The Immortal Heroes of Heluo

I've been following this series for years, and today I saw there's a new book out, so I came to support it. Fueled by my love for the "Ultimate Series" back then, I've now started writing one myself. 🤭

This is much better than the last one; the last one was truly a complete mystery.

I really enjoy reading Ling Dong's books. I've followed them all from "The Supreme Female Immortal" to "The Supreme Flying Immortal." The plots and structures are excellent, but there's one aspect I hope she can improve: the flow of time. If it's a learning space where the female protagonist's soul is pulled in to learn the theories of weapon crafting, array making, alchemy, and talisman making…

I don't really like it. It feels like the cheat code is too much. Cheat codes can exist, but I prefer a system where 90% is based on your own efforts, 5% on luck, and 5% on cheat codes.

Regardless of what future works may be like, "The Supreme Female Immortal" will always be my number one Xianxia novel. Respect to the author.

"The Ultimate Female Immortal" is my favorite novel over the years, and no other book can surpass it. However, I feel that the quality of "The Flying Immortal" has dropped significantly. I have been holding back from reading it and waiting for the author to finish "The Flying Immortal" and start a new book to continue the glory of "The Ultimate Female Immortal".

Author, you have the ability to write a good book, so why not find a good subject and write it properly, and start a new book, like "The Supreme Female Immortal"? Make the cultivation system more rigorous, the cultivation background more subtle, and the scope more solid. Also, give the protagonist some kind of theme, but don't make the entire sect or cultivation world seem pretentious or empty.

I really want to write a novel where the female lead is a demon and there's no romantic pairing, something about the rise of the demon race or something? I feel like there's no such genre.

I've been getting freebies from this site for years, and today I'm finally supporting the official version.

The book's status isn't showing as "completed" yet. Are there any side stories? I remember there are still some plot holes left unfilled. For example, what happened to the other siblings, and what became of the one who hid underground to forge the Heaven-Opening Axe? At the very least, there should be an epilogue, right?