A Heart Full of Moonlight

A different kind of fairy tale I really like this heroine, and her growth is exciting. She is not the kind of heroine who is mature and stable from the beginning, nor is she a heroine who plays the role of a pig in a low-key manner. She has a kind of "fighting" that is rarely seen among women. The kind of fighting in the main road, not the kind of fighting in the palace, which is good. Looking forward

It's good to have no male protagonist! Come on, author! Take away and fatten. Those who are cultivators of immortality should devote themselves to seeking the Tao. Those who are cultivators of immortality and fall in love should just get married and have children.

Xiaoyun rarely leaves book reviews. Most books are not worthy of review. Most of them are complaints. After writing for a long time, they were deleted orz So, books that are willing to review must be worthy of review, and they will naturally give very high evaluations. Regarding this book, in addition to really liking it, I also received a lot of criticism. I felt that many people didn't understand it, so I couldn't help but say a few words. Don't complain that Ming Yueguang doesn't practice any skills, kills people, seizes treasures, and encounters unexpected opportunities. Don't you get tired of seeing so many similar things? The essence of this book (the first half) is not a fairy tale at all, but a serious literature, traditional literature with a fairy background. Is it difficult to have those cool moments you want? No, the cheaper the work, the more it is full of those things. What the author is really writing about here is his own ideals, the various aspects of life and society, and the principles of dealing with others. The most valuable thing is that when I explain something to you, it can also attract you to pursue it without stopping. Unlike most books that promote positive energy and cover up ignorance because the author has no ideas, Lipstick Sister knew what she wanted to write and how to write it from the beginning. The unique entry point, the unique characterization, the plain and tense plot development, it doesn't matter whether you can find it between the lines, the fleeting details, all implicitly show the heritage and charm like the author. Xiaoyun has read more or less Xianxia, ​​and I have read a little of the most famous ones. But I still wrote this topic out of my heart. Some works are destined to be impossible to be appreciated by most people, but it is precisely such things that contain the value of literature and art, the treasures that real creators want to pursue. Only the first half is mentioned in the title because I only saw a hundred chapters. It's hard to say whether it will be good or not, but we can see some hidden dangers. Let's be blunt here, give lipstick sister a warning. The main problem is rhythm and structure. As an author in the IQ department, Xiaoyun knows that he currently cannot write such a vivid, three-dimensional, real and lovable character creation as the one written by Liphong Sister. This is an innate limitation of his focus. But Lipstick Sister also has the limitations of an emotional intelligence author, which is the lack of a clear and detailed plan for the rhythm, direction, and ups and downs of the story. If Xiaoyun's guess is correct, Sister Lipstick may not have even written down the thoughts of the Nascent Soul Empress in detail, right? It is precisely because of this that although the characters at each stage have depth and clarity, it is a bit difficult to accept and feels slightly disconnected. Also, from the author's words in each chapter, I feel that Lipstick Sister cares deeply about the readers' opinions, but also doesn't care about them at all. Be firm in your Taoism like your heroine. Whether you insist on speaking out with reason and insisting on fighting back, or humbly accepting and truly learning from others, it is better than wavering in a state of duplicity. Monks practice cultivation, and writers cultivate their hearts. This is a calamity that we cannot circumvent the past www I have said a lot, but looking back, it seems more obscure and implicit than the text of Lipstick Sister... I hope it can be passed on. I have to hurry up and update my own article, "Lamarck's Game". Chapter 1002 will be published in the early morning. If Sister Lipstick is interested, you can watch www

I'm the one who read Chapter 32 Seriously, it's been a long time since I've seen such a well-written book in the Immortal Cultivation Edition section. The writing is even better than many of the fairy tales on the recommendation list. Especially the first chapter, the writing is really delicate and engaging, with no flaws at all. But since she became a disciple, it felt like it was broken. Several times I silently looked at the catalog, wondering if I had been swallowed by Qidian. At this point, I finally understand why a book with such good writing is ranked so low 😂 The author's writing style is absolutely fine and very delicate, but the plot is fractured. I often enter a new copy while watching it, and I have no idea what happened in the middle. One character suddenly appears and another disappears, so I often suspect that I have been swallowed. In the end, the author should have looked up a lot of information to write, but I and other mortals really can't understand it. For example, when they were fighting formations, although I wanted to study their fighting formations carefully, the reality should be like a qi practitioner watching a golden elixir fight, and I didn't even see the moves clearly. Finally, I'm here to ask if you saw the kiss in the back, is the plot coherent in the back?

I was about to abandon it when I saw the eunuch, but I couldn't help but read it to the end. It turns out that the last paragraph is the highlight. How could you abandon the article at such a critical moment? Puzzled. Anyway, I still hope this book can be written down, it's really good to read... Hey, I'm about to fall into a book drought again 😟

In fact, I had already deleted all the apps I use to read novels because of my studies, but because I really couldn't let go of this one, I ended up downloading it all over again. I don't really like to post comments when I read novels, but I really couldn't help myself with this book. I haven't found a cultivation novel that suits my taste in a long time. As I have said before, at first I just thought this novel was very novel in some settings, but later on, I liked the character of the heroine more than these settings. I really like girls like Xiao Du, who are capable and ambitious, who know what they want and work tirelessly for it. In addition, many supporting characters are also very well portrayed. The author, I hope you will give Xiao Du and this book a satisfactory conclusion. It doesn't matter even if you write slower. I will always like Xiao Du and will definitely wait for you to finish this book. If I can't catch up with you every day, I will definitely come back to read this book after my study is over The author, come on

The best article on cultivating immortality that I have recently discovered! Both the heroine's personality and the supporting characters' images are very real and plump, not a castle in the air, and the heroine's early flaws cannot cover up her personal charm in the slightest. I have always felt that the joy of writing is not limited to the protagonist's perfect destiny. The protagonist needs to be excellent, but he does not have to be perfect. It is really refreshing to see a person with talent, luck and will continue to struggle and polish himself to finally become a beauty! If you don't donate to Tang Dynasty, you will succeed. I'm talking about Lan Zhen. Come on 😘😘😘

First of all, I would like to express my great love for the author ヽ(*´з｀*)ﾉ As a bookworm who has been reading for five years, I actually don't know much about the Xianxia circle. In the past five years, I have read most ancient and modern novels, then fast travel, and finally fantasy and youth. I only came into contact with Xianxia at the beginning of this year (I used to read the Xianxia plane in quick travel). The first one was "It's Hard to Find an Immortal", but I didn't read it due to writing and setting problems (don't hit me, I really hate the furnace and chaos settings); then there was "The Immortal", but to be honest, that book did not seriously cultivate immortality, it was all conspiracy and past lives; later I read I read "The Marginal Character She Was Reborn", the heroine is a genius, the setting is okay, but the writing is too bad, the screen is full of pupils and dark lights; then "The Legend of Wei Zixiu", it is quite good, but it is unfinished... Finally, I looked for other books, such as "The Legend of the Wood Immortal", "The Immortal Jue", "The Atlas of Immortals" and "The Emperor's Divine Tongjian", I read a little bit of them, but couldn't stand it. It's not that the books are bad, it's just that I have unique taste (ｰ̀εｰ́) and I don't mean to criticize them. I am glad that I found "Moonlight in My Heart". It has most of what I want: genius, a large sect, not a virgin, no male protagonist but ambiguity, IQ but not just conspiracy, decisive killing, deep city but also youthful rebellion, arrogance and various minor problems, a group of excellent female supporting characters, a lovely master, a small amount of golden fingers... As for what it lacks, I think it is its dialogue. Maybe the author wanted to be more humorous, so he added some modern elements, but it would make the work a bit nondescript (sorry <(_ _)>). Then there is the small problem of updates. There are fewer updates every day, and people want more (๑>؂<๑) The following spoilers, please read with caution! Let me talk about some of my favorite plots. The first is that Lan Zhen worked so hard to become a disciple in Xiaoxie that he forgot all about food and sleep, and ultimately failed. We have all worked hard, but not everyone can get rewards. This is very realistic. Then she was undercover for fifteen years, which I think is enough to prove her tenacity and extraordinary endurance, and it also developed her leadership qualities. Then there's the commercial she shot, Three-Point Fairy, tsk tsk, very interesting. For Lan Zhen herself, I like her bitch. How cute she is! She never denies her ambition and always has the strength and strategy to match her ambition. She pretends to be a gentle and charming big sister and has gained countless fans. You can say she is pretending, or you can say she has high emotional intelligence. It depends on whether you are rational enough. I love her craziness and decisive bravery. She likes to make a desperate move, likes to take the initiative, likes to face difficulties, likes to fight against the sky... She is so charming. Overall, I really enjoyed this book.

I was recommended to read this article by a friend. I just came here with the intention of giving it a try. Unexpectedly, I found it to my liking. I was very happy to discover a treasure. What this article brings to me is a story of cultivating immortality with an unusual setting but an extraordinary sense of comfort: the world setting is unusual, the inheritance setting is unusual, and the heroine setting is unusual. The heroine was born in a relatively lucky little world. I've seen a lot of cultivation, and I've seen a lot of ascending to the upper realm, but a lot of it has been about flattering the superior and scorning the inferior. This is the first time I've heard of bringing my own family up to the upper realm. But it is a setting that is very fitting and in line with national characteristics. After all, the hero of Wai Guo Ren saves the world alone. When we encounter the apocalypse, we still want to escape with the earth (ahem). The heroine is a direct disciple of Xuanmen who has deep roots and Miaohong. She will definitely become a true disciple in the future. She has a sense of belonging and honor to the sect. This is commonplace. But when you reach a high level, you can kill your fellow disciples to achieve enlightenment. This is a bit more novel and cruel. I have always felt that although this article is about cultivation, it is very realistic. Just like when you step out of a sect, you still have to rely on yourself. The path of cultivation can be walked alone. As a person grows up, it is also a process of becoming more and more independent. The character of the protagonist itself is also unconventional. Some people think that the heroine is very ambitious and dislike it, but I think there is nothing wrong with having ambitions, especially when you still have the ability to achieve them. (I even think people who want something are more attractive than people who seem to want nothing. Who doesn't have some desire? But many people dare not admit it. Putting ambition on the bright side is much more upright than saying that you don't want anything. Just like the heroine is cultivating immortality in order to achieve Taoism, monks all over the world have the same goal, who deserves to look down on who.) I prefer Lan Zhen, and I am happy to see Lan Zhen reach the distance she desires step by step. I think she is refreshing and unpretentious, and she puts everything she wants on the table. Instead, she gives me a sense of innocence and integrity that a gentleman can tell others about everything. What does it mean to have a strong female protagonist without cp? Especially for someone like me who originally watched Lily, there are more red herrings in the novel without cp, but there is no better reassurance than "The author assures you that the female protagonist is the strongest. If she is not the strongest yet, it will only be a matter of time." The author's assurance on the issue of men's clothing 13 also makes people laugh 233333. Really cool. Very enjoyable to watch. In short, I like it, I like it very much! I've seen a lot of regular cultivation, so I was very excited when I saw this kind of article that hit the point of cuteness. Actually, I also want to tell the author that I think you are cool. Great. The author thought so from the beginning when he was criticized by the great educators and still insisted on himself. I think the author may consider readers' preferences, but after all, he writes about the world in his own mind. It is a great trait not to be carried away. After all, it is difficult to agree with others, and it is more admirable not to cater to readers too much. I know that the Internet literary world is in a sluggish environment right now, and it is even more difficult for new authors to break through, but this does not mean that the authors are not good enough. Maybe it's just a bit of bad luck, and the alley is too dark for the fragrance of wine. I can feel that the author is proud of you, which is what you should be, because you are already excellent and cute. This is the main reason why the author attracted me to come to Dianjia to spend money. When I came to Dianjia from another place, I said a lot of unintelligible things. In fact, I just wanted to say that the author is great and your work deserves a lot of love and praise. Even though many people now owe these compliments, I believe that sooner or later more people will double them back to you.

I particularly like the first ten chapters. The heroine has a lot of energy, but after the heroine is accepted as a disciple by Yuanying, the heroine becomes more and more different. It seems that she does not seem to be written by one person. The heroine in the first dozen chapters is obviously very spiritual, has a spirit, and is particularly attractive. As a result, the heroine who grew up as a disciple, as a reader, I can't feel her personality charm in the first dozen chapters. It is not only a problem with the heroine's design, the author does not describe much about her training or fighting scenes, but spends a lot of space describing other things. Things, such as communication, are very similar to ordinary ancient otaku fights. Although there is no otaku fight, the plot is very good. The heroine is always praised through others, and the genius is praised. Judging from the focus of the description of the article, a lot of space was devoted to describing the heroine when I was a child. Self-improvement, but when I grew up, I didn't see the heroine's cultivation in large parts. The focus of most of the article was on the heroine's communication. It's a pity. The child who was so cute in the first dozen chapters didn't have that spirit when he grew up, and he also loved describing too much. The heroine is so beautiful and so and so is so beautiful. Every few chapters, the heroine is so beautiful and talented. It makes me feel that the heroine is really boring when she grows up. I think based on the heroine's setting in the first dozen chapters, the subsequent plot should be about learning the Fa from Senior Sister Wen after becoming a disciple. Techniques take up a lot of space, but the author did not write about them at all. He just kept writing about how the heroine hopes to build a foundation before she is twenty years old. The key point is that she did not look at how hard the heroine practiced, nor did she describe how she contacted the basic techniques. Moreover, according to the heroine's temperament, she actually I can still learn how to fight in a few years. Even if Senior Sister Wen doesn't teach me, the heroine's unruly and unyielding character as a child will definitely not be ignored. The purpose of cultivating immortality is not to smooth out the character. What's the point of cultivating? In fact, the author's writing style is very good. Well, I wrote so much because this article is above the standard. If there is a next article, I suggest you write more about the heroine when she was a child, so that she can grow up slowly. When she grows up, it is best to focus on cultivation. I believe that the author will become a great god in time.