Dragon Ball: Legend of the Shepherd

Recently, people keep talking about resurrecting Frieza, and I just want to scold them. Resurrect your brother-in-law. Not to mention what I wrote in the previous book. Just say that Frieza will reach the gold level (at least more than 100 billion combat power) after being resurrected and practicing for four months. How can you stop Mu Yang? Even if Mu Yang's cheating (it's basically impossible to improve that much in four months) can defeat Frieza, then Mu Yang's combat power will exceed 100 billion, how can you continue to write it down? Write another one with a combat power of 100 billion and an android with a combat power of 800 million? How many billions of fighting power does Sadsaru have? Or does Nabu Buu have tens of billions of fighting power? Writing about Frieza's resurrection now would be a failure. What's your psychology behind instigating the author to write about Frieza's resurrection?

The plot doesn't have enough women to join in...

This is the best Dragon Ball fanfic I have ever read, and the plot is well laid out.

It's time to raise it, author, come on⊙▽⊙

The strongest people on earth? Impossible, in the Dragon Ball world, it is impossible for people on earth to be the strongest, and it is impossible to be the strongest in this life. The strongest ones are Saiyans, do you know why? Because the Saiyans have the family destruction buff, the clan annihilation buff, and Goku's big failure. What do people on Earth compare to? Genocide? Your Earth God is a Namekian and can be resurrected, so it is impossible to brush up the genocide buff. In the Dragon Ball world, you should be good at cooking good dishes. In the early stage, you will flatter the Saiyans, and in the later stage, you will flatter the God of Destruction. Just cook with peace of mind😹🙆

Protagonist: Even a mere Saiyan is fighting me. I have exceeded the limit of combat power and reached 10,000. How can you fight me with your combat power of 5,000? After saying this, he laughed with a smile on his face. Seriously injured Saiyan: Damn it, now I am seriously injured, let alone his opponent, and can only eat one fairy bean. The seriously injured Saiyan raised his hand with difficulty and ate the fairy bean... Ahhh, what is going on? My combat power has increased by leaps and bounds, reaching 100,000. It feels so powerful! Protagonist:... Fortunately, I hid 190,000 combat power. My 200,000 combat power was more than enough to deal with him. After a while, the Saiyan was seriously injured again! Saiyan: Damn it, I was seriously injured again. I still can't beat him. I can only eat another fairy bean. The Saiyan ate another fairy bean... Saiyan: Ahhhh, what's going on with this energy? It's too powerful. The combat power is 3 million. Ahhhh, it can be improved, continue to improve, improve... Why has his hair turned yellow? It's so powerful, it's too powerful. Is this energy a transformation? The current combat strength is 150 million! Protagonist... I don't want to play anymore 😢😢😢

It feels like you, the author, have been subconsciously suppressing Sun Wukong and the others. You said that Melia and the others are keeping their normal state close to the transformed form, but in fact, I think Sun Wukong and the others have their normal combat power close to their transformed form. As for the fact that they cheat and like to transform in the original work, one may be a problem with Sun Wukong and his habits, and the other is a problem with the author of the original work. After all, transformation is a big feature in Dragon Ball. If Sun Wukong and the others don't transform when fighting, I think everyone will be very distorted. Moreover, in Dragon Ball Super, when Son Goku transforms into a blond Super Saiyan, he usually only looks like a Super One, and doesn't change much to Super 2 or Super 3. After that, he turns into Super Blue. Personally, I feel that for Sun Wukong and others in the later period, the blond Super Saiyan transformation shouldn't have much increase, so the Super Blue's increase is probably more. The subsequent Self-Ultimate Intention Kung Fu can be regarded as a state. You see, Sun Wukong is not turning into Super Blue and using the Self-Use Utmost Intention Kung Fu. It is directly the normal state + the Self-Use Utmost Intention Kung Fu.

The writing is really good, one of the best in the same subject matter, especially the setting of the world view, which connects Dragon Ball's TV, theater, comics, games, etc. Very well. The world view is large and not confusing, readers can see it clearly, and the author also has a framework for what he writes. It seems that the plot of Dragon Ball is almost over. If the author wants to continue writing, can he go to other dimensional worlds?

Did the author think that the Saiyans are too powerful? The point of view that they are not powerful The First Saiyan was exterminated The Second Saiyan only has explosive power and no sustained combat ability The Third Saiyan Although adulthood is long, the life time is still too short The Fourth Saiyan has no ability to fight in the stars and can only be a planetary creature. It is nothing if it leaves a planet with air The Fifth Saiyan They can eat too much and if no one provides them with supplies, Saiyans will automatically perish, especially when they are hungry. They are simply soft-footed shrimps In summary, the shortcomings of the Saiyans mentioned above are too obvious, so the race is not excellent. In reality, Saiyans are more evolved than the people on earth. Their birth strength is stronger than the people on earth According to domestic fantasy novels, innate origin is very important. Some people are born without training. It is better than some people who have been practicing for a lifetime, unless like Broly, whose physique is mutated and determined by innateness Dragon Ball is just that Sun and Vegeta are the protagonists, and the Saiyans have benefited from Sun and Bay. It is just that the plot requires the abilities of these two Saiyans to keep adding to them, but this cannot be said that Saiyans are very strong. Saiyans have much better racial talents. I've read several of your books and it's inseparable from Saiyan and Kamesen-ryu. The plot is basically the original work, especially the protagonist you wrote, which has no characteristics The protagonist you wrote just followed the original work and occupied the opportunity of Sun Wukong. In fact, you still wrote Sun Wukong

I feel like the protagonist can be allowed to reshape the star of the North Kaio. I really like the North Kaioh. After all, he is the master of the protagonist. Goku cannot be helped by a mortal. After all, he has helped you. He has taught the protagonist martial arts and is a member of the Underworld Martial Arts Association. It is all about friendship. If he can reshape the star for the Kaioh, I hope it will be stronger than the original god's power.

When it comes to the Majin Buu chapter, will the protagonist defeat the Great Kaioh? After all, he has not completely absorbed it. Besides, the protagonist and Kaioshin are from the same series of gods, and they are his superiors. It is still necessary to get a reliable Kaioshin for his own body in the seventh universe.

Could April be Android No. 21? Because in the previous book, it was written that 21 has three boundary cores. I used one, and No. 17-18 Also used one each, which is exactly three boundary cores.

First of all, I finally gained some weight and can vote for recommendations every day. Secondly, there is something wrong with your idea of ​​sealing the ancient Saiyans. For example, Piccolo is old after being sealed, and the same goes for the old Kaioshin. Are these Saiyans sealed for hundreds of thousands of years? ? ? ? It seems that Saiyans can't live for that long, and even Super Saiyan 1 or Super Saiyan 2 are not strong enough to live for hundreds of thousands of years. The unit has suddenly improved too much. This is not hundreds of years. Although you are the author, I still have to point out the unreasonable points. I wish you better and better, and I wish everyone all the best this year.

There was once news that Super Four was designed by Akira Toriyama but has not been used and is still being designed. But it was used by Toei, and the prototype of this grass was the Saiyan ultimate transformation into the Golden Electric Super Saiyan designed by Akira Toriyama. However, it was abandoned by Akira Toriyama due to the emergence of Super Four. It took several years to redesign it. Super God, Super Blue, and Comfort. The original design of the Super 3 state would integrate the genes or powers of the giant ape in the body. Super Saiyan power would become normal, and finally become Super 4 (let's call this state Super 4!). Super 4 would further transform into a Gold and Lightning Super Saiyan. This is just a piece of news from the past. I don't know if anyone has seen it.

Is there any chance of applying for an essence?

There is another question. You have created two heroines in this book. It can also be said that the popularity of the three heroines on the 21st has almost surpassed Melicia. This shows that your ability to control the heroines is still not good. If it is really difficult to control, you can cut it off appropriately and don't impose it on them sometimes. Drama, it's very troublesome for you to conceive of it. If you can't control the writing, it's also a kind of harm to the book. You can make up for it by adding Broly, Sun Wukong, etc. It's hard for you to write and control the heroine yourself. More people don't necessarily mean better. Sometimes the more you have, the more chaotic you will be. You have to take care of all aspects.

It's so fast. There are still more than 10 years of the story of the Tournament of Power. How to lead the Tournament of Power according to the current development model is still a problem. The words of the great priest at the end of the Tournament of Power anime show that King Quan is not so unreliable, but he is a little childish and loves to play a little bit. 10 Years without expert guidance, it seems unrealistic to upgrade from level 8 to level 9. What will happen if Beerus wakes up and the protagonist's dimension is higher than his and the official position also governs the God of Destruction? Will Beerus and Xiangpa cry? Can the accelerated world of the protagonist in the level 9 dimension be upgraded to 6 cosmic units? Power, after all, the God of Destruction can be said to be the power of the universe. It appears to crush the God of Destruction. Level 10 is 18 complete system universes. After all, the protagonist is different from the Angel of Destruction. It is a bit like taking the all-king route. If you take the all-king route, you can ask the great priest to be the master. He is actually the great butler of King Quan. He has taken care of King Quan for so many years and knows everything. After upgrading, he can be a little priest or a little king. He can appoint or remove God of Destruction and manage the balance of the universe. Now that he is accelerating the space and the universe has no life, he can be regarded as a great priest to arrange for the protagonist to adapt to manage the universe in advance.

In the current environment in which Wukong grew up, the S-cells he inherited from his parents should be several times as many as those in the original work. He has been taken care of by his parents and grandfather since he was a child, and he has been taught by Sun Wuhan and Bardock since he was a child. I didn't trample Sun Wufan to death, and I didn't live like a savage for 7 or 8 years. She has been childhood sweethearts with Bulma and Chichi since childhood. Before the age of 25, countless masters competed against each other to hone themselves and make rapid progress. Even the road to transforming into a Super Saiyan in the future has been paved, and there is no need to sacrifice one's companions and transform in anger. After getting married, you no longer need to worry about household expenses. With the protagonist, Broly, Vegeta and many other powerful people as targets, if you improve yourself quickly, you will definitely grow several times faster than in the original work, and you will not stagnate like in the original work when there is no target. You can learn martial arts from a high school student from the beginning, and even learn the artistic conception of freedom before coming into contact with Weiss, or even go a step further and learn the ultimate freedom of expression. In the original work, whether it is the anime or the comics, Goku only took two years to understand the horror, which can be seen. It can even be foreseen that it is possible to surpass the protagonist for a long time before the age of 35.

Folisha turned into a golden Folisha in four months. I prefer that he practiced mind training in hell and rose to a higher level, so he could rise to the gold level within four months after resurrection.

After the Cell arc, Goku's son Son Gohan should be no weaker than Goku in the Majin Buu episode if he practices hard. After the development of the old Kaioshin, his combat power may be second only to Vegito at that time. In Dragon Ball Super, if you seize the opportunity, accept the teachings of Whis and integrate the realm of God into his mysterious state, your combat power will definitely surpass Super Blue Goku and reach a level comparable to that of Zizi Gong. (In the Dragon Ball Super comics, Son Gohan has gone out of his own way and integrated the Super Saiyan transformation into the mysterious state. His combat power can defeat Kefla after the merger, and his power should not be underestimated)

As a reader who reads and pursues your books, I have always supported you, including full subscriptions, small rewards, and tickets. I spend money to read books and do not read pirated copies. This is an affirmation of you. I spend money to read books. Some people criticize me. I just want to ask that my comments are my thoughts. If you have your understanding, just tell the author. You don't express your opinion. You just take responsibility when you see what others say? What I said was bad, at least I said it, you didn't say anything and just added the law without thinking, just like the book you wrote. I didn't pay to read the book to see how many names were added to the original work. The author, you should look at the plot length of your book and how many pages of a book you have. How many of your own points of view have you set up? They all follow the original work. How much do you understand, and where are the things you have cultivated, and are you comfortable? Fusion, teleportation, you have added Tenshin-ryu to your own body practice. Why do you always circle around the Turtle Sen-ryu when you have your own school? I just want to ask whether Mu Yang is the protagonist, or the Turtle style is the protagonist. The cultivation is all based on the original work, without any ideas of your own? I can't think of many creative ideas. Is it possible to cultivate vitality after birth? Plants, trees, and people all have vitality. Is it possible to improve physical fitness through vitality? Is it okay to directly take the angel route in cultivating vitality? All running around the earth, leaving the earth to torture the king, what else is memorable? ? ? ? What you are writing is a fan novel, not an original work. You either destroy the plot or isolate the plot and do not participate in it. It does not affect the direction. When the power conference comes, you join in and compete to set off the protagonist. You only know the plot when you travel through time. By constantly occupying the cultivation line of the original work, you are just a step ahead. Your own ideas and the realm set by the original work can be used as they exist, because you have been practicing since childhood. What else did you give to the protagonist after that? ? ? Although gt veterans don't admit it, they are just fans who follow their own path. If it matches the original work as much as possible, then this is a fan.

I got a raw data here, it is said to be the official data from ten years ago. It is said that the combat power collapsed after the music, but it is not complete. Little Goku: 10, Turtle Sennin: 139, Raditz: 1500 Goku: 416 Piccolo: 408 Cultivator: 1200 Nappa: 4000 Full power: 8000 Goku: 5000 Explosion: 8000 Twice Kaio-ken: 16000 Triple Kaio-ken: 24000 Quadruple Kaio-ken: 32000 Vegeta: 14000 Explosion: 18000 Ricum: 50000 Bart: 45000 Ghis: 45000 Guldo: 10000 Base twist: 120,000 Switching bodies with Goku: 23,000 Frieza: 530,000 First transformation: 1.2 Million Second transformation: 2.5 Million Third transformation: (2%) 2.5 Million (2.5%) 3 Million (50%) 60 million (100%) 120 million (continuously declining after 100%) Wukong Just off the spaceship: 90,000 2 times Kaio Fist: 180,000 After the treatment device comes out Normal: 3 million 10 times Kaio-ken: 30 million 20 times Kaio-ken: 60 million Super Saiyan: 50 times normal 150 million Mecha Frieza: 180 million Krud ( Frieza's father): 150 million Super Saiyan Goku: 200 million Super Saiyan Trunks: 190 million Super Saiyan Goku: 300 million (not in peak condition due to heart disease) Super Saiyan Geeta: 350 million Super Cyber Trunks: 200 million No. 19: 100 Million (slightly gained the upper hand against Goku who had a heart attack) No. 20: 200 Million (sucked too much energy) Piccolo: 150 million After assimilating with God: 500 million (the same as No. 17) Hot android No. 18: 450 Million Hot android No. 17: 500 Million (slightly stronger than No. 18) Hot android No. 16: 600 Million Junior Siru: 400 million (based on No. 17 And 18 cannot be defeated by physical ability, so they have to absorb human beings to increase their strength) After absorbing countless human lives: 600 million Seru second level: 1 billion Super Saiyan 1, second level Vegeta: 1.25 Billion (after coming out of the spiritual time house) Tormenting Cell Level 2) Super Sailor One, Second Level Trunks: 1.2 Billion Super Sailor One Vegeta: 1.5 Billion (after coming out of the mental time room for the second time) Super Sailor One Trunks: 1.5 Billion (same as above) Sirru: 1.5 Billion (on par with Vegeta Trunks and slightly stronger) Super One Full Power Goku: 18 Billion Super One Full Power Gohan: 1.8 Billion Super Two Gohan: 3.6 Billion (2 times of Super One) Siru Complete Body (Fighting Goku): 2 Billion (Later, he gradually showed some of his strength, Wukong gradually lost to Siru) Lightning Siru: 4 billion Pork Rib Rice: 2.5 Billion Super One Goten: 1 100 million Super One Trunks: 120 million (has been training with Vegeta Stronger than Goten) Super Two Gohan: 3 billion (a slight decline compared to 7 years ago) Dapura: 3 billion Super One Goku: 3 billion Super Second Goku: 6 billion Super Three Goku: 20 billion Super Three Goku: 22.5 Billion Super One Vegeta: 3 billion Super Second Vegeta : 6 billion Super Three Gotenks: 30 billion Mysterious Gohan: 35 billion Fat Buu: 12 billion Big Buu: 25 billion Vest Buu: 55 billion Food Buu: 60 billion Little Buu: 20 billion Vegit??? (There is a question mark above, I don't know either)

The Ultimate Intention Kung Fu itself has no burden. The comics say that Goku cannot use it skillfully and his body acts without permission. Under Jiren's constant attacks, his physical strength will continue to be consumed, which will put a burden on the body, making the Ultimate Intention Kung Fu unsustainable. By the way, in the comics, Jiren can press and fight Sun Wukong with his ultimate power. And he kept pressing until Wukong was exhausted and unable to maintain his ultimate strength. And even if it is Wukong's, it can only be called a complete free exercise. His body, hands and feet will act without permission until he exits the state, which will waste and consume energy for no reason. This kind of Self-Extreme Intention Kung Fu cannot last forever. The truly perfect Self-Extreme Intention Kung Fu is the kind of Weiss, which can be freely controlled and freely controlled. Based on various phenomena and Weisi's oral description, you surmise that having a self-made skill is not something that anyone can have, but requires understanding and understanding. The state needs to be close to nature (you can read comics, Wukong has spoken) and it is also a very high understanding of martial arts (for example, although Kame Sennin has not even reached the Silver Eye state, he is still a person who can avoid Jiren's moves. If his combat power can be improved, he is also a big shot)

A post on the water, can this book set Goku to follow Whis to practice, and Vegeta worship Mu Yang as his teacher? After all, Goku's wives in this book are Bulma and Chi Chi. Bulma has Whis's contact information, Goku can go, Vegeta's wife Bulma may not necessarily help Vegeta, but he can use Vegeta as an experiment, and the experiment will produce Super Four, which is the theoretically proposed Golden Electric Saiyan. After all, it is reasonable for Vegeta to transform into a gorilla. At the same time, super red is also possible. Rebuild the foundation for Vegeta to make Vegeta stronger than Goku. After all, his relatives are so awesome. Don't go to your relatives to find Whis 🙂🙂🙂🤓🤓🤓

Let's talk about the 8th level dimension. It's hard to say that in the eyes of the two guards around King Quan, the protagonist is just a child. If you communicate with these universes in advance, the level difference is too big. There is a gap in identity. What's not easy to say is that they see that you have potential now. However, after all, it has not grown up. Do you think it is good to arrange an errand-running job for the protagonist? The gap is too big and there is no right to speak. Why is the God of Destruction the King of Gods? When I met Quan Wang, the great priest was trembling with joy. Whatever the great priest of Quan Wang said was what he said, Yifang On the other hand, he is in charge of the God of Destruction and the Kaiojin. The main aspect is that he does not pay attention to the 8th level gods and has no right to speak. For example, in the Tournament of Power, angels basically know everything, but they do not talk to their own gods of destruction. This is also a problem.

The protagonist is running around like this, referring to the fragmented universe. Will he encounter those who are wreaking havoc on the timeline? The people he encounters when running into the fragmented universe may not be strong, so he can kill them easily. What if he happens to encounter those powerful people who want to split the entire universe but cannot beat them, such as the angel level, and the waves are about to come out? The thing is, you have to be beaten. Will you be forced to run to King Quan through the acceleration space? Now you don't want to see King Quan, but you have to meet him. Let the great priest train him. When he is trained to level 9, he will be given a title of, for example, a minor priest. Now, it will only be 10 years before the devil comes out. It looks like left and right. If Zamasu refers to Combined Zamasu, it has not been many years since Combined Zamasu came out. The further back the gods go, the harder it becomes. It seems that it is impossible to crush Zamasu at level 8. There is not enough level for a master to train him. For example, in the original Vegeta, the master is very powerful. From Super 2 The span training model to blue is simply exponentially better than the headless groping on your own. In the original work, Wukong will summon the strongest beast king. Will the protagonist come out? Come out, great priest 🙂🙂🙂🙂

Come to the author to reminisce. Is the theme of Dragon Ball really cool? 😭 I searched for Dragon Ball and found that most of them are complete or discontinued, and the high-quality products only have one single seedling.

There are 6 galaxies, 12 at level 9, and 18 universes at level 10. Isn't this the case? However, the protagonist is more comprehensive. Now that he has mastered time and space and cleared it, it's time to create life. In creating life, I think I can learn from the great priest. In fact, being the apprentice of the great priest is quite good. It feels better. When Ruth meets the protagonist, he will completely change from a cat to a mouse. He can also ask the high priest to give the protagonist a formal priesthood in the universe. Of course, the more busy the better, sometimes it is good to have a powerful master, which will avoid many detours. In this way, Weiss will be more biased in helping the protagonist train talents. Besides, the protagonist's level 8 god star is not weak to Beerus's god star. He always finds a reason to go to other people's territory. Of course, he has free labor. In this way, when the protagonist has status, he can go to other universes at will. The universe that is unfriendly to the seventh universe will not dare to do it. What will the protagonist do? That's it, whether the protagonist goes to other universes to experience, whether he returns to his own star to learn about creation, life, or enlightenment, he will have his own time, and he will not have to teach his children, apprentices, and wives to allocate too much time. After all, Vis's teachings are much more solid than those of the protagonist, and he has already started to improve.

For example, Goku's dimension is not high and he can realize freedom, but Vegeta can't. Goku is single-celled, and Vegeta's thoughts are too complicated. What do the angels say? Currently, the original angels are pure and neutral forces. Beerus either sleeps or has a mission to destroy the planet. There are two ways to explain the understanding of freedom, either through constant fighting and high talent, or because the soul is pure and thinks less about things. Understanding is definitely not a problem of dimensions.

Beerus does not necessarily have poor fighting talent. It may be that his dimension is very high and he does not need to fight. He rarely fights with people. Besides, he does not necessarily fight with destructive energy. There seems to be no one in his own universe who can compete with Beerus, so it is difficult to understand. The ultimate self-consciousness is a kind of artistic conception produced by the automatic memory and automatic reaction of the body through constant fighting. It should be like this, it is a breakthrough of oneself.