Dragon Ball: Transmigrating Across the Heavens

I want to ask, Loki's skin was not broken even after being thrown like that by the Hulk? How did Pig's Feet use earth glass to pierce his appearance?

Dragon Ball World. . . . . . They are all fake, TM can be resurrected at will. How high do you think it can be? The magic resistance is shockingly low. The combat effectiveness is also greatly reduced. Just numbers

Has anyone written a book about how Uncle Jiu takes on apprentices? Introduction: Mr. Ren's family is finally going to move their graves. Isn't it time for my apprentices to come and become their disciples?

Everything else is pretty good, but there are a few flaws. Dr. Gallo of the Red Ribbon Legion, letting him escape was a failure. Knowing that he is a technology boss who can create artificial humans. After defeating the Red Ribbon Army, I didn't find him quickly and kill him. After knowing the location of Dr. Gallo, I actually had a meal and ran over slowly with my girlfriend to find him. How arrogant. What they have made is an artificial human that violates logic and morality. How could they not be prepared for someone to come to their door? ? Even if the author wants Dr. Gallo to escape, don't design the plot like this. This makes the protagonist who is familiar with the plot and gets a mysterious crystal ball to track the target's location look dumb. I think being hit by the Red Skull in Team USA is also a failure. After practicing Qi, the protagonist can even defeat the Cat Immortal. He has also been strengthened by the super serum. He should have a premonition of the bullets that can cause danger to him. He was hit without any warning in his heart. How can he be careless? I feel that this is fake. In Dragon Ball, Goku can catch bullets with his hands before he climbs the Kalin Tower. Now the protagonist can still be hit by a gun. Hehe. After arriving in the Tianlong World, you actually let Murong Fu go? ? You can ignore him if you don't meet him. He led the Xixia people to attack Xingzilin, and after being exposed, he wiped out all the Xixia people, and he also eloquently defended himself. Don't the protagonist feel that this is being humiliated and slapped in the face by Murong Fu? Even if it wasn't for the sake of face, destroying Murong Fu's Black Lotus would probably add another petal. Just because Qiao Feng let him go with a look? ? Did the author keep him in order to find someone for the protagonist in the future? There is another one. The protagonist killed Master Zhiguang of Shaolin in Apricot Forest, and later went to Shaolin to discuss martial arts with others? ? His own monk was killed, and he didn't say a word about it, but he still discussed martial arts with the murderer? ? Are you still giving Yi Jin Jing to the protagonist? ? When did Shaolin monks become so generous and open-minded? Did the author forget about Master Zhiguang?

I'm particularly annoyed when I meet a famous person and yell out their name, and the most fatal thing is that they look shocked. This thing makes me feel very awkward. This temperament can be seen at a glance, and it also shows the level of diaosi without any city. No, diaosi is probably not even considered. Who the hell will make such an expression once when they meet someone, and also mention the other person's name, and mutter to themselves once or twice at most. It is more that they are too lazy to pay attention to it because they are not impressed, or they are silently thinking about it, right? It's not your long-lost old father, right? I was puzzled. Who can achieve great things? What kind of personality does he have? It's not like writing a comedy novel, so the sense of immersion can be squeezed out a little bit. But as soon as this thing came out, I didn't want to read it anymore, and I couldn't help but complain about it.

It's a waste to go to the Dragon Ball world and not introduce Saiyan blood!

In Dragon Ball, when Goku was young, there were magical vampires, rabbits that could turn people into carrots, werewolves that transformed when the moon was full, devils from hell who could arouse evil thoughts in humans, ghosts from the underworld, witches who predicted the future, the demon world that Goku entered when he was practicing, General Blue and Dumpling were both superpowers, and they manifested themselves in the form of telekinesis. Are you telling me that the Dragon Ball world is low in mystery? You said that Goku can achieve Super Sailor casually, then how many people in the entire universe can you say that he can reach that level? Don't just look at the later combat power and think that one person can reach that level. In the Dragon Ball world, there are billions of people on one earth. Only a few of the countless life planets in the entire universe have reached that level. How many of the twelve universes combined have reached Goku's level?

The protagonist in Mr. Zombie already has 600 combat power and can destroy the moon at will. Why do you need to unlock the gene lock to fight a zombie? This is too weak! Don't understand?

Author, have you ever read Dragon Ball carefully? When the protagonist, like Kaiowen, was learning Kaio Fist and Energy Bomb, his Saiyan clone only had a combat power of over 20,000. With this level of combat power, he was about to become a Super Saiyan (I'm afraid it's not a dream), and he expected to transform into a Super Saiyan and kill Frieza. What a joke. Super 1 transformation increases the combat power by 50 times. Even if the basic combat power of 20,000 can transform into Super 1, the combat power is still 100,000. How can he kill Frieza, who has a strength of 100,000,000? ?

You dare to write a Dragon Ball fanfic without even understanding the Dragon Ball power system? Are you here to be funny? Your division and comparison of the power of Dragon Ball Qi and the internal power of martial arts really made me laugh. Your Dragon Ball fanfic is the most ridiculous one I have ever read. It is even more boring than those books that only deal with fighting without writing any expression of power, because as long as there is a little logic, readers will not be able to read it.