The Immortal Heroes of Heluo

I have been following it for many years, and today I saw a new book. Come and support me. With my love for the best series back then, I have now started writing it myself 🤭

It's more conscientious than the previous one. The whole book was really fascinating.

I still like reading the big books. From "The Best Female Fairy" to "The Best Flying Fairy", I have watched them all. The layout of the plot is excellent, but there is only one thing that I hope can be greatly improved, and that is about the flow of time. If it is a learning space, drag the soul of the heroine in to learn the theoretical knowledge of refining weapons and formations, and refining alchemy and talismans for thousands of years. When you come out to the real world, your theoretical knowledge has increased by thousands of years, but your age has not increased. We can understand it, but if you drag the body into practice and come out to the real world, the body's cultivation and spiritual power have increased for thousands of years, but the age of the body has not changed. Then such a time mystery is a bit too mysterious, a bit contradictory, and incomprehensible.

I don't like it very much. I feel that this cheat is too big. Cheats can exist, but I like that 90% depends on myself, 5% depends on luck, and 5% relies on cheats.

No matter what the future works will be, "The Best Fairy" will always be the first fairy tale in my heart, and I pay tribute to the author.

The Best Fairy has been my favorite novel for so many years. No other novel can surpass it. However, I feel that the level of Feixian has dropped, a lot. I have been holding back from reading it and have been waiting for the author to finish Feixian and open a new book to continue the glory of Fairy. I really love the female fairy so much that after reading the female fairy, except for Caishi Ji and Emperor Shen Tongjian, I can't read any other immortality novels. Although the level of Feixian has dropped, the worldview structure and writing are much better than other immortality novels (after all, the worldview continues the female fairy). Unfortunately, I have been manipulated by the female fairy and I can't read it. I am very happy to see that Ling Dong has opened a new book^_^, but I am also very, very nervous. I was so nervous that I didn't dare to click on it when I saw the bad reviews in the comment area. I was afraid that I would not be able to get excited again, and I was afraid that my long-awaited expectations would be disappointed. I'm really afraid that the long wait will fail. But it seems that it was a bit expected.

Author, you have the ability to write a good book, why don't you find a good subject and write it well, start a new book, like the best female fairy, the system of cultivating immortality should be more rigorous, the background of cultivating immortality should be more obscure, the layout should not be loose, give the protagonist some ideas, and don't let the whole sect or the world of immortality cultivation be easily false.

I really want to write a non-CP novel where the heroine is a demon, representing the rise of the demon clan or something? I don't think there is such a theme

I have been prostituted in the pavilion for several years, and today I am here to support the genuine version.

The status of this book does not show "Completed" yet. Are there any extras? Remember there are still holes to fill. For example, what happened to the other brothers and sisters, and what happened to the one who was hiding underground refining the Sky-Opening Ax? At the very least, there should be a final statement, right?