A Great Adventure in a Primitive Tribe

Just because the author can insist on writing a book with more than 7 million words without being a prisoner, this is worth a look 👍

To be honest, I also really hope that the author can write well, but generally speaking, the author's writing style is very poor, and his ability to express people is very poor. It is like keeping a running account. It reads like a boring book, just like expressing one person's love for another person, directly saying that he loves her, without any other environment, emotion, and tone. It is very ordinary, I hope to improve, come on! ! ! ! ! 11

So it's boring. They say that less fighting and more invention can make the protagonist feel better. Even in the original book, although he didn't use his past life memories to invent items, he still cheated the protagonist to make him a unique being. Moreover, there are not many battles in the book, and he prefers to find relics and treasures to reflect the uniqueness of the protagonist. What can he do with fighting? Will everyone die without you? To put it simply, the protagonist of this book has no characteristics and makes people feel that he is charming and can attract everyone's attention, so it is not good-looking.

I can't stand it anymore after reading chapter 50. This is the worst primitive blog novel I have ever read. The main character has no characteristics and is just a selfish bitch. The supporting characters are also like idiots. From the looks of it, they are just a bunch of idiots who can invent things to enjoy themselves.

I only see suspicion, jealousy, distrust, hostility, contempt, ridicule, sneer, stupidity in your tribe, full of pages about whether you are really like you, whether you really don't need a rest, whether you can really do it, whether you can really do it, and no unity or blood between tribes. Is your tribe too strong, or is your world too weak? The fact that such a tribe is not destroyed is the author's biggest failure. I read dozens of chapters without vomiting, and I feel too poisoned to read anymore.

This book written by the author has written more than four million words. It is indeed awesome. I admire it. I tried to read it because of this. After all, the book's performance is indeed not good, but I couldn't read it after only reading a few dozen chapters. The author can write well, but it feels a bit taken for granted. It doesn't feel like a primitive society, and it feels closer to the era of freedom and democracy. Every now and then, people gather around a circle to cause trouble, and they are very idle. After dozens of chapters, I only see witches, but not leaders. Moreover, the prestige of witches is not high, and it is difficult to deal with troubles. Originally, I shouldn't talk about the settings of other books. I should read the book according to the settings given by the author, but I really can't get into the drama. The protagonist can do whatever he wants. He can easily make paper and pottery, and he can also directly make large items such as pots and vats. Isn't it too easy? And please note that the protagonist is only 10 years old at this time, while Bao is over 90 years old. Calculating the age level, a 10-year-old should still be a child in the book, but when reading the book, do you feel that others treat him as a 10-year-old child? Even those real children treat him as an adult, right? The feeling of incongruity here is high. Furthermore, the Flame Snake tribe was set up to have experienced a disaster many years ago. Why do they still feel so comfortable? There is no sense of mutual support between them. Instead, they feel like they can fight over anything. Moreover, after escaping here, it feels like the territory is very large. The protagonist still has to build a garden and other pleasure-oriented things. Wu actually thinks this is very good and thoughtful. You know that to do this, it is better to change the house to have a heated kang, so that it will be less cold in the winter. These are all things that I personally think are inappropriate after reading dozens of chapters. Of course I am not writing so much to criticize the author. I just feel that since the author can insist on writing so many words, why not try to write better. I believe that the author can write it based on what he writes. The original type is good. There are not many articles, and the best one is Primitive War Chronicles. Others have more or less the shadow of this book. The best one is Rebirth of the Primitive Era. It looks like a replica, but the results are not bad. It does not mean that you should copy the ideas, but you should write about the original characteristics, survival, and building a home in the wilderness. These are all. The battles between people are more common in ancient times and modern times. If you want to write about this, it is better to write about the city. Primitive people are not stupid, but they don't think so much about people. They may be a little cunning, but they certainly don't have too many intrigues. This is a problem of the times. There are too many eunuchs nowadays, and there are too few like the author. I sincerely hope that the author can persevere and get an equal reward for his perseverance. There's not much to say, there are only two monthly passes, come on!

In the first chapter, something goes wrong. You must know that the number of tribes in primitive society is not too large. The reason is that the radius of activity for hunting food is limited. Just like ancient wars, when the number of soldiers exceeds a hundred people moving, supplies are needed, but if a dozen or so people overcome it, they are basically not needed. Of course, the density of edible animals and plants in primitive societies was higher. But as you move, like cattle and sheep, the grass renews. While settled, the surrounding food cannot be updated in time.          ，，， Such as planting or animal husbandry. Otherwise, the food supply or ecological chain will collapse very quickly, and even the ecological chain may collapse. Not to mention tribes with tens of thousands of people. With tens of thousands, there is basically a social division of labor, and the social division of labor will definitely include service-oriented handicrafts. And there will be more types, and there will be business exchanges.

After reading more than 50 chapters, I can't stand it anymore. "It's true or false. You're lying. How is it possible? What's the reason..." The male protagonist is full of doubts and distrust of the primitive tribe hunter teacher who teaches him many times in each chapter. It's so funny. How many fat-bellied people would want to teach such a person? These portray the male protagonist's character so poorly

Being able to write seven million dollars in this book is really a sign of perseverance. It's not just a hobby of the rich second generation, but I really like writing. I admire it.

It really doesn't feel like it's written in a primitive society. In a primitive society, people are supposed to be fighting against all kinds of things (natural disasters, wild beasts, hunger, etc.) For survival. After reading a hundred chapters, I only feel two words of comfort, which are more comfortable than modern people. There is no death or crisis, there is too much food to eat every day, and a group of high-ranking tribesmen revolve around the protagonist, brother? Uncle? Are you sure that primitive society has so many names, and is it so reasonable? Even the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors are only called by one word, for example, Yao! Shun! Yu! Just call each other one word when meeting. If you call them Brother Yao, Brother Shun, or Brother Yu, it feels like the modern way of building relationships. So what the hell are your Uncle Bao, Brother Lei, and Brother Yun!