subject matter to be a little novel. Just like this book, after reading two chapters, I honestly feel that the writing is very good, but I just don't have the patience to read any more. I don't have the patience to read any book now. I just want to read some books that are lighthearted, novel and not bad in writing. It's hopeless, resulting in a continuous book shortage.

I would like to raise a few questions. 1. The issue of war This is also the biggest problem with this book. The protagonist wins every time he goes to war, which makes me have no desire to watch the protagonist fight, because I know the outcome without watching the process. This doesn't appeal to me at all. Originally, the Jingkang Incident was the biggest highlight of this book. But the author failed to write this incident well. The Jingkang Incident was a hatred between the country and the family for the Song people. There are many stories that could be written. From the emperor to the lives of ordinary people, earth-shaking changes have taken place. People were displaced and their families were destroyed. From a free man to a beggar, a servant or even a slave. It can be described from various angles, including the story of civilians who broke their families and joined the army, settled down, and rebuilt their families. The situation of officials who rebelled against the Song Dynasty. The anti-Jin uprising was raging, and the Song government troops resisted the Jin army's invasion and retreated steadily. The formation of the prototype of each military head. For example, Yue Jiajun! The brutality of the Jin army and the power of the Jurchen cavalry. About the success or failure of the war! The protagonist can still win steadily during the heyday of the Jin Dynasty, so what else is there to fight for? As long as we have enough troops, we can regain the north! There is obviously a certain gap between the combat effectiveness of the Jin Army and the Song Army! Obviously the Southern Song Dynasty is at its weakest now and cannot afford a war, a long-term war! Failure in the war is inevitable! The overall national strength is inferior to that of others. In fact, the main role of the protagonist is to force the Jin army to fight a brutal war, in which both sides suffer losses. Find a balance! Neither side dares to fight again easily! Tokyo must be captured! The Song Dynasty suffered more losses and lost power and humiliated the country! Then rest and recuperate. What was the state of their countries in the Song, Xia, Jin, and Liao dynasties? What was the attitude of the emperor and prime ministers towards the Song Dynasty? With more perspectives, the novel will be more three-dimensional. 2. The characters need to be more three-dimensional. The character building is a failure. The protagonist is too hardened to stand out from his image. It doesn't give people a big three-dimensional image. Whether it is Cai Jing, Tong Guan, Liang Shicheng, Yue Fei, Zhong Shidao's character, hobbies, how to deal with people, and how he behaves do not leave a deep impression on people. The dialogue between the characters is not life-like enough and the writing is too harsh! The main character has no personal charm. A bit deified! What about his jealousy, his impulsiveness, his suspicion, and his sorrow. His relaxed state. The biggest failure is that Yue Fei's image construction was not seen. Third, there are not enough points of conflict. The situation of Sanruan in the Song Dynasty was not described enough, and the weak nature of the Song Dynasty and the Song army was not pointed out. The shortcoming of the army is that the soldiers do not know the generals and the generals do not know the soldiers. Fighting is very rigid. As soon as the protagonist accepts the army, it seems to be like an arm in command. If you remove more constraints, you can command them to fight. After all, do you understand the shortcomings of the Song Army's system? The struggle and compromise between the monarch and his powerful ministers, the struggle between the monarch and the warlords. There was strife between military ministers and civil servants. The finances of the Song Dynasty were there, and they still occupied Taiyuan! I'm dizzy!

There were only two gold soldiers, one was a night attack and the other was a fire attack. They fought dozens of battles and easily destroyed hundreds of thousands of gold soldiers. The Jin army really doesn't have a single scout? Each time, the entire army was directly annihilated by a sneak attack. Then the generals of the Jin Army never learned their lesson. In the end, they were all beaten to the point of almost subjugating the country. They looked down on the protagonist. They didn't send scouts during the war and were easily surrounded. What the hell was this writing about?

Shen Nong is here to tell you the point of poisoning 1. A domestic slave burned his master's clan ancestral hall, but was only driven away. Before leaving, he said harsh words: I will come back sooner or later to settle the score with you. Just like this, the patriarch of a clan didn't react at all. What the hell is this? 2. The protagonist's family is so poor that he gives the only piece of cake to the dog instead of his father. 3. He is so poor that the protagonist's father can actually spend 500 yuan for funerals! As long as you take out fifty guan, you can have enough food and clothing. Either the protagonist's father is an NT, or the author is an NT. 4. The protagonist likes to be a dog for the eunuch. First Tong Guan, then Liang Shicheng 5. There are Song Jiang and other Liangshan heroes in the book, but the plot is extremely outrageous. I don't know which parallel time and space Liangshan is from. You can either write it according to the plot in Water Margin, where Song Jiang and his gang dominate the mountain and are kings, with loyalty first. Either according to the official history, Song Jiang was just a group of bandits who did not cause any big trouble. Who are the Liangshan heroes in this book? It's a franchise system. Each leader has his own tribe. A big leader like Lin Chong Chai Jin has seven or eight thousand people under his command, while a small leader has a few hundred to two thousand people under his command. You have to be careful every time you fight, because if you lose the battle, Song Jiang will have reason to annex other leaders' tribes. The leaders dislike each other and like to dig holes for each other. There is also a heroine in this novel named Hu Sanniang. No matter whether it is friend or foe, she will hit anyone who is unhappy with her with a stone. The general under the protagonist treats her as his aunt, and even though his nose bleeds after being beaten, he says that the beating was good, you are really amazing. I don't know why the author wrote such a disgusting character. 6. The protagonist knows that Qin Hui will cause trouble for him sooner or later. Qin Hui also acts as a traitor several times, causing trouble for the protagonist at every turn. But the protagonist refused to kill him several times and pretended to be a grandson in front of him. The men couldn't stand it, and the protagonist explained that this man was a representative of scholars, and if he offended him, he would offend all scholars in the world. It's really off the mark!

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 10. A domestic slave dares to burn his master's ancestral hall, and yet he can let him go if he is found out. That's awesome! ! ! Not to mention in modern times, if he dared to burn, if he was found without backing up and beaten to death, he would have to be grateful for the protection of modern laws! ! ! Not to mention that in ancient times, even if you were beaten to death, you could be said to have a good life. The government would not take care of it, and you would only pay a few dollars at most. This book really refreshed my outlook on life.

How can this kind of writing be so good? People often bully the protagonist, but every time the protagonist chooses to forgive, all the people who often bully his father are forgiven, the culprit who caused the death of the patriarch is left unkilled, and he was scolded when he stayed in the hotel, but the protagonist gave two of his teammates' rooms to them. I don't plan to read it anymore. I guess the author will keep writing this kind of plot.

This book tries its best to criticize Yue Fei. Yue Fei showed no talent at all under the protagonist. He was just like Wang Guiniu Gao, doing what the protagonist ordered, no different from a follower. Even Yan Qing's favorite is more assertive than Yue Fei As for Qin Hui, he can't bear it even more. Although Qin Hui has always been the villain in the book, the author keeps writing about how Qin Hui suffered in the Jin Kingdom and how he was ostracized after returning to the Southern Song Dynasty. For such a serious crime, when the protagonist returned to the capital, he was not beheaded, but exiled. The author went to great lengths to whitewash Qin Hui. I really don't understand his intention.

Tell me what you think of this book! 1. The protagonist can fight Mingjiao masters who have practiced martial arts at the age of six. Your six-year-old is really awesome. You can compose poems, be knowledgeable about the past and the present, and have first-class fighting skills. It is really awesome 2. The ancient gentlemen actually wanted students at every turn. Copy one of the Analects a hundred times. The paper at that time was very expensive. How many people could afford the money 3. The protagonist's father saved 10 yuan (7000 yuan) in a few years, and a noodle only cost 3 yuan. You said your father in it It cost 500 taels to bury your mother. Even if you book a five-star hotel, you don't need 500 taels. It's 500 taels. Why can your father borrow so much money? Why can anyone else borrow it? Besides, why did a funeral in ancient times cost so much money? 500 Taels. 4. The protagonist's father gave the protagonist a syrup cake that he was reluctant to eat. The protagonist turned around and gave half of it to the dog. The dog is your father, and even his own father is willing to eat it. There are also a lot of poisonous points. It doesn't matter whether you are an old bookworm or a newcomer.

This author is too busy, writing history for so many years, and has no time to read some history books