Temporary Guardian

I read one hundred and twenty-eight chapters in one go, and found that it was already five o'clock in the morning, but I wasn't sleepy at all. The first time I read the books on the bottom of the sea was "The Villain". What impressed me most was the human touch reflected in the books on the bottom of the sea, the understanding of people's various flaws and the acceptance of one's own ordinaryness. It is rare to see it in Qidian, although I also came to Qidian to read Shuangwen (laughs). It was a year ago that I watched The Evil Girl, and I am no longer impressed by all the beautiful details. I still remember the reason why I stopped watching it halfway through. There are two points in general. One is the characterization of plot characters. The one who impressed me the most was the second sister of Swordsman (I forgot her name). In the early stage, she had a relatively straightforward and generous character. Although she was a bit awkward, she was very likable. Later in the sword fight, I pretended to be limping because I was told to keep my hands open (I was very impressed). I thought this was not the author's original intention. It was adultery, not cuteness. There is also the eldest lady who appears later. Secondly, she is not likeable. She does not look like a person. It makes me feel like I am looking at Facebook, or being called a set of human beings. I originally wanted to talk about the setting of Goldfinger, but suddenly I realized that I didn't care about it from beginning to end. It feels like the rich details in the early stage support each three-dimensional, flawed and realistic image, and gradually turn into each character's stereotyped facial makeup hijacking each embarrassing plot. The bottom of the sea is the author, and I am the reader. I don't like to walk away when I should be mellow and self-conscious. After all, no author writes a book for everyone to read. It is ridiculous and arrogant to hold the author to his own standards. I read Hai Hai's book today, and I mustered up the courage to write this paragraph. I like all the things Hai Hai reveals in the book - the small awkwardness and flaws of characters with different identities, the respectful but not indulgent handling, and even the discussion of ways of doing things - which includes (what I think) understanding, thinking and harmonious but different attitudes. I really like it. I write because I no longer see these things in the books now under the sea. I have definitely followed the new book on the bottom of the sea until now, but except for the first dozens of chapters, the rest of the chapters are not pursued with appreciation. Most of them are teasing mentality such as "Oh, this person wants to arrange pig's feet again, naive", and "How can I, the author Kangkang, edit it?", At least for me as a reader (a family member), it is consuming my past good impression of the bottom of the sea. After all, you can get as many ratings as you want, just think about it. This is not a human being but a tool without emotion. It's not that it's not good to be a human being, but after reading this novel, I think the original intention of writing under the sea is quite different from being a human being. I see that the review section for this book is not very active. I hope that posting it here will not have a great impact on the author. The above words are written out of my feelings. If it does, I suggest you delete them. Finally, I reflect on my motivation for writing this paragraph. I still hope to see more novels like this one.

The evil girl is still pretty, I like Fuyumi the most

To be honest, after reading books for several years, it is already difficult to finish a book. This book is very good. The character descriptions are very clear and the emotions are on point. However, the plot is a bit lacking. I will revise it a little and publish it as a book. Remind me to buy a set.

In China, isn't the identity of the male protagonist the return of the King of Soldiers? Then meet a female CEO, a police beauty, a school beauty, etc., Or meet a beautiful woman in a shared apartment, and then Balabala opens a harem and reaches the peak of life. However, as soon as he arrived in Japan in the background of the story, he became a vagabond. . . This is too real

Coming from Evil Girl Personally, I like this one better than Evil Girl. I still have 34 chapters left to finish, and I'm very panicked The author's books are so short, why not write three to five thousand chapters?

Come on, author, although I see that your last book had more pirated chapters, I will try my best to support the genuine version of this one 🪖🪖. The plot is more interesting and attractive to me. I finally found a book like this, so don't be a eunuch.

I like this book very much. Although the ending is a little rushed, it can be regarded as a complete story. The combination of urban soldier king + alien lolita is unexpected. Although I don't control lolita, the character of the poisonous lolita in the article is still very eye-catching. The other characters are also written with flesh and blood and lifelike, gentle and considerate Miki, self-improvement Liuli, especially Xijiu Jiao Ruri, when he first introduced this character, he didn't realize that he was an important female supporting character. However, in just a few strokes, he sketched out a professional police officer who shouldered the inheritance of his family's profession and faced the cruelty of criminal investigation with a strong mask, but always had a warm heart to face the beauty he cherished. However, his softness and weakness were exposed in the Trade Wind Piaoliang incident, which greatly expanded the depth of the character. To be honest, at the wedding of the protagonist and Miki, Ruri gave a fragment of a South American balsa raft as a gift. At that time, I did not see that Ruri still loved the protagonist and was trying to rekindle the old relationship. I really believed the protagonist's explanation to Miki. It was not until Nana said later that Ruri had bought the balsa raft back from the Polynesian Islands and transported it to his home that I realized that Naoto Yoshihara was indeed a man with a harem, and I believed it. This book seems to be the second novel of Undersea Walker, but both the setting details and the self-consistency of the logic are surprising. Yoshihara and Hoshino quarreled and quarreled, revealing the secret of Hoshino's pointed ears. The relationship between the two entered the ice age. Yoshihara's shame for voyeurism, guilt for Hoshino, Hoshino's abnormal inferiority complex, and resentment towards Yoshihara are all vividly expressed in just a few sentences. The article cleverly creates a large number of exciting conflict plots. After reading the book, you still can't stop. Maybe ending it like this is not a perfect choice, and the rest can only be left to the reader's imagination. The most rare thing about this book is that it has little water content. Every sentence has its own unique effect. Even if the foreshadowing is revealed dozens of chapters later, you can still remember the seemingly ordinary foreshadowing in the previous article. To fill in less water is to respect the readers and not treat people as fools. After reading the pirated version, come back and subscribe to support it.

The words "Ichiban and Huxian" behind the author were probably not written by you. Has anyone been replaced? The style change is huge, and the story of Hu Xian is completely poor. Not worthy of you

Such a good-looking novel is not popular 100 times better than Tokyo Kendo Teaching It's all rubbish and a big hit

It's far worse than the evil girl. If the heroine of the evil girl just has a bad personality, then this one is simply xxn. I'm so dumb In the early stage, the male protagonist broke his nose for the female protagonist. In the next three chapters, the female protagonist kicked out the male protagonist because she felt uncomfortable with the male protagonist in the room. He helped you withstand the pressure and suffered for you, and kicked him out with a backhand. What kind of arrogance is this? In the middle period, the heroine's mother died, and she finally became normal Then in the later period, for the sake of fucking naive idealism, various restrictions were placed on the male protagonist. No, in a normal day-to-day life, if you are disgusted with the male protagonist, it can still be considered interesting; but now you are having sex with the Yakuza, saying that you use all your SPM to fight, and backhand, you restrict the male protagonist from doing what he can't do? ! When fighting against the Yakuza, the male protagonist also seemed to be at ease. Why is he famous in the dark world? I thought he could be so awesome, but in the end, he just waited for the Yakuza to attack before counterattacking, or he just killed a group of gangsters, and that's it? ? ? The most vicious thing is that the male protagonist took his time and played with the Yakuza, and then the pregnant female protagonist was caught. Damn it, this would have been disgusting even six years ago I shouldn't have read this book just because the villain was well written.

To be honest, if you change it to 16 years old, more people will definitely see it 13 years old, it is illegal! 16 years old, I can still make do with it

The author should hand over the remaining two million words 😡😡😡

The best and most inspiring book under the sea

This book is really well written. I like Hoshino so much. Such a good book does not deserve this score. Thank you to the author for writing it to the end. It is considered a classic among online articles. Whether it is the vivid description of daily life or the ups and downs of the plot, it is very attractive. I only read it after watching The Evil Girl. I hope the author can keep writing and bring more classics. I will continue to support it. I wish the new book will get better and better!

To be honest, I liked this book very much at first, but from the time when Xijiu was pregnant to now when I got married to Momo Palace, it didn't feel right. Momo Palace, in reality, she is definitely a lovable girl. The problem is that she is too weak in this novel. Up to now, I think everyone is attracted to Hoshino like me. I think everyone, like me, hopes that she and the protagonist will have a good ending, but now the feeling has changed.

This book feels better than the author's other books

Alas, the bad ending of this book has been a pain in my life! What a great book. It could definitely be better.

This book is definitely the best among all the books under the sea. Of course, the villain is also good, but the others are not so good.

I don't know if the author can read it. I started reading it from the author's first book. When I read it, I felt it was very interesting. It was like following a series. It was fully subscribed and there were rewards. I don't remember whether I gave it a monthly pass or not. When the author finished the book, he said that he might not write anymore. I was a little sad. I just recently discovered that the author had published a new book, so I just kept reading it, but it ended up being too much... I haven't read it yet, but I'll support the author by ordering it. Next are some of my views on the author: As an 8-year-old bookworm, I have read a lot of books. The author's first book attracted me (because I only read the first one), and I think the author has the potential to make a living. The author is also an anime lover, and the book he writes has the feel of a light novel. To be honest, this kind of writing style does have a narrow audience, but it is also easy to cultivate die-hard fans, and competition is also weak. If I was regretful when I finished the first book, now I feel angry about it (maybe it's not a good description because the writing is not good). The author probably does not regard writing a book as a job or even a career, it may just be a hobby. Otherwise, it wouldn't be finished with just a few words. Based on my experience, the ideal length of an online article is between 2 and 4 million words. If you write too much online article, it will easily become boring. I think even if the author does not aim to be a great person, he should still aim to be the leader of a category (a niche one). Author, you think, if you can get the recommendation of Banana, it means you still have a lot of potential. Although the recommendation of Banana is emmmmm, if the author wants to develop in the Internet, he must pay attention to the classification. There are a few books I am following, but the classification is wrong, which leads to half-dead life. After changing it, it looks brand new (of course it is a good change). I won't say more, the classification is actually your positioning of you and your work. This should be done very carefully. Of course, I won't say much about the other "three golden chapters". And the most important thing is that if you really have the idea of ​​​​developing online articles, you must be responsible for yourself, your works, and your readers. Put a lot of effort into your work and perfect it. If it is just a hobby, it will only disappoint readers, at least I am. At the very least, I don't see the author's attitude. You can delay updates, you can miss chapters (just talking), but you must have the attitude to turn the book into a masterpiece, just like "Purple River". I say all this just because I think the author's writing style is very good. I really like the writing style of this kind of anime light novel. The author's grasp of the cool points is okay and can be improved. If you, the author, think this is just a hobby of yours, just pretend I didn't say it. I still think the author should think carefully about the future planning of online articles. (Such as the title of the novel, introduction, classification, first three chapters and even the cover are very important) I hope to see a new star rising 🙂

I came here to watch Everyday Love. How did it turn into Star Trek?

The best book written by Gou Haihai, it would be great if it could be as long as The Evil Girl.

Maybe the author really knows the Japanese very deeply? Many Japanese have this kind of personality like Uesugika. Could it be the reason why the Red Army evolved into a terrorist organization? Arrogant and arrogant, he thinks he has mastered the truth of the world and wants to save the world. He talks too much and deceives himself. He is somewhat similar to Cheng Xin in The Three-Body Problem. He keeps saying that human beings are so bad now and will become extinct. Only by relying on machines to monitor all evil thoughts can they develop perfectly. Okay, let's first talk about the variables in human society that will lead to the demise of mankind? If everyone's thoughts were monitored, what variables would be involved in human development? If human society is allowed to develop naturally, what is the probability of extinction? If she follows her plan, what is the probability of human extinction? In comparison, is it worth using her plan to forcefully change the trajectory of development? I believe she can't answer any of the above questions, and no one can. So when she can't answer these questions, she gets a tool that can affect all mankind, and she wants to transform all mankind according to her ideas. This is arrogance, evil, and anti-humanity. She also thought that she was a prophet of mankind and that she was going to sacrifice for all mankind. She also wanted to sacrifice Hoshino, which was no different from a cult using boys and girls as sacrifices. The so-called murderous intention arises when armed with a sharp weapon, this is what we are talking about. To sum up, this Uesugi is an arrogant, anti-human, fanatical cult terrorist who has mastered weapons of mass destruction, and everyone can punish him.

When will we be able to write another evil girl and this beautiful book?

I started to get in touch with the undersea scene from the villainess. To be honest, I quite like the style of the undersea scene. Novels about the sea floor took up most of my time. Now that his new book The Eunuch has been released for a long time, Oh, I really don't know what to say.

It is impossible for human beings to curb desires on their own. The rules set by humans are divorced from human rights. Only by transcending can humans liberate desires. Those slaves driven by desires want "them" to be obedient and put on the reins. Humans cannot do this. Only gods can master the Sword of Damocles.

Goodbye, disgusting heroine. . .

I just think Yuri's Tower of Babel in Antarctica is more useful.

I'm not holding back, so why do I have to earn the custody of the child? The bro wants to fight for the custody of the child without doing anything and not wanting to bear any responsibility, and then there is a big close-up of the line between the pregnant woman and the child. The review is that it would be much better to just delete this line.

I just finished reading God, so I came to read this book. I feel that there is a big difference in style. The male protagonist in this book belongs to a greasy uncle, and the female protagonist is a female brat, right? Not very lovable, no warmth, looks tired

It's okay to be disgusted by the heroine's bitch character. What kind of thing is Momomiya Hidee who pops up in Chapter 40? Don't tell me you have to straighten her out later? 😥😥