
In the Hidden Mist Village, Starting with My Defection
人在雾隐村,从叛逃开始
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 912k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- English
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438Chapters
1.9kRecommendations
6.9kFans
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Never go to Konoha. If you defect, you don't necessarily have to join any faction. If you like watching yourself wander around alone, you can become stronger through a system, or you can realistically depict the harsh life of a rogue ninja. You don't necessarily have to save the world.
Indeed, Kirigakure is too bloody. Isn't Konoha dark too? He was a rogue ninja to begin with, so it's perfectly reasonable that he went to Konoha and was betrayed by Danzo! The sea is wide enough for fish to leap, and the sky is high enough for birds to fly. Rogue ninja should just obediently develop on their own.
Wasn't the protagonist supposed to defect? Dozens of chapters have passed, and he's even left the village; why hasn't he run away yet? 😡😡😡😡
The beginning was great, but it felt a bit too focused on Konoha later on. If that's the case, why don't I just read a novel where the protagonist is a Konoha ninja? Although I haven't watched Naruto and have only read a few fanfics, I can guess the general plot development after this, and it feels like it loses some of the charm of the beginning.
As a traitor to another country, why would anyone protect the protagonist if there were no benefits to his defection to a new power?
Is defecting to Konoha enough? Defection never earns the trust of others, because if you can betray your own village, you might just defect again to the village that took you in.
I thought it was a story about gathering enough bloodlines to counter the Otsutsuki clan. Turns out a cell lab can't even replicate bloodlines. I'm outta here.
The synopsis has been changed; it makes me lose interest in reading it.
Serving as Konoha's lackey? Protecting them in every way. Even though the Akatsuki had a grudge against you, they didn't do anything to Kirigakure later, right? Serving as Konoha's lackey, sharing all sorts of information and future plot developments with them. Even risking his life to lick Jiraiya's boots and help him leave Amegakure alive, despite Jiraiya's death.
After reading seven or eight chapters, I'm a bit confused about the plot and the protagonist's thinking. The protagonist is barely a genin, doesn't know many ninjutsu, and wants to escape Kirigakure because he's afraid of the village's policies and Obito's influence. But shouldn't he have developed his strength first? While he has a cheat ability, its effectiveness is rather low.