The Lol System in Marvel

I have read Chapter 5 so far. I want to know if I finally joined SHIELD. If I did, I will not read it. It has nothing to do with the author. The main reason is that I have seen enough of joining SHIELD recently. It is really disgusting.

Oh My God. I'm really going to collapse after seeing Chapters 110 and 111! It makes me sad to think that this novel may also go astray! I never expected that the author had such an excellent attitude in admitting his mistakes, even if he stopped at the brink, the new update returned to the original level! Not bad, good, keep it up and support all orders after it is put on the shelves This also shows. . Writing exciting articles also requires technical content, and it really cannot be achieved by just writing casually. . Author, you should keep moving forward steadily on the previous track. I have been following this book since the last one, and I have seen the growth of the author. Overall, this book is really good. The characters in the plot are all online. It is my favorite Marvel!

The author's writing is very interesting. I just started reading it. I really like the setting of happiness value. It's very interesting, but I think it might be better to add a setting of pain value. After all, some people feel happy and some people feel pain when doing some things. Happiness value can be used to upgrade or gain abilities. When the pain value reaches a certain level, some monsters in League of Legends or monsters in the void will be summoned. The purpose of these monsters is to kill Pig's Feet, which is also equivalent to the villain of Pig's Feet. After all, every superhero has his own villain. This can also make the plot fuller without always following the original work. It can also limit the speed of Pig's Feet's strength improvement so that Pig's Feet cannot gain unlimited happiness points to increase its strength. It will also consider whether monsters summoned with too much pain can be defeated. Of course, the author may have already written the outline, and I hope it can give the author some inspiration. Brothers, lift me up so that the author can see it. . . 😁

After reading Chapter 157, I still can't stand it anymore. Let's briefly talk about my views. In fact, there is nothing wrong with the author's writing style, and the plot design is quite reasonable. In my opinion, the main problem lies in one thing: The author does not understand the core competitiveness of his work. From the perspective of the general environment, since Marvel movies became popular in mainland China, many, many Marvel time travel books suddenly appeared, and many works have achieved very good results. This is the premise. However, due to the large number of homogeneous works, writing about Marvel must have its own distinctive characteristics, so the method adopted by the author is to combine two currently super popular IPs: lol and Marvel. This idea is definitely a good idea. But the problem is that the author only adheres to this idea on the cover and not in the article. Why do you say that? Why do readers want to read time-travel novels? In fact, just like reading other novels, isn't it just that you want to be the protagonist, participate in various major events, fight against all kinds of gods and monsters and win with difficulty/successfully, and shock the whole audience, so as to continue to complete the pretentious behavior? Show off in front of Iron Man, show off in front of Captain America, show off in front of Thor, show off in front of Braised Eggs, show off in front of Dr. Strange, show off in front of Thanos, show off in front of people on Earth, show off in front of aliens... Who doesn't think this way? Everyone enjoys reading books and pictures, at least that's true for those who read Marvel. But the protagonist of this book is that the speed of upgrading or unlocking heroes is too slow. After more than a hundred chapters, the attack methods are only the q and w of the cards at the beginning (the skills of Blind Monk and Zack have not been used much, and the effects are not amazing). What the readers hope to see is the combination of various hero skills and the wonderful usage, but the author has disappointed everyone; The second is that the character is too passive. The protagonist is basically forced to participate in several events, and the attitude during the participation process is very negative, and the treatment is limited to the surface. The consequences of this are slow plot advancement, lack of passion, and lack of sense of substitution. Such as the protagonist's thoughts in Chapter 157: Life is everything he pursues This sentence is correct in reality, but in this book, a problem arises. Translation of this sentence is: "I don't want to actively upgrade, I don't want to take the initiative to unlock a lot of heroes, skills, and equipment, I don't want to always fight with other people, I don't want to participate in various events, and I don't want to show off." So is it necessary to continue reading this book? Indeed, there are many books in Marvel about daily life, but those with good grades are actually covered in daily life, and the core is just showing off. Everyone was originally chasing the protagonist to use lol skills to show off in the Marvel world, but the protagonist didn't want to help everyone realize their wishes at all, so... Goodbye? Well, bye! In fact, I think the basics of this book are quite good, but it is really a pity. I hope the author will continue to work hard in the future.

Come on, author. I have read a lot of fan fiction. The most difficult thing is to restore the character and behavior of the original characters. Your novel has no sense of violation. It is really good. I think if you persist, you can become a god.

It's very well written. If the author can persevere and finish the book with this quality, he will definitely become a new generation of great masters. If the quality can be guaranteed, I will definitely order all of them.

It seems easy. As long as the author takes his time, doesn't write, and writes at this pace, even though it is a niche book, even if he cannot become a god, he should still get good results.

Since everyone always wants to praise me, I simply open a special post for praise; Let me start, the author's writing is so beautiful! You can keep up 😃

Why nine out of ten Marvel fans are Skye Alas~

Let me talk about my imagination, For example, the protagonist can draw a certain hero's notes, skills, scrolls, etc. Draw the card master's notes, the control chapter, and the yellow card can be exploded while flying or hitting the target to generate control, turn into a chain to bind the enemy, or solidify the surrounding space Draw the art of Jinx - the explosion chapter. Teacher Liu's Textbook - Enchantment Heimerdinger's Textbook - Introduction to Hex The protagonist learns these skills, the protagonist is promoted to mastery, and the protagonist creates the technology card - Explosion (can be combined with the universal card - Red, the explosion power is greatly improved)

Dog head, a heavy blow deep in the soul Sion, the charge that turns blood into a shield Xiaofa, the spell of dark matter Thresh, the prison that plays with the soul In these late stages, as long as the Women's Federation can start, it will take off.

I'm speechless, everything was fine up to now, but after Bullseye came on the stage, he was immediately persuaded to quit! How do you, an ordinary person without super recovery (compared to those perverts), manage to transplant Edman Alloy? Bullseye is considered an elite monster in the novice village at best, and would he spend so much money to transplant the Edman alloy for him? Look at all the organizations that have Edman and have the ability to use it. Although Kingpin is not inferior, he will definitely not be generous enough to use it for Bullseye. If he has that kind of money, he might as well build himself an Edman alloy armor! Let's take a look at Bullseye. Let's not talk about how he survived to transplant Edman. What is he doing with such a thick armor for a long-range hero? When someone wears armor, it's like iron wrapped in flesh. You insist on giving him flesh wrapped in iron? The most amazing thing is that your strong bones have nothing to do with your defense? Your bones are so heavy and you don't have the corresponding muscle strength. It's hard to say whether you can stand up, let alone the other effects of bones on the human body! Not everyone can learn to be Wolverine!

I don't like being able to transform into various heroes. . . I still hope that the author can extract a specified number of heroes' skills, and it is not the kind that directly reaches LEVEL, but requires continuous training by oneself. Then you can give other characters who meet the conditions a certain ability that fits the LOL character (permanently). That's good. Only the protagonist can transform into various forms. . It's just the same routine as the one next door. 😌

I find that those who write fanfiction nowadays have not understood one key point, that is, you are writing for Chinese people, not foreigners. Don't write the protagonist too much in line with European and American three-dimensional views. What you have to do is write for Chinese people's three-dimensional views, especially about relationships and that aspect. However, more conservative Chinese people can't stand this. It's not a question of how many heroines you have, but what kind of heroine you write.

Chapter reviews almost disappeared after it was put on the shelves 😅

Similarly, the protagonist mainly uses one hero in the card, and chooses some interesting skills of other heroes. For example: Teemo becomes invisible when crouching still, Ice Bird's wall becomes a card wall, Kled's Skaar becomes a card magic carpet, Braum's shield becomes a card shield, Nash's boomerang becomes a card boomerang, Victor's W-field becomes a card force field, etc... Basically, other hero skills are mainly defense and fun, while attacks are mainly card attacks. Needless to say, the upper limit of the card is not as good as Dragon King Bard, and upgrading can solve the problem of attack power. I don't want the protagonist to have to hold real cards in his hand to use skills. Later, he hopes to be able to use the cards with magic power. W Don't be random when cutting cards, but actively choose blue, yellow and red cards. Don't have a toxic plot where a red card is thrown out when the protagonist needs a yellow card. Skills can have magic power restrictions, but they cannot have CDs. After all, they are in different worlds. I have never heard of Spider-Man's webs having CDs, right? Think of this for now, welcome to add.

After more than 30 chapters, I can only say that apart from driving, the other plots are boring...

Is this system called a rubbish system? Any rubbish agent can beat the cheater into a dog head. No wonder it is not popular. The protagonist is too rubbish.

Every time I see the main character licking his lips, I want to abandon the book

The first part of the Women's Federation was written in such a mess, I didn't grasp the rhythm very quickly, it was like a plot forced together, without any main thread at all.

As usual, this floor is dedicated to giving opinions!

I read chapter 30, and I felt a little confused. By chapter 30, the protagonist came back and didn't understand what was going on with him. He was speechless, like he had congenital amnesia. In chapter 30, he was chased and then fought. Goldfinger didn't explain it clearly. It seemed like a card master came out. There was not much difference between reading chapter 30 and reading chapter 10. Many things were confused.

You can tell me your name, abilities, and personality. Just smoke it now, Of course it's probably the villain! 🌹

For some suggestions on summoner skills, you can base them on the Infinity Stones in Marvel. The protagonist can unlock related skills by obtaining or touching the infinite gems or even just being close to them. For example, the Space Gem unlocks flash teleportation, the Reality Gem changes the parameters to sprint and weaken, the Soul Gem ignites and purifies, the Power Gem serves as a healing barrier, and the Time Gem can only think of the previous rebirth.

After reading about a hundred chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The setting of the happiness value is really bad. If you want to become stronger, you have to act in skits, tell cross talk, or be a star and hold a concert. The plot is so boring. Many things in the system are a bit unclear. The lol system is good, but it feels like it is not well written.

This book does not have such a tense sense of conflict and can relieve people's stress. It is a good book.

If you have a good book, please support it and give it a recommendation!

The plot in the novel is so exciting. After reading the book, I have become a fan of you, the author. It's so amazing. Is it a bit hard for the author to write such a good novel? Come on, author. Looking forward to the update.

Even if you get all the abilities of a hero, he is no more than a stronger ant. There are still restrictions on this and that. Do you really think you are very powerful?

The artistic content is very high, which means I can't understand it.