A Great Adventure in a Primitive Tribe

The fact that the author managed to write over 7 million words without abandoning the book is enough to make it worth watching. 👍

To be honest, I really hoped the author could write well, but overall, the writing style is very poor, lacking in expressive ability. It reads like a diary entry, bland and tasteless. It's like expressing love for someone by simply saying "I love you," without any context, emotion, or tone—very ordinary. I hope they improve. Keep it up!

So it's quite boring. Everyone says that less fighting and more inventions are needed to highlight the protagonist's appeal. Even in the book "Primal Chronicles," although the protagonist didn't use his past life memories to invent anything, he was still given a power-up that made him unique.

I couldn't continue after 50 chapters. This is the worst primitive tribe novel I've ever read. The protagonist has no distinguishing features; he's just a selfish idiot. The supporting characters are also like trash. It's basically a bunch of idiots inventing things and having fun on their own.

All I saw in your tribe was suspicion, distrust, hostility, contempt, ridicule, sneer, and stupidity. The entire text was filled with questions like "Are you really like this or that?", "Do you really not need rest?", "Are you really capable?", And "Are you really competent?". There was not a trace of tribal unity or fighting spirit. Is your tribe too powerful, or is your world too weak?

The author has already written over four million words, which is truly impressive and admirable. That's why I tried reading it, especially since the book's performance wasn't great. However, I couldn't continue after only a few dozen chapters. The author is capable of writing, but it feels somewhat contrived. It doesn't feel like a primitive society; it feels more like a free and democratic era.

The problem arose in the very first chapter. It's important to understand that tribes in primitive societies were generally small in number because their hunting radius was limited. Just like in ancient warfare, when the number of soldiers exceeds one hundred, they need to be resupplyed, but when ten or so soldiers overcome the obstacle, they basically don't need to.

I couldn't continue reading after chapter 50. "Really? You're lying? How could that be? What's the reason?" The male protagonist is filled with doubt and distrust towards his tribal hunter teacher in every chapter. It's ridiculous! What kind of magnanimous person would willingly teach someone like that? This portrays the male protagonist as such a terrible character.

To write a book that's seven million words truly takes perseverance. It's not just a hobby for rich kids; it's a genuine love for writing. I admire that!

It really doesn't feel like a primitive society. In a primitive society, people should be struggling for survival against all sorts of things (natural disasters, wild animals, hunger, etc.). After reading a hundred chapters, all I get is a sense of ease, even more so than modern people.