Shiranui Genma of Konoha

In-depth discussion on how strong the current protagonist is 1. Flying Thunder God Technique, Second Stage 2. Chakra level around the top of Jonin. 3. New weapon plus lightning release 4. Rasengan variant The advantage is that he knows a little bit about everything, but the disadvantage is that he doesn't have a real finishing move.

If Shisui is Kagami's son, and according to the Book of Formations, Kagami died at the age of 25, then Shisui would be of the same generation as Jiraiya and the others. Even if there's a significant age gap, and he was born posthumously, he would only be about ten years younger than Jiraiya and the others, making him roughly the same age as Minato.

This bashing is unreasonable. Some characters can be bashed, like Obito, but even Obito was just an ordinary child, yet he's portrayed as mentally unstable. Some books have questionable values, but those are just the protagonists. This book, in its sole purpose of bashing the Uchiha clan, has depicted the entire Uchiha group as insane. Is this supposed to be Itachi? It seems like a completely new character created solely for the purpose of bashing them!

The early parts were well-written, but what's with all the changes to the original setting in the middle part? Samehada is made from fish from the Kusakawa River? The manga clearly states that it's a small fish that accompanies the Three-Tails, but now you're giving me countless fish? Since you're changing the original setting like this, why don't you just write that Naruto is Danzo's son?

If the cheat system is too overpowered, the plot will fall apart, but if it's too underpowered, it's not very satisfying to watch!

Author, you said the Uchiha clan was too extreme, but actually, it's you who's too extreme. You're too obsessed with the Uchiha clan, to the point that you've completely poured your own emotions into the book. What could have been a perfect book only gets around 80 points because of your own emotions. Obsession is a good thing. But letting it become an emotional thing turns it into a bad thing.

I feel like the author wrote this book to vilify the Uchiha clan.

The Third HokageBeating up Orochimaru really really shocked me; this isn't how you force a character to become evil.

I can't hold back my urge to complain anymore. To be honest, the novel is very well written, but those "notes" that pop up every now and then are really annoying. Why don't you leave any explanations for the author at the end of the chapter? I'm reading a novel, and you give me a note about something, then ramble on about irrelevant things to pad the word count.

Pretty toxic. I haven't watched it since Shippuden. The Uchiha clan is arrogant, not stupid; they possess power yet are lonely. This is definitely Uchiha Danzo!