Temporary Guardian

In China, isn't the identity of the male protagonist the return of the King of Soldiers? Then meet a female CEO, a police beauty, a school beauty, etc., Or meet a beautiful woman in a shared apartment, and then Balabala opens a harem and reaches the peak of life. However, as soon as he arrived in Japan in the background of the story, he became a vagabond. . . This is too real

Coming from Evil Girl Personally, I like this one better than Evil Girl. I still have 34 chapters left to finish, and I'm very panicked The author's books are so short, why not write three to five thousand chapters?

I read one hundred and twenty-eight chapters in one go, and found that it was already five o'clock in the morning, but I wasn't sleepy at all. The first time I read the books on the bottom of the sea was "The Villain". What impressed me most was the human touch reflected in the books on the bottom of the sea, the understanding of people's various flaws and the acceptance of one's own ordinaryness. It is rare to see it in Qidian, although I also came to Qidian to read Shuangwen (laughs). It was a year ago that I watched The Evil Girl, and I am no longer impressed by all the beautiful details. I still remember the reason why I stopped watching it halfway through. There are two points in general. One is the characterization of plot characters. The one who impressed me the most was the second sister of Swordsman (I forgot her name). In the early stage, she had a relatively straightforward and generous character. Although she was a bit awkward, she was very likable. Later in the sword fight, I pretended to be limping because I was told to keep my hands open (I was very impressed). I thought this was not the author's original intention. It was adultery, not cuteness. There is also the eldest lady who appears later. Secondly, she is not likeable. She does not look like a person. It makes me feel like I am looking at Facebook, or being called a set of human beings. I originally wanted to talk about the setting of Goldfinger, but suddenly I realized that I didn't care about it from beginning to end. It feels like the rich details in the early stage support each three-dimensional, flawed and realistic image, and gradually turn into each character's stereotyped facial makeup hijacking each embarrassing plot. The bottom of the sea is the author, and I am the reader. I don't like to walk away when I should be mellow and self-conscious. After all, no author writes a book for everyone to read. It is ridiculous and arrogant to hold the author to his own standards. I read Hai Hai's book today, and I mustered up the courage to write this paragraph. I like all the things Hai Hai reveals in the book - the small awkwardness and flaws of characters with different identities, the respectful but not indulgent handling, and even the discussion of ways of doing things - which includes (what I think) understanding, thinking and harmonious but different attitudes. I really like it. I write because I no longer see these things in the books now under the sea. I have definitely followed the new book on the bottom of the sea until now, but except for the first dozens of chapters, the rest of the chapters are not pursued with appreciation. Most of them are teasing mentality such as "Oh, this person wants to arrange pig's feet again, naive", and "How can I, the author Kangkang, edit it?", At least for me as a reader (a family member), it is consuming my past good impression of the bottom of the sea. After all, you can get as many ratings as you want, just think about it. This is not a human being but a tool without emotion. It's not that it's not good to be a human being, but after reading this novel, I think the original intention of writing under the sea is quite different from being a human being. I see that the review section for this book is not very active. I hope that posting it here will not have a great impact on the author. The above words are written out of my feelings. If it does, I suggest you delete them. Finally, I reflect on my motivation for writing this paragraph. I still hope to see more novels like this one.

Come on, author, although I see that your last book had more pirated chapters, I will try my best to support the genuine version of this one 🪖🪖. The plot is more interesting and attractive to me. I finally found a book like this, so don't be a eunuch.

I like this book very much. Although the ending is a little rushed, it can be regarded as a complete story. The combination of urban soldier king + alien lolita is unexpected. Although I don't control lolita, the character of the poisonous lolita in the article is still very eye-catching. The other characters are also written with flesh and blood and lifelike, gentle and considerate Miki, self-improvement Liuli, especially Xijiu Jiao Ruri, when he first introduced this character, he didn't realize that he was an important female supporting character. However, in just a few strokes, he sketched out a professional police officer who shouldered the inheritance of his family's profession and faced the cruelty of criminal investigation with a strong mask, but always had a warm heart to face the beauty he cherished. However, his softness and weakness were exposed in the Trade Wind Piaoliang incident, which greatly expanded the depth of the character. To be honest, at the wedding of the protagonist and Miki, Ruri gave a fragment of a South American balsa raft as a gift. At that time, I did not see that Ruri still loved the protagonist and was trying to rekindle the old relationship. I really believed the protagonist's explanation to Miki. It was not until Nana said later that Ruri had bought the balsa raft back from the Polynesian Islands and transported it to his home that I realized that Naoto Yoshihara was indeed a man with a harem, and I believed it. This book seems to be the second novel of Undersea Walker, but both the setting details and the self-consistency of the logic are surprising. Yoshihara and Hoshino quarreled and quarreled, revealing the secret of Hoshino's pointed ears. The relationship between the two entered the ice age. Yoshihara's shame for voyeurism, guilt for Hoshino, Hoshino's abnormal inferiority complex, and resentment towards Yoshihara are all vividly expressed in just a few sentences. The article cleverly creates a large number of exciting conflict plots. After reading the book, you still can't stop. Maybe ending it like this is not a perfect choice, and the rest can only be left to the reader's imagination. The most rare thing about this book is that it has little water content. Every sentence has its own unique effect. Even if the foreshadowing is revealed dozens of chapters later, you can still remember the seemingly ordinary foreshadowing in the previous article. To fill in less water is to respect the readers and not treat people as fools. After reading the pirated version, come back and subscribe to support it.

The words "Ichiban and Huxian" behind the author were probably not written by you. Has anyone been replaced? The style change is huge, and the story of Hu Xian is completely poor. Not worthy of you

Such a good-looking novel is not popular 100 times better than Tokyo Kendo Teaching It's all rubbish and a big hit

It's far worse than the evil girl. If the heroine of the evil girl just has a bad personality, then this one is simply xxn. I'm so dumb In the early stage, the male protagonist broke his nose for the female protagonist. In the next three chapters, the female protagonist kicked out the male protagonist because she felt uncomfortable with the male protagonist in the room. He helped you withstand the pressure and suffered for you, and kicked him out with a backhand. What kind of arrogance is this? In the middle period, the heroine's mother died, and she finally became normal Then in the later period, for the sake of fucking naive idealism, various restrictions were placed on the male protagonist. No, in a normal day-to-day life, if you are disgusted with the male protagonist, it can still be considered interesting; but now you are having sex with the Yakuza, saying that you use all your SPM to fight, and backhand, you restrict the male protagonist from doing what he can't do? ! When fighting against the Yakuza, the male protagonist also seemed to be at ease. Why is he famous in the dark world? I thought he could be so awesome, but in the end, he just waited for the Yakuza to attack before counterattacking, or he just killed a group of gangsters, and that's it? ? ? The most vicious thing is that the male protagonist took his time and played with the Yakuza, and then the pregnant female protagonist was caught. Damn it, this would have been disgusting even six years ago I shouldn't have read this book just because the villain was well written.

To be honest, if you change it to 16 years old, more people will definitely see it 13 years old, it is illegal! 16 years old, I can still make do with it

The author should hand over the remaining two million words 😡😡😡