A Leisurely Path to Immortality

I saw 142. I stayed up all night watching it and felt a little disappointed. The following is purely a reflection after reading. Maybe because the author didn't want to give the heroine too many golden fingers, he gave all the golden fingers to her relatives. But so far, I really feel that the heroine is particularly weak, both in terms of character and legal battle. Perhaps the character is intended to be a sinister one? Calm? Still? I feel that the characters are not as vivid as her sister. Secondly, in magic fighting, the swordsmanship is not good, and the physical fitness is not good. It is obviously the extremely pure fire and wood dual spiritual roots. There are two groups of fire, but it is almost impossible to use. It is obviously the wood spiritual root. At present, it does not reflect the wood spiritual roots at all, and it has no affinity with plants at all. Even in the bow and arrow she is best at, she has no clue what her strength is. Is she capable of double-shooting or what? The description of fighting scenes is indeed a weakness of many female protagonists. I didn't come here with any hope. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not waste such a good beginning.

The family setting is very warm, and other settings are normal, but the heroine is particularly fond of swordsmanship. She has been practicing physical training since she was a child, but she took the path of law cultivation and became a master of alchemy. It took her four years to learn the sword skills. I hope the author can take the main line of the heroine into consideration. She has learned everything and has everything, which will inevitably give people the feeling of cheating. Something must be given up.

So the purpose of this novel is to write that the heroine is an ordinary person cultivating immortality. She doesn't have so many golden fingers, so the heroine's opportunities and roles are given to Shi Xing? ? ? ? Even the eldest sister has a more three-dimensional image than the heroine, so what kind of heroine is she? ? ? ?

This book is quite good, but its downfall is that the heroine is too unprogressive in the early stages. She is so talented, but she thinks it would be better if she didn't have spiritual roots, so she wouldn't have to practice immortality. I read this book half a year ago and was attracted by the lack of a male protagonist. However, after reading a few chapters, I gave up because I disliked the heroine's lazy character. Recently, there was really no book to read, so I had the patience to read it again. Before The first thirty chapters are devoted to the heroine's unwillingness to make progress and fish in troubled waters, and there is a lot of procrastination and nonsense. After chapter 30, it finally gets on the right track, and the heroine's mentality begins to change. God knows how difficult it was before chapter 30. There are no male protagonists, and there are too few stories about women who don't enslave themselves as concubines, so I can only endure it. Fortunately, after chapter 30, it is still satisfactory.

A Xian is so cute, I love A Xian (｡･ω･｡) The characters in this article are very plump, and have cute attributes, and their IQ is online. The heroine is big, smart and strong, and she is strong with reason and does not rely on golden fingers. The setting of Sister Ming as Goldfinger is very interesting, and A Xian's experience is also in line with the experience of normal people. In short, it makes people look relaxed and interesting. Support the author greatly ✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺

It's too verbose, and there are so many typos. I tried it several times when I was short of books. The most I saw was the Ten Thousand Sects Test. Many of the settings in it were unreasonable and seemed quite awkward. The heroine's character was also lacking in a spirit of progress. Although she often said that she had thought clearly and woke up, she just set the flag and never saw her actually take action.

I think the current literature on cultivating immortals is a bit extreme. Either the heroine is given a golden finger to make the readers doubt their life. Or no benefit will be given to the heroine at all. I'm afraid that readers will say that the heroine is given a golden finger. But isn't it just for the benefit of you to experience and hunt for treasure? Of course it will make the heroine feel aggrieved if there is no benefit at all.

The author's writing style and conception are very good, but when writing a novel, there must be priorities and priorities, and there must be trade-offs. Describing everything in detail without priorities makes the reader very tired. Although the lengthy description is still better than many hydrology, I hope it can be improved and a lot of unnecessary descriptions will be deleted.

When I see it now, I feel that Shi Xing is more like the heroine. Mu Xin and the Snow Demon are all hers. There is a person who seems to be reborn and knows her but not Shi Xian. That is, there was no such person as Shi Xian in the previous life, and Shi Xing is in the same situation as the heroine. Although I also like family harmony, Shi Xing has too many scenes. Now I see Shi Xing fall into the ancient demon, and then want to transform into a demon cultivator, what do I think? ? ? Isn't this usually the heroine's role?

As an old bookworm, I give this work a thumbs up. I have read a lot of books on cultivating immortality and cultivating the truth. After reading too many books, I will never leave them. There are all kinds of adventures, all kinds of cheats, and after one map is finished, another map is opened, a bit like an old lady's foot wrap. Although this work is indispensable for various routines and cheats, the heroine has an independent personality. From being too lazy to practice at the beginning, to being moved by her family to practice; she cooperates with the tsundere second sister, and the sisterly love is deep, until the second sister is murdered, the heroine strives for revenge; from the excitement of apprenticeship to the daily life of master and disciple despising each other, practicing separately with the eldest sister, caring for each other and supporting each other, it is really a good work worth watching.