My Girlfriend Is a Villain

I won't discuss the plot, but just talk about the heroines 1. First of all, Yoko is needless to say, the sister of the two-dimensional classic. Gentle, diligent and thrifty, good-looking and loyal, plus sister attributes, full xp. An ideal girlfriend 2. Fuyumi, one of the evil girls. At first, I didn't like her pettiness and bad temper, but the more I read the story, the more I realized that the protagonist's evaluation was correct. She won't comfort you gently when you fail, but will roar and fight with you until the last moment. Although she has various character flaws, it is undeniable that her character is the most plump and shining. 3. Xueli, one of the evil women. The second most annoying character. The first is that her IQ is really worrying. Many times when the plot relies on Yuki's young age, she has the urge to quit (for example: Suzuki's baseball team). Then there is the issue of strange powers. Even though the protagonist has a golden finger, he is firmly suppressed by Xueli. This not only gives people the feeling that the male protagonist is weak and the golden finger is useless, but more importantly, the male protagonist's behavior is semi-forced to be bound to Xueli. This semi-forced feeling is exactly what I hate the most. 4. Suzuki, one of the evil women. The most annoying character, he does whatever he wants without saying anything, he uses drugs to learn from the scriptures, he uses his son to threaten his father, and all kinds of weird operations are endless. The most disgusting part is that the combination of Yuki's young age + semi-forcedness and Suzuki gives people a whole new feeling of vomiting. She is a heroine who I don't understand the meaning of the role.

Finally finished reading, feeling relieved. I can more or less understand the author's feelings. He wanted to cater to more readers but was unable to do so. I also felt disappointed that I could not give a better ending. But to be fair, the flaws are not hidden, the writing is very good, and there is motivation for people to read it--otherwise there wouldn't be so many quarrels. Congratulations to the author. Talk about your feelings again. Once again, I feel that it is really difficult to write a harem novel. In the end, either the male protagonist will be scolded, or it will become a fan circle - some people support one female protagonist and hate the other, so everyone starts to fight each other. This is the current situation in the comments section of this book. I didn't resist, I also hated Suzuki's story. Readers who come to read harem novels all have their own ideas. Some are teenagers who have not yet grown up, and their understanding of the world has not yet been fully formed, and they still dream of the blessing of everyone; some are readers who simply like emotional lines, but single-female protagonist novels with truly substantial and delicate emotional lines are still a bit rare for these people - if you ask me to watch Mary Sue's sweet love stories on female channels, I really can't stand it. I can only hang out on male channels like this, hahaha. In my opinion, this book can meet my expectations from the early stage to the middle stage, and even to the climax, when Suzuki and her father fight: I am very much looking forward to how the author will rationalize the Crystal Palace of Fuyumi, Yuki and Noki. I am really looking forward to it. I believe that most of my friends who insist on reading this will have the same idea as me. But I didn't expect it to be such a far-fetched approach with "coercion" and "moral kidnapping", which is a bit hard to accept. I originally thought that the author would arrange for Xiuji and Naiki to go through the test of life and death, so that Naiki could truly face herself, and finally make some changes in the character of the "unhumane, self-centered rich yandere", making her more flesh-and-blood and more real: we have already told fairy tales about heroes saving beauty twice, so let this The story is more "fairy tale", which is what I personally expected - A self-centered Naiki who is full of lies, after being protected by Hideji with his life twice, is willing to never lie to him and is willing to be sincere with him. In the end, Naiki exchanges her sincerity for her sincerity, and obtains the blessings of Fuyumi and Yuki. I prefer this ending, it may be more clichéd, it may be more bloody, but I just love watching it. The author's character creation throughout the book is both good and bad. The good thing is that every character is "established" - as long as everyone says the name of a protagonist, they will immediately have a corresponding impression in their hearts, which is "established"; This does not mean that there must be changes. As the story develops, a character's personality is very likely to change, especially after experiencing a turning point such as life and death. Sudden changes will be a bit stiff, but subtle changes are definitely possible. But the author did not give them enough changes for people to see because of the villainous female characters he set up. This really made me a little angry and felt a lot of regret in my heart. Finally, what should I say? It really lives up to the title of the book "My Girlfriend is a Wicked Girl". Naixi is such a wicked girl. She is so scary. (laughing)

There is no reward, just a full chapter subscription can reach 3000 fans list... emmmm... It is really not easy for authors these days... I have only read a third of the book, and I have to say that the author's portrayal of the characters' personalities and emotions It is very delicate, and the gradual changes in the characters' emotions brought about by various small things are also very detailed. They are all well-prepared, unobtrusive, and natural. Various seemingly inexplicable places are actually hinted at by details or echoed from beginning to end, which is quite rare in online novels. Then there is another very strange thing, which I probably saw in this book - a large group of people discuss how annoying and disgusting a certain character is, and do not accept whitewashing (of course, the author of this book is good at writing and can show the character in a different way very softly. On the one hand, people gradually accept it, and it is indeed admirable), etc., Some people began to analyze from common sense that this character should not have this character, and it is not in line with normal people's personality, and some people complained that this is a poisonous point, the book is too bad and the book is abandoned, etc... ? . ? ? ? ? ? What's the ****? Is it because my elementary school music teacher failed to teach me Chinese well or did I fall asleep in the literary works appreciation elective course in college? I have heard of novel-type literary works that are bad because of insufficient story, bad because of blunt description of characters and environment, and bad because of inconsistent logic... But I have never heard of people asserting that the work is too toxic or bad because the characters in a certain work are too complex or bad or even bad. People are inherently complex, different people have different personalities, and the same person is more multi-faceted, and most literary works need to extract different characters and amplify them to express them. Don't think about pursuing the correctness of each character. Second, no matter how hateful or unlikable the characters in the work are, they are still part of the story and what the story is trying to portray. What does it have to do with the quality of the work itself? No matter how much you don't like this character, why don't you let him appear in the work again? Isn't that a cool article? It's ridiculous to say that many people now complain that they are tired of Long Aotian's routines and can't read the novel. But now when they encounter an annoying character, such as a supporting character with a special personality, and they don't like it, they want to criticize the character. They hope to influence the author's ideas and erase this character, let alone the villain who promotes the development of the plot. Excluding all the unsatisfactory plots and characters that influence the author's story-telling ideas, regardless of the final height of the work, just looking at it comfortably and refreshingly, isn't it still a refreshing article with a different skin... Double standards... At the beginning, book reviews were probably part of its bundled sales, but this is the first time I encountered this kind of book review environment.

I have read the novel for so many years and this is my first post I read it in three days. As a real dog studying abroad in Japan, there are many contents in it that I feel deeply about. In Japan, most international students have a somewhat dull life. After all, the national atmosphere is different. Strict classes, cumbersome etiquette, lack of entertainment activities, and various social difficulties make it always uneasy to be in a foreign place. The content in the book is only slightly exaggerated. However, the book is only a microcosm. Life in Japan requires taking care of various tedious aspects. In fact, it is far more complicated than what is written in the book. After all, readers live real lives. But after reading it, I really envied the male protagonist in the book. He has the courage and ability to pursue himself and happiness, and the most touching thing about this book is that everyone in the book is pursuing happiness, trying their best and even their lives, no matter the good or bad. The author is amazing and has written something that is difficult for most people to do. Most readers think this book is too short. I think they just hope that such a happy and warm life in the book can illuminate our lives for a longer time. But in real life, you still have to work hard. After reading the book, you still have to write a research report. My only wish is that all the international students should do their best to pursue their dreams and happiness. 2019.6.23

I feel like the ending is quite good. After graduating from high school for three years, the ordinary (?) Daily life has just passed. Writing about college life seems to be protracted and repetitive. It feels weird to write about entrepreneurial history and business wars in daily life. At least it explains everyone's future in the end. I think it's pretty good! I really like this book. It is rare to see such a pure and daily flow in the Chinese online literary world. The biggest advantage of Chinese online articles is that the format is large enough, but the biggest disadvantage is that the format is too big. No matter what the subject matter is, it cannot be done without completing the world view and setting up a few plots and plots. There is a lack of such purely daily-oriented books. What is daily life? Daily Life is about describing every bit of life and discovering every bit of fun in life. It does not require any manipulation and can bring people the purest little joys about life. There is no doubt that this book has done that. Although there are some glorious moments during the three years of high school, it is more about the laughter and playfulness of the protagonists. The most successful thing about this book is the creation of so many successful characters, each of whom is flesh and blood, making people feel that there really is a world in which such interesting people live. So, what kind of bad ending is this? If you keep writing, it might end. Although the book is finished, their stories will not end. Kitahara, Dongmei, Xueli, Milkshake, Yoko, Haruna, Natsori Natsusa, and Akitaro, they are still active in our hearts and in their world. Finally, five monthly tickets are presented 🤭

On New Year's Eve, on an extremely boring afternoon, I opened the recommendation list of Qidian. I clicked on this book with the mood of trying a drug, but I didn't expect that such a wonderful and addictive story was hidden behind the unspeakable title. I really like world backgrounds with supernatural power. However, in this book, although the protagonist has a system, he does not abuse the system: the customs and customs experienced after traveling to District 11, the gourmet feast made with exquisite cooking skills, the fierce duel of swordsmanship, and even the laws of economic development are all described through the author's wonderful writing. But what moved me the most were the moments in the book when the characters came to their senses, faced their fate, and made brave choices after firming up their beliefs. (That's right, I don't give up even with a Tyrannosaurus rex on my head, manual dog head) Although I don't have the important task of saving the world, and I don't have the power to wave my fingers to pick the stars, but in ordinary life (do I have any misunderstandings about ordinary), the author tells us that we can not forget the original intention, persist in faith, protect the beauty around us and reach the other side of happiness. The author himself is also a practitioner of his beliefs. He still works hard to create until late at night after work every day (you also need to pay attention to your health). For those who have long been enlightened or have been numb, chicken soup may be boring, but as a person who was confused before but has recently changed, I really like the author's chicken soup. The biggest shortcoming of this book is probably the title... I have seen it many times on various lists, but I always thought it was some weird and vulgar book and didn't click on it... Fortunately, I didn't miss it at the end of 2018. I spent the first half of the New Year's Day holiday reading this book. Come on, author, I wish you to reach new heights and get better and better, and I will always support you.

Wow, why is there such a book that is so good and so suitable to my taste? The characters in this book are so interesting. The arrogant Fuyumi is a lolita, Yuki is a wise and foolish person, Yoko is super cute and heart-wrenching, and Suzuki Fairy who loves to be a monster and is funny, everyone is really alive on the paper and lifelike. The portrayal of the male protagonist, Mr. Kitahara, is also very popular with me: he is sentimental, but also has a sense of pure love; he is soft-hearted, but principled; he is hardworking (upright and very inspiring), but not complacent. I haven't seen such a fresh male protagonist in a long time. The plot of the book is also great. The daily life described by the author really satisfies all my longings for high school life in Japanese light novels: there is the sweet and sour love between Kitahara and Fuyumi, there are also scenes of the protagonists studying hard like real high school students, and there are sports events like Yulong Banner and Koshien showing off. Of course, what I like the most is the pleasant and warm daily interactions between the protagonists (yes, I love this kind of daily description). When I read a book, every time I see the chapter title in a new chapter, it always gives me a sense of anticipation when I follow the chapter. It is really a great feeling. When I finished reading this book, I felt like I had a conversation with an old friend and then embarked on a journey together. We still have to look forward in life, and it's time to get down to business. Wow, I have written so much without realizing it (it is the first time I write such a long book review, and it feels pretty good). I hope that next time I enter a downturn, I can find a good book like this to accompany me. Finally, I wish the author's eyesight will get better and all the books he writes will sell well (ah, I forgot, I'm still a trainee, laugh)!

The bookshelf is full of these books. Is it hopeless?

This is a very interesting light novel. The author writes it happily, the writing is good, and the characters have their own characteristics. However, if you cannot accept the plot of tsundere and obsession, then please read it at your own discretion, otherwise you will be very frustrated reading the first and last thirty chapters. By the way, it is the male protagonist who is raped.

The best daily novel I've read now. The characters make me feel like I'm reading "Dragon and Tiger" and "Stupid Girl" 2333 The protagonist is not Asashi like in Nikkei, but he never misses the mark in the necessary aspects. His personality can't be said to be awkward, but his attitude towards girls is still very interesting. The character setting is very charming. The images of the Fukuzawa family are very vivid. The short-legged and irritable Fuyumi is very suitable for the early master setting. Yuki's King Kong attribute has become a comedy. The most normal Haruna has not lost her personality because of a common sentence. She looks at people like a female ghost and makes people feel a lot more alive (ha n) angry (yi), the twins are so evil and cute. Every time I see the two little ones hugging each other, I find it very interesting. In the end, Akitaro, the mainstay of the family, has the demeanor of a general at a young age and is calm at all times (laughing) Suzuki, as the welfare director, is actually a double-sided steel plate, which reduces the sexiness and makes people like this character more. Yoko... Little pitiful... I won't talk about it However, there are still some shortcomings. For example, Yoko's little pitiful lack of scenes in the middle and late stages. Her image is just that of a little girl who had a bad childhood. She is cautious and cautious, and her relationship with the male protagonist is also much weaker because of the long gap. Also, the system really plays a role later on. It feels like a setting just to advance the plot, which is a bit anticlimactic compared to the illusion at the beginning. The ending has filled in a lot of pitfalls, and the design of the ending is not bad either. It's just that the system and the handling of the father-in-law are a bit disappointing. In short, it is a daily article that I enjoyed reading. I highly recommend it.

I think the early stages of this book were pretty good, but the failure was in the harem. The harem has its own function of bringing wisdom to the heroine, which will cause the character to collapse. This book is based on a youth campus animation, where party struggle is a major attraction, but the party struggle seems boring as soon as the harem opens. I think it might have been better if it ended honestly like a standard school romance anime.

In fact, the main problem is not the small number of words, but that many things are not explained clearly. No matter what kind of comic it is, it is always substandard. For example, the parents of the Fukuzawa family have been foreshadowed for so long, and the energy has been refreshed for so long, and in the end it just ended. Very anticlimactic. Let's take a more famous example of the same comic. For example, the movie "The Serene Hall" in which the God of Death goes to save Lucia is very famous, right? You see it has been laid out for so long, all kinds of leveling up, and the final battle is so hearty and exciting. I'm very happy that the plot is over and everyone is very happy. If it takes so long to build up, there will be no battle at the end, or just three pages of comics will be drawn, and you will see if the readers explode or not. The same is true for romance comics. For example, My Sister Can't Be So Cute and the last few chapters end with a wonderful fight. It's a hearty read for everyone. It explains almost all the pitfalls and ends with it. If you only have 3 pages, he finally separated from his sister and didn't talk about the black cat or the sage Hui. He just graduated and separated. It's a hasty ending. You can see if the reader explodes or not. A truth. There were too many pitfalls in the end. The milkshake problem was not solved. What should I do with the one Fukuzawa was lying on? In the end, Fuyumi and the protagonist still did not get along. It felt like there was still a gap in the description of the two people (engagement or marriage or an old married couple might be better). Yoko left home and came to the protagonist, so there was no follow-up? And are all the protagonist's skills like this? There are still many small pitfalls that I won't mention, but almost every one of them is a big pitfall, and the kind that can only be finished in 1 or 2 sentences will be very anticlimactic. In fact, there are very few open-ended stories like this, whether they are novels or anime. They usually end in this way. Either the author dies or is cut in half by a jump. For example, tutoring was almost cut off in half, so many holes were not filled.

It looks like it's coming to an end, so it's all scheduled to be replenished. Really, I thought the author could write at least a thousand chapters. The college life of the protagonist and Fuyumi's family. The follow-up development of Yoko's line... And the protagonist's plan to visit China. I originally thought that the author would arrange for the protagonist to return to China as an exchange student for a year (this part of the plot can write at least two hundred chapters). There is also the foreshadowing of the tantric soul-body integration that the protagonist learned before, a seemingly useless skill (the appearance has changed to look more like before time travel). There is also the follow-up to the previous promise to the female police officer to help her solve the case (this plot should be written seriously for at least a hundred chapters). Also, after Kitahara returned home, there were many hints that Kitahara might not be his biological child, but might be his adoptive parents; the original person seemed to have some background. (There should be a plot of one hundred chapters, right?) There is also a funny follow-up from classmate An Yun (comedy supporting characters also have human rights!). The journey of the twin sisters to become idols and the follow-up, you told me that it will be ten years later? 🔨

The female characters create a ceiling-level Tokyo daily novel. Among them, the figure of the tsundere loli eldest sister Fuyumi is also looming in several other works of the author. Several other simple and violent monsters, a sinister and yandere daughter, etc. Also have their own characteristics. Undersea is good at portraying The characters are revealed bit by bit through life details and daily narratives, making readers unconsciously start to fall in love with CP. At the same time, the male protagonist's golden finger and growth line are also relatively good, and the perspective of describing disadvantaged groups in Tokyo is relatively unique, which is rare in online articles.

In fact, Milkshake has fallen into the same problem as policewoman Uemoto. She has certain feelings, but the male protagonist can't get over his stubbornness. After the events in this book, Milkshake and the male protagonist have fought each other offensively and defensively several times, and the more times they play, the more hostile they become. In essence, this book is not a love drama or ethics drama, but a light love comedy. There are too many perspectives of the protagonist in the novel, which will inevitably lead to a dislike for the character. I hope I can stop it, it feels like it is getting harder and harder to come back and clean up the milkshake.

This character succeeded in disgusting me again, the author is awesome

When I saw Shuuchi and Fuyumi kissing each other in the cave, I felt that the heroine of the book had been chosen But when I saw Shuuji again choosing between Fuyumi and Yuki, I felt irritable The emotional line between Shuuji and Fuyumi is very rich. From the beginning they were unhappy with each other to the back, they gave in to each other. They have shortcomings, but they are more real The emotional line between Xiuji and Yuki is monotonous, more like family affection than love. Men's reactions to women are also uncomfortable to watch. Shuetsugu basically doesn't look at Yuki as a woman, but he has a male desire for Fuyumi, which can immediately distinguish him No matter what, in love, the sexual aspect also occupies a high position. When you don't feel the other half, it almost means the end It really feels weird to really pull Yuki in, and the sense of violation is very strong.

Be careful before reading this book! This is an urban daily novel covered in two-dimensional skin, but the story takes place in Japan. In terms of daily use alone, it is a starting point product. The advantage is that the daily parts are described in detail, the setting is okay, the characters are stable, the plot has no obvious bugs, the narrative ability, and the description of the fighting scenes are all okay. The shortcoming is that the male protagonist always exports his own thoughts and ideas (including three views) intentionally or unintentionally. Although it is often done for the needs of the plot, I don't know whether it is because of the male protagonist's character set by the author. The former is because the author first sets up such a character, and then has such three views. The latter is because the author has such three views before setting up such a character. Regardless of the kind, this kind of practice of always exporting ideas to readers intentionally or unintentionally in the book is not appropriate. Obviously, this book is a strictly one-protagonist novel, with the male protagonist as the main perspective. The author is following the path of online writing, not traditional literature. Therefore, the male protagonist's views must have a certain degree of universality, and many of the male protagonist's ideas in this article are a bit extreme. Although there is no problem, some concepts are not the concepts of most readers, that is, they are not universal (please don't be a jerk, you can accept it) Acceptance does not mean that others can accept it, and acceptance does not mean that you will do it), and then in the article, the male protagonist always points out his own thoughts and ideas, which can easily make readers uncomfortable because he always has some ideas that conflict with the male protagonist. The male protagonist always points out his ideas and makes people unable to ignore them. This is the biggest problem of this article at the moment, but it is also a feature of this article. Unfortunately, it can easily attract trolls and trolls. The thoughts and ideas of each character in the novel can be different from ours, but the shaping of the male protagonist's three views is a very important part of the character creation. However, no matter what the three views are, in online articles, pay attention to the fact that it is an online article, and do not forcefully output such things as three views. Pay attention to force, that is, the way in which the male protagonist constantly points out his own thoughts and ideas in the article. This is inappropriate! This is because online writing does not follow the traditional literary path, nor is it a didactic essay, even if there is nothing wrong with the male protagonist's ideas. Finally, I have to mention that although the male protagonist's ideas are a bit extreme in some places, it is not a big problem. Ignoring the ideas conveyed by the male protagonist, the whole novel is still very good, at least worthy of the ranking and worth reading.

Everyone has criticized Fuyumi a lot. Before going to bed, I suddenly thought that for myself and some people in the book review section, Fuyumi's senses and Fuyumi's proximity to reality present a curve similar to the uncanny valley. Let us replace the abscissa with similarity between the character and reality, and the ordinate is also favorability with the character. Starting from the starting point, it is difficult for a character who is diametrically opposed to reality or completely defies logic to win everyone's favor. This range can be compared to villains who forcibly subdue their intelligence and Tang Mousan's masterpieces. As the degree of similarity with reality increases, some characters may be too far from reality, but due to their self-consistent logic and consistent background, people will have a relatively high impression of such characters if they accept their worldview. I think charming villains with distorted views such as Dio fall within this range. However, as the degree of similarity to reality further increases, the character's three views and environment are closer to reality, which will cause readers to judge the character based on the three views of reality, leading to a decline in the perception of the character. For example, a certain Fuyumi is a tsundere character who goes too far and is not good enough. The following are characters that are completely in line with the realistic world view and logic, but the favorability of this kind of character may not be as high as in the picture, and it is difficult to have a program effect, making it seem lackluster. Then let's talk about Fuyumi in detail, starting from the beginning. At the beginning, Fuyumi was stuck on the left side of the uncanny valley, but as the conflict developed, she slipped to the middle of the uncanny valley. The argument is as follows: Fuyumi's character design makes her far different from reality, but her character is not uncommon in reality, which makes it easy for readers to gradually move their impression closer to real people and evaluate her using normal three views. In the end, many people hate the heroine and abandon the book. The reason for the twisted character is gradually revealed in the later chapters, causing Fuyumi to jump out of the uncanny valley and return to the high point on the left. The argument is as follows: Fuyumi's mother died young, her father was ill, and her family had a lot of children and debts, which made her deviate from reality. It is difficult to simply evaluate using the three views of reality, and the logic is also self-consistent. At this point, most book reviewers believe that it can be evaluated from another perspective and then accept Fuyumi. But in subsequent plots, when Fuyumi's tsundere is overemphasized, there is a tendency to slip towards the uncanny valley. The argument is as follows: The repeated emphasis on the "tsundere" attribute that is rare in reality leads to a certain degree of excess, and it reminds people of awkward people in reality but even more so. During the ambiguous period, Fuyumi moved to a position very close to the right side, and at the same time her visual perception was improved to a higher level. The argument is as follows: Here Fuyumi no longer shouts about fighting and killing. At the same time, Hai Hai uses her experience of many blind dates, and the description is very much like a woman in love. I am sweet with book reviews. Finally, at the end of ten years later, Fuyumi slid down the right side into the uncanny valley. The argument is as follows: Fuyumi's method of educating children (beating) is very close to reality, but it is not close to the mainstream values ​​of reality. And supplemented by a messy plot, it may remind everyone of the characters in some boring TV series, which greatly reduces the viewing experience. So I think what I have concluded from Fuyumi is:If you want everyone to like a character, then the evil in her should be far away from reality, so that people cannot find similarities in reality; and the good in her should be close to reality or far away from reality.

Although I don't understand the rules very well, I think the author is very good at explaining this unique Japanese cultural custom. In addition, sports always make people excited. I have recently become obsessed with various sports programs, which feel even more enjoyable than fighting programs.

Milkshake: Give him salt and grass to tempt him to drink. If that doesn't work, press his head and force him to drink. Yoko: Wait for him to drink. If it doesn't work, press his head. Haruna: Wait for him to drink. If that doesn't work, just wait for him to drink. Seori: Kill and eat meat (｡ò ∀ ó｡) Milkshake, Yoko, Haruna: No (▼Van▼#)+3 Seori: Okay, ヽ(￣д￣;)ノ, don't be mean to me (눈_눈), if the cow doesn't drink water, I will drink it (ಡωಡ) , leaving him without a drink (ಡωಡ)

I read the pirated version and ordered it in full. I personally think it is well written. The only problem is that it is too short and the ending is a bit hasty. Just like "Fujimura-san's Student Council", I knew there would be a harem ending, but it was too sudden. My favorite character is Xueli. The husky girl is a real treasure. When I see some people questioning why the male protagonist is so accommodating to Xueli, I just want to say, I will be accommodating to you. That's Xueli! The novel as a whole is very smooth, and the male protagonist's attitude towards each character changes very naturally. When I started reading it, I was still wondering if it would be so violent and dark? Among so many daily novels, this one is the darkest, but it's very good and very bright in the later stages. I read it in one sitting for more than ten hours, so I was very irritated when I got to more than 400 chapters. There was no sign of Yoko's plot and Noki's plot, so I just gave it a boost towards the end. In terms of galgame, Fuyumi and Yuki are both very good, Yoko and Noki are anticlimactic and intermittent, Mina and Natsuori only exist in the character relationship diagram and are semi-finished games. I don't know why the author ended it in such a hurry. It's really difficult to add plot to Xiao San Si Wu, but Yoko and Naiki are easy to add. Personally, I prefer to watch the daily life of Shui Shui, and then enter the college line to let Yoko and Naiki work hard. Xiao San Si Wu is really difficult to add, so just add some medicine and cook it up directly. For example, the ending of some ethical issues involved in "The Candidate Bride" is handled (Che Che, so fast Che Che). Moreover, the male protagonist's plot becomes more and more transparent in the later stages. It would be great to write down several daily branches of the plot in detail, and then continue the threads of other female protagonists along the way. It would be great to write more than 1,000 chapters. I personally like all the characters. Fuyumi was crazy about being malicious in the early stage, but Fuyumi did a good job in interpreting the characters in the line, and the transformation was very natural. Naiki is also full of malice, but I like her very much. The character is very fleshed out and an understandable villain. The only drawback is that there is too little time left for her compared to Fuyumi. Being evil and evil, it takes a long time to be evil, and it's the ending as soon as you start to prepare for being evil. The Yangzi is translucent, and the Mistresses, Fours and Fives are almost completely transparent. Please give them more noodles. As for Xueli, Xueli will always be magical~ To sum up, apart from being short, it is a masterpiece with no major problems. It is a rare daily-type daily light novel that can be read in one sitting. I have followed several other daily-type daily light articles. Basically, after reading hundreds of chapters, I have to change books to increase the freshness. This one is very addictive.

Where is 👴's Yoko? 🐶Under the sea! Remember to make up for your 👴's penis when you come back

Every time I read the book "Under the Sea of ​​the Sea", I always feel unhappy. I don't quite understand why those who write light novels always like to write words with Japanese transliterations, such as "Baga", "Suga", etc., And some modal particles in "Well,...", "Na,..." At the beginning. It makes me tired of reading, and I don't think adding these words will make the book more beautiful. Maybe this is the two-spined salamander that I can't understand. So, every time I read a book on the bottom of the sea, I feel that the writing on the bottom of the sea is very clean. Personally, I feel that this is a highlight of writing on the bottom of the sea.

On another fairy tale with a terrible name ฅ( ̳• ◡ • ̳)ฅ It's really good to read, a Japanese light novel, invincibility means loneliness, but the characters are well drawn and have flesh and blood

The male protagonist is a good male protagonist, he has positive thoughts, and the book is a good book, encouraging people to make progress. Even though it is 24 years old, it can still be said to be very good, but the female protagonist is really hard to describe.

One word, good! A rare conscience light novel, the taste of youth Reading the whole story reminded me of "The Pet Girl of Sakurasou", the hustle and bustle of youth is written in detail and just right. Although I am dissatisfied with the fact that the author has used My Lovely Yoko as a ruthless plot tool many times, it does not hurt. For an old nerd who likes Japanese campus romance comedies and light novels, this is really a good medicine.

After reading thirty chapters, I feel extremely good about it. Although there are still some shortcomings, they are not major problems and it is quite comfortable.

A book that made me eager to find a girlfriend after reading it 😆 Many plots in the book moved me very much. I definitely read some of the last two books, but I couldn't get into the latter ones. The fairy in the pot is not my favorite type. Anyway, come on! Hope you get back to your best!

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