I Am the God of Shinobi

Naruto, a family ethics drama with a passionate battle, also known as Black Zetsu's story of rescuing his mother, the legend of Gomura's eyes, the need to form bonds even after death, the political characteristics of Konoha Village, how to rub balls, my brother called Shunyu fell in love with a man who did not come home, Asura's rebirth as Naruto, the tears of a physicist, take the beloved to heart, let me be your eyes, the temptation to return to the village, *Tamaru's revenge, etc...

4396 Words, are you paying tribute to someone?

The protagonist should have been a virgin before traveling through time. I wrote 4 chapters of the inner drama of killing a bandit, and almost got hacked to death.

The protagonist uses the ninja method from beginning to end, which is very boring, very indigenous, and a time traveler! What does it mean that you don't know how to move outside the market at all? The easiest way to make money is to buy explosive charms! Does the author intend to complete Hashirama's Warring States history? I suggest the author to read "Building the World of Naruto" to see what people call time travellers. It does not mean they know how much of the plot, but they do not use ninja methods to solve problems with normal people's concepts. They do not rely on killing, not relying on ninjutsu, relying on imagination and physics! The protagonist traveled through time and did not become mentally ill. He should be a strong-willed protagonist! But why are you so incompetent at doing things? It's like a boss asking an employee to do work. He will only immerse himself in the work, not look for materials, and use the best way to do it. The protagonist came to the scene and was worried about his brother and girlfriend, so I became suspicious. Is the protagonist a time traveler? Aren't you ready before the battle? You have to compete with ninjutsu like a native, and know ninjutsu, and fight! It's not a competition, no matter what the means, victory is the key! The protagonist can't do mustard gas, nor can he do any poison? Can you try it first? He doesn't know how to use poison, he doesn't know how to make firearms, he doesn't know how to make money to buy explosive charms, he doesn't know how to use tactics, but he can use ninjutsu to be reckless on the battlefield. This kind of person has also received nine years of compulsory education! To survive in that kind of world, generally speaking, you should do whatever it takes to keep yourself safe, instead of relying on prophets to fight for your life on the battlefield. Obviously, after learning so much about war history, is the protagonist illiterate? Illiterate people also need nine years of compulsory education! Just say that if a modern person is thrown into another world now, he should first think about what he will return to, and then how to survive through his own skills! I wonder why the protagonist thought of ninjutsu in the first place! What he is most capable of is not mathematics, physics and chemistry! It's okay to risk your life in times of crisis, but can't you learn a lesson? Once you make enough money, you can just buy your enemies over directly! Ninjas are just tools to perform tasks. How easy it is to pay Uchiha to die one by one. They obviously have brains, but they don't know how to use them. Too childish and unlike the normal world. No cash is mentioned in all aspects, only ninjas are mentioned. The protagonist's perspective is only limited to ninjas, and there is no concept of a complete society at all!

To be honest, the Eight Gate Dungeon has really been blown away. When Kai opened the Eight Gates, Madara could kill him countless times. The back swing is too long. In Naruto, the longer the back swing, the faster the death. There is no fourth generation to back up. I want to defend Dao Yu. What do you use to kick?

The following is my opinion (you can call it nonsense): The protagonist has already been confirmed to have super potential and good strength, so why should we follow the original plot? If not to kill Madara Uchiha, why would he still be there? What are you doing if you are indecisive on the battlefield? So-and-so is not treating guests to a meal, he is bleeding and making sacrifices. He develops in a wretched manner, internally communicates with a group of children such as Tobirama (shaping the three views), contacts clan members who are dissatisfied with the war, and trains them into teammates with similar three views (direct troops); externally, friendly relations with Uzumaki and others can win over the family, and establish meritorious deeds by attacking opposition groups such as Uchiha. When the time comes (with power, power, and strength), you will succeed in ascending to the throne. Build walls high, accumulate grain widely, establish bases, ignite a spark, and then it will start a prairie fire and then be carried away in a wave, The red torrent has formed. After that, he went to the moon to capture Kaguya, studied it with Tobirama and others and transformed it into a power source, and quickly rushed towards the "four modern hua". After writing it like this, seventy or eighty years passed, the protagonist died of old age, and the whole book was completed. I'm writing some extras or something, perfect!

I think the protagonist should reform the ninjas from now on! Start educating your own brothers first, and then the children in the family. This is the team that the protagonist can strive for! When the protagonist grows up, he strives for recognition from his tribe and becomes the patriarch to reform his own ninja clan. Change from ninja mercenary survival mode to farming mode! Reforming his thinking, Tobirama became a ninjutsu scientist and strategist, and his other brothers became generals. Other tribesmen became the middle and lower-level managers of the force, absorbing civilians, establishing towns and then absorbing other ninja tribes, and educating civilians to form ninja armies to balance the power of the ninja tribe. Then he overthrows the Kingdom of Fire and builds the country to become the leader of the country. Don't become a famous person or emperor! Be republican! These can fill 500 chapters! After ten years of national peace building and education, Black Jue secretly promotes other countries to jointly attack the protagonist! The first ninja war begins! Black Zetsu secretly collected tailed beast chakra to save his mother and save her remaining health! The First Ninja World War ended, and the protagonist defeated other countries to unify the ninja world. I can still write five hundred chapters! Then after a few decades of rest, Princess Kaguya leads the 100,000 White Zetsu to join forces with the ninja clan who are dissatisfied with the protagonist to launch the Second Ninja World War! Kaguya is defeated! The protagonist is injured and passes to Tobirama for treatment, and then writes about the influence and growth of the unification of the ninja world on Naruto and Sasuke, and then the third ninja war when the Otsutsuki clan attacks! Then Tobirama studies dragon veins and discovers other worlds. Write another five hundred chapters! Travel to other lives and learn other powers and technologies to enhance the civilization of the ninja world! Demonic transformation of the ninja world! Conquer all realms! Write another five hundred chapters!

I can't stand the latest one anymore. The protagonist and a group of people sneak attack the enemy and beat the enemy with such difficulty. It's the Thousand Hands clan's fault. Just cut your own neck. The writing is really illogical. The sneak attack at the beginning is a direct hit of AOE, and it is depressing to watch it even more powerful. Moreover, the main perspective is not with the protagonist, and there is no sense of immersion. There is something wrong with the writing! It feels like the author takes it for granted and thinks that what he writes is good-looking, but not what readers think is good-looking.

Chapter 7 is so pretentious that the old author still makes this mistake. Does he really think he can write this kind of plot with profound connotations? In the end, he has to start. This kind of pretentious inner drama can be brushed off without any impact. If you continue to do this in the world of Naruto, it will just look annoying.

My brain hurts when I look at it. You are kidding me. Hashirama can clearly become six paths without being afraid of black Zetsu. No matter what Madara does, he directly digs out Madara's eyes. Izuna is also a kaleidoscope. He combines one with one and then captures all the tailed beasts. Not only the Six Paths, but also the sealing of Black Zetsu unified the ninja world. The most incomprehensible thing is that there is no bond with Madara in the first place. Why can't he be killed just to tell the truth to Madara?