One Piece: The Talent System

Why do I always feel that if this author continues writing and breaks through the bottleneck of the second dimension, there will always be a book that will become a god?

Day by day, I write about the Woolly Pirates. The special product of One Piece is the devil fruit. Day by day, I work on this system and that system. I can't be simple and crude, and give me a fruit. Self-righteous innovation is actually a poisonous point. It is better to spend some energy thinking about a fruit that has not appeared, or the original work did not perform well.

10 O'clock on the first floor. 10,000 Knots. See how many people are watching (⊙o⊙)😠

One common problem among Pirate fandoms is that they like to bring realistic theories with them to the Pirate World. For example, the Thunder Fruit, designed by Oda, is ineffective against rubber no matter how high the voltage is. The rockberry fruit is the superior fruit of the yakigori fruit. These are the rules of the pirate world set by Oda. But in the fan fiction, the Thunder Fruit finally turned into an all-powerful fruit, what kind of electromagnetic waves, and some people are crazy about the Thunder Fruit's own gravity fruit. The wind-type fruit abilities that don't appear in the comics are all used by the Thunder Fruit. Why don't you say the Universal Fruit. Also, after the Shao Shao fruit is fully developed, it has the temperature of the sun. Damn it, just a Flame Emperor move that looks like a little sun, but it has the temperature of the sun? The world of pirates has its own rules, and all kinds of things that mess up the real world are still pirates. My balls hurt.

What I find very strange is that. Why do we say that the navy must be righteous and the pirates must be evil? Isn't this more illogical? For example, if a pirate like Luffy in One Piece is evil, is he necessarily evil? He has a bounty. Does a navy like Captain Mouse have to be just? He also killed many people. So the boundaries between justice and evil are inherently blurry. This book is very toxic.

The protagonist treats everyone inside as NPCs and looks down upon them! In addition, Robin was involved in the early stage. Although it was very obscure, everyone understood it. Later, when I became the fourth emperor, I let go. He was flirting with Reiju, and he was forcing himself on the empress. The feeling changes. It's almost invisible, a typical example of success that goes rampant. In the early stage, being chased by the navy was like a dog. No one cares about him behind. After defeating Whitebeard and protecting the Fishman Island, the protagonist went there alone after someone else caught a fishman... I felt like he was mentally retarded!

The second time, one of the best pirate fanfics, in my opinion, it ranks in the top 4, I recommend a few books to you, One Piece Dark General, One Piece Dream Master, this author's Sword Soul is also very good, and there are a few other very good books that I forgot to name 🤤

The reality is as evil as the pirate world. As the most developed country in the United States, do you dare to visit the slums at night? The people in Loli Island in the United States are no worse than the Tianlong people. Have you seen them being sentenced? So many children were sent to the island and then all disappeared. The Celestial Dragons were nothing more than that. The child soldiers in Africa and the Jews in the Middle East still used the banner of justice to kill civilians. In the war in Ukraine, it was inexplicable who was injured. So the reality is as evil as the world of One Piece.

The writing is average, and the generals in the front are a bit off in the back. The character's personality suddenly becomes obscene, and the swaying is even more disgusting. The character charm is gone. The pretentious part also has an awkward feeling. The paragraph when he was first wanted by the navy was not well described. What he said is going to turn the world upside down. Although we readers know that the protagonist will definitely rise, the taste of the words has changed so early. It is a bit childish to say that it is pretentious and a bit too certain. If it were changed to maybe one day your navy would regret this decision, it would be more comfortable. The descriptions of various pirate characters are okay and better than ordinary pirate fan novels. Secondly, there are too many fighting scenes. It would be better if the fighting descriptions were more detailed so that readers can have a fantasy space. Other aspects are not good. Delicate enough, such as love life, more than 800 episodes of One Piece, and memoirs. Generally speaking, it is well written among pirate fans. After all, the author who wrote about pirates may be younger and many things are not well described, such as the characteristics of each character, the protagonist's personality, fighting, and plot. The sense of immersion is low and there is no soul. In the end, I really feel regretful that none of the great writers wrote about One Piece, and I was reduced to the point where I couldn't find any good books.

There are a lot of trolls, who invited them? I read the comments before, but then Shuhuang looked at them and it was okay.