The Great Primitive Era

Build a second-hand collection building! As long as it's a character, tribe, or spirit that matches the original background, it's fine. If I see something good, I will adopt it, and I hope to actively participate, thank you! 😁

The author turns me over 😁😁😁

The book is a good book, and the direction of discovery is very attractive, but some details are not handled very well. Is it a little too early to do that kind of thing at the age of 14? Modern people know that it is not good for the body, so time travel and rebirth should be a little different. Many people don't like premature ambiguity. They all like to watch the kind of person who becomes a strong person after his career becomes stable Also, what is indispensable for writing primitive novels is to treat salt. Salt is an indispensable thing. The prey you have hunted so hard, and you know how to treat salt, are you willing to exchange it? (Don't say you don't understand ⊙∀⊙! Adults basically understand it) You, a fledgling, actually teach newcomers. This is a bit too much, it feels very arrogant and forced to highlight the protagonist. I don't know if anyone has the same feeling as me. It would be better to be carried by an old man in the beginning. After all, you are a newcomer. Not to mention that you have heard of witches and other things before, but after hearing about it, are you sure about it? There should be many similar-looking plants in nature (or let's say, Brother Yong, this is a rosemary tree? It can not only show that you know It can also feel that it is a new song) After all, if you are a new person, you should have the appearance of a new person Or if you drink the blood of evil beasts to temper your body in a cave, it will be related to spiritual learning. You can add some evil beast illustrations drawn by witches, and it is more reasonable to add that the spirit dictates what the witches drew (and The spirit written in the book is the kind of person who is taciturn and speaks the most important words. He usually doesn't talk about so much outing experience with others, and Wudu doesn't feel like a tribe.) And you became a pioneer in the first year? It's a bit unreasonable for Lieutenant to be a bloodline warrior for 8 years. In fact, readers want to see some imaginative animals and plants. For example, when fetching water, the protagonist has just traveled to the past and is not curious to take a look? I am writing about the mortality rate of ancient humans in exchange for a little bit of water... In the river, I can write more about animals such as crocodiles, piranhas, and prehistoric creatures. I am designing net fishing to be more dangerous and the mortality rate is still there. I am opening a spring on Yindu Mountain) to find problems and solve them_ For example, when encountering some strange flowers, the veteran soldiers guide the newcomers in class on how to get flowers, half-living beasts, and things to pay attention to. I want to see how Xiaobai fell into the trap, how the old hunter saved people, and then how the protagonist used modern knowledge to change the status quo In the early stage, if you can't think of any strange flowers and plants, you can write two less. When you become a veteran, it will be better to explain to newcomers, at least there is a settling period The early stage is really too fast... After you finish writing, go hunting in the prairie, paving the way for becoming a bloodline warrior. You can also add some points to hunt some hybrid ferocious beasts with the chief, the king of ferocious beasts It feels like you just wrote one or a novice and ran out to pioneer... Are you afraid that you will die? You understand everything the first time, and you can have a hybrid ferocious beast cub for the first time? Did you get a different flower the first time? Which awakening among pioneers is really simple enough... I feel like it's not so difficult if I don't stand out, it seems like anyone can do it! The gold finger is opened a bit too big! Pioneers, don't think that as soon as you emerge as a newcomer, others will assume that you will definitely become a pioneer? Just drink more diluted ferocious beast blood to awaken the pioneers and just say "ahhhhhhhhh" twice? Is it too simple? Anyone can do this! (There was a pioneer before adding points, or many years ago. After going out to lay a foreshadowing or something like that, you can also write about which tribe met him, became a prisoner, or didn't want to come back. There are legends about him and so on. Can't you write more) Add more points about the difficulty of becoming a pioneer The hybrid ferocious beast cub can be delayed to appear. Are you not planning to let the protagonist go hunting? It just came out. How long have others waited without encountering one... You can also use some small beasts that hatch from insect eggs! You can also write two hybrid ferocious beasts. It would be great if you write one more for your partner. It also shows your friendliness and does not particularly highlight the aura of the protagonist You can also write two more hunting stories. It gives people the feeling that the protagonist is a newcomer who has just awakened and becomes an old hunter in the prairie. After a fight, he went shopping and became a street wanderer! You can go to open up wasteland and you can complete everything at once. It's so awesome There is no other trading place that feels a little hasty and nothing new. Just looked at cow dung? Did you see a bronze? Did you see an old turtle? Watched a kid fishing? Can you add something novel? Add some moving piranha flowers? Add some bullfrog poison? Add some bugs? What's the magic effect of adding some insect saliva? Add some bird poop fertilizer? Add those tree fruits to attract birds? Add some exotic flowers? Add some pottery? Add some salt? Add some meat varieties that the north doesn't have in the south, and the south doesn't have the meat varieties that the north does? Would adding some pearls and gems work wonders? Can those trees be used as 502 glue? Tangerine? Coconut? Strange fruit? Spider silk? Silk? A stone that generates electricity? Flint? Warm stone? Calabash baby? White Bone Demon? Ghost? Zombies?

To be honest, great power comes from the spirit. According to the future that the protagonist of the latest chapter envisions, worshiping a non-existent animal means nothing. Does this mean he will not survive one episode 😁! The most important thing in the wilderness era is to survive. Without strength, there is nothing. I hope the author can justify himself in the future 😁😁😁 (I am guessing that he directly proves the Tao with his strength and is worshiped as the ancestor spirit 🤭)

Come on, the author, I can't guarantee that the wage earner will give you a reward, but I can still read the original version.

All the later ones have been ordered. Congratulations on the release of this book. It's so hard to find a book that I can read.

In the future development of the author, should he continue to manage strategies and compete for hegemony among tribes, or should he introduce cities and civilization when opening new maps?

It was so well written, why did I give up? It is also a good book among the Totem Warriors I have read. I remember that it was at least much better looking than my primitive one who was so powerful.

There are no updates on the shelves. It seems that the first order is not 800! Why

Very beautiful, written with care, I vote for you every day, come on 🤭