Shiranui Genma of Konoha

In-depth discussion on how strong the current protagonist is 1. Flying Thunder God 2nd Dan 2. Chakra is around the top of Jonin 3. New weapons plus Thunder Release 4. Rasengan variant Advantages: Know a little bit about everything, disadvantages: There is no real sure-kill skill. Looking at the Naruto world, every Kage-level master has his own special kill, such as the third generation of mixed ninjutsu, Jiraiya Sage mode, and the fourth generation of high-end Flying Thunder God! The top jounin in overall strength

If Shisui is Kagami's son, and Kagami's age is set to be 25 according to the book of formations, then is Shisui the same generation as Jiraiya and the others? No matter how big the age gap is, he is a posthumous son. He is at most ten years younger than Jiraiya and the others, so he is about the same age as Minato. . .

The writing was good in the early stage, but in the middle stage, what the hell are you doing to change the basic settings of the original work? Is Sharakagi made from fish from the Kusakawa River? In the comics, it is clearly stated that there are three small fish with accompanying tails. Now you can make countless of them for me? Since the basic setting of the original work has been changed, why don't you write that Naruto is Danzo's son?

There is no reason to be dark. Some people can be dark, such as Obito, but even Obito was just an ordinary child when he was a child. This can still be written as a mental problem. Some books have problems with their outlook on life, but the protagonists are also the protagonists in the novel. However, this book directly portrays all Uchiha as psychopaths for the purpose of black Uchiha. Is it about Itachi? ? This is a new character created entirely for the sake of blackness! !

If you open the gold finger too high, the plot will jump out, but if you open it too low, it won't be fun to watch!

Author, you said that Uchiha is too extreme, but in fact it should be you who are too extreme. You are so obsessed with Uchiha that you completely bring your emotions into the book. The book could have been 100% but because of it. Your own emotions can only be reduced to about 80%. Persistence is a good thing. But put him emotionally. It becomes a bad thing. After all, this is your book, and you should try your best to make it 100% perfect. This is a qualified author. I hope you can let go of your obsession and write a better novel. I will come to read your new book next time. This is my little personal suggestion, I hope it helps you.

I feel like the author wrote this book for Black Uchiha.

SandaiThe beating of Orochimaru was really poisonous to me, and the forced blackening was not written like that

I can't bear my desire to complain. To be honest, the novel is well written, but the "notes" that pop up from time to time really make me fed up. If you have any settings that need to be explained, would it be inappropriate for the author to put them at the end of the chapter? I'm reading a novel, give me a sentence to note something, and then pull out some irrelevant things to make up the word count. I can understand that you want to explain your own settings. After all, it is a fan, not an original work. It is normal to have your own ideas. But could you please stop inserting a "note" in the middle of the text from time to time?

It's quite poisonous. I probably haven't seen it since Shippuden. Uchiha is arrogant, not stupid. He has power but is lonely. This is a proper Uchiha Danzo.