Warring States Survival Guide

I picked it up and read it three times in the middle, and couldn't stand it until I reached chapter 65. I confirmed that it wasn't my aesthetics that couldn't keep up with the times, but the problem with the writing rhythm and narrative structure. I couldn't hold back my burning spirit of complaining, so I posted this. If you are interested in settings, history, popular science, terminology explanations, etc., You can read it. If you are reading a novel or a story, it is not recommended. The pace of the story in this book is slow, and the content is about 50% science popularization, information, terminology explanations, terrain, environment explanation + 40% character dialogue, daily description + 10% plot content. There are other things that are not fun, such as the bad double-wearing setting and the clumsy writing. I won't go into details. Let's see what other people complain about in the comment area. You can easily write 2-3 thousand words of popular science. It feels like you couldn't write a fluent 500-word essay when you were a child, so you forced yourself to write 300 words of idioms to make up a barely fluent essay. My evaluation is that you are a bit inhuman. The summary of Chapter 1-65 is probably that I traveled to the Warring States Period with my good brother who was a vegetable, met a group of supporting characters, and through medical skills and by chance, joined Oda Nobunaga's sect and began to make money by brewing soy sauce. Historical article! What bothers me the most is that the protagonist has no subjective initiative, as if he is being forced by the author. Before Oda Nobunaga was about to take office, he did not feel nervous at all about the upcoming war. He was still writing about daily life and popular science, which was simply crazy. This book is not like a historical novel, but like a light novel, the kind of light novel in which the war is raging outside, and Meili and I are deaf to what is happening outside the window. If it were written like this, I could read it, but the problem is that it doesn't have the tension and heaviness of a historical novel, nor the joy and contentment of a light novel. Okay, that's all for the complaints. I really feel uncomfortable not complaining. If you can't accept the negative comments, please delete my post.

Just like the title, it's so uncomfortable. I don't know what I'm writing. The story doesn't advance at all. It's full of weird operations. You set the background of Japan's Warring States period and don't write about samurai and hegemony. There is a stupid son who is lying almost dead, and you rescue him and continue to lie there? Technology-savvy but not quite technology-savvy? Because he knew Toyotomi would invade North Korea? Just because you knew Toyotomi would invade Korea, you suddenly killed him when he was still a nobody? Abandoning the feudal system at all and requiring all civilians to dominate? During the Warring States Period, you didn't even have a single samurai under your command? Do you have to do this to your readers? Come on everyone if you can stick with it. This is a shameful thing that you paid to read. I will withdraw it now. Maybe I will see you in the next book under the sea.

The author should go back to writing light novels. Historical articles need to be written well by authors who have considerable knowledge of politics, economics, and military affairs. They cannot be written by casually looking up information on the Internet. If you really want to write about ancient Japan, you can write about ancient times like Taiyaksha with monsters, and ninja girls and billboard girls can also appear, and then the protagonist's magical achievements can rule a place, avoiding the current plot full of loopholes. It really treats readers as fools. Readers of historical categories are not so brainless.

As of the latest chapter, the protagonist only has a detached humanoid sarcoma. The tumor is unresponsive and useless. Its only function is to drag the protagonist down and make him have worries. The more reliable guess in the comment area at present is that the castration knife was left for the eunuch. One day the eunuch will be taken, the tumor will be alive, and there will be another heavy fog, and the two of them will return to modern times.

It is recommended to skip the war plot and think less about behavioral logic. If you read it as a short article, the author's understanding of the Warring States Period is most likely based on some information and game understanding (this may be the bulk). The war section is a new area for the author, which leads to the author's writing being very general and the behavior of the characters. There is also a problem with logic, but it is not serious, because the protagonist may have a filter bonus against the protagonist in the Warring States Period (just like if you travel to the Three Kingdoms in the early stages, you will try to avoid conflicts with Cao Sun and Liuqi, and if you travel in the Sui and Tang Dynasties, you will try to avoid conflicts with Li in the early stages). I can understand the protagonist's idea of trying to please Nobunaga. It is recommended to read it as a general cool article

I suddenly saw the resurrection of the seabed today, and I was very happy. As expected... I still prefer the lolita novels written under the sea, but I still applaud your courage to try new themes. In addition, I hope that the new book can be completed well without being eunuchs. Finally, I hope that the next book can be innovative while retaining its own characteristics, and do not casually challenge some ideas that have been proven to be easy to overturn. There is a reason why they are easy to overturn.

Have a night's rest. Just fix him as a eunuch

I think this book is not as well written as the previous ones. I feel confused when I read it. If I really have no idea, I think the next book can be about earth-mountain material. I think it is good. It is a supernatural novel about a Chinese boy who possesses Taoism and Japanese Nanyang and other secret arts. {"NickName":"Angel Silver","UserId":230205037}

Haidilao's new book seems to have been well thought out so far, but I don't know if it will be a eunuch 😒 In terms of character creation, Haidilao has inherited Haidilao's consistent loli image creation skills. At present, the tsundere Aman and Sanwu Aqing are both pretty good. To be honest, the protagonist's character is incompatible with the feudal society, but the accidental Qingqi style is still acceptable to people, but I don't know if it will still be so romantic in the future. In terms of plot, it seems that I want to follow a farming style, but farming during the Warring States Period and still not becoming an official feels a bit out of touch with reality, and the hidden line of the comatose old boy is not sure if he will learn from the double line of the late Ming Dynasty in the future or something, it always feels not very rounded.

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I still remember the months when the city was locked down due to the epidemic. It was reading Absolute One Piece that helped me get over it. Later, the author opened a few more books but couldn't get into them. This one gave me the feeling of reading Absolute One Piece again. Come on.

It's so hard

This book is 100% eunuch, 400,000 to 900,000

I have been reading it since "The Gods", and I have subscribed to all the books under the sea. "Detective" was not easy to write in the later stage due to its genre, which I can understand. Or if you encounter any trouble in real life, you can accept it if you can't continue writing. But no matter how busy you are in the bottom of the sea, you won't have time to say "Sorry, this book is temporarily suspended" for more than a year, right? If I hadn't read it by chance today, I wouldn't have known you had opened a new book on the bottom of the sea? As an ordinary reader, I don't think I have any special qualifications to give pointers. But the human heart is made of flesh. Don't you think you should say something to the readers who have supported you until now?

I am very ashamed. I have been a coward for a long time, and I have never dared to come to the comment area to talk about the situation at the bottom of the sea. I just answered when someone asked me in the group. After going through the detective process, I now estimate that my credibility is almost at its bottom. If I say it here, people may not believe it. Plus I'm a bit timid, so I kept putting it off. But then I thought about it, believe it or not, this is a matter for book friends, so I still have the responsibility to talk about it. This is also one of my responsibilities. It is better than letting everyone guess... After talking a lot of nonsense, let's get to the main topic. Around May, Hai Hai often stayed in the hospital to accompany him, so he encountered the flu. The flu was not cured before he encountered the new coronavirus. The new crown caused Hai Hai to cough all the time. Hai Hai went to take a X-ray and found that there were shadows on his lungs, and the doctor asked him to quit smoking. Hai Hai was an old smoker. In order to quit smoking, he invented a hunger strike to fight his addiction to tobacco. This may be the reason. As his health deteriorated further and he continued to cough, his eye disease recurred... Book friends who have been through the period of the Immortal in the Pot should know that Hai Hai's eyes are not very good. This time the eye disease recurred, and the problem was more serious than during the period of the Immortal in the Pot. It gradually worsened, so he had an operation... Now Hai Di is in the post-operative recovery period. He has to take medicine and injections every day, and he is living in the hospital. It is difficult to return home. To sum up, the seabed should not be updated recently. It is hard to say when it will be restored. All I can say is that I will try my best to recover from my injuries as soon as possible and come back to write stories for everyone. I would like to apologize to the book friends who are waiting. I am sorry that I have failed to live up to everyone's expectations. I also hope that some book friends will be more tolerant. The most uncomfortable thing about the situation at the bottom of the sea is himself. There are many things that he is powerless to do. He does not deliberately dig holes and leave them unfilled to harm everyone. Then why don't you say the bottom of the sea yourself, but I will say it here. The reason is that, firstly, Haibi has a glass heart and is afraid of being scolded by everyone; secondly, Haibi feels that this is his own private matter, and he is just a storyteller, telling everyone stories, and does not want to win everyone's sympathy by showing off his misfortune; thirdly, after all, this is not good news, and it is difficult to give everyone an accurate belief, and it is quite stressful to talk about it. () I don't know how many people are still here and can see this pile of words, and I don't know how many people will believe it, but I finally gave you a reply. I have no words to say that I hope to gain everyone's understanding. I can only say to the book friends who see this: I'm really sorry, I'm sorry. Finally, I wish everyone good health and all the best.

It's hard to say this book. It's very difficult to write about the Warring States Period and double penetration. I'm afraid that I won't be able to control it in the middle of writing, and just disappear and run away like the previous book 🤫

Familiar physical discomfort, familiar update frequency reduction, familiar edge of running away

First of all, the information in the NGA group is very clear. The specific situation is: I just joined the job, and I was ignorant and had a conflict with my senior. Then my senior became my immediate boss. I knelt down and said, "Shh, I'll put a banquet for you to apologize. Can we reconcile?" Then the boss said, "At this moment, are you kidding me?" Then there was a big mess at the bottom of the sea and an explosion with his boss. He was sent to the sea to investigate Cthulhu, and he lost half of his ears and a few teeth before he regained his life. Although I read the detective update, there are continuous bad things behind the sea, but since you are willing to make up a story to make everyone happy, everyone believes it, and then I will wait and see when you will give your explanation and announce it to the detective. As a result, you keep delaying and acting like a little daughter, which makes me very unhappy. Then this book: Che Zuluan said back and forth that it is already difficult to stretch double-penetrating. It turns out that the other person is a gay friend, but he is still a vegetative person. You can say that he is the protagonist's movement limiter, but before every big action, he has to be dragged out to show off his presence. It is emphasized repeatedly, which is very uncomfortable. Secondly, he keeps saying that Japan will not improve its technology, and he rubs the pulley by hand to double the shooting distance, and the range and accuracy of the compound bow are +5. You can rub this thing by hand, can't Japanese craftsmen imitate it? The protagonist is now hanging out with Oda Nobunaga. He goes to the battlefield and uses this thing to show off. Then Nobunaga becomes interested in this and takes a look at it. Then the whole army is equipped with it. What can the protagonist do? Isn't this just deceiving oneself and deceiving others by repeatedly emphasizing it, only to deceive oneself and others? I don't know which reader group I'm writing for! (Annoyed)

Why did the good brother not die even after being in a vegetative state for several years without a nasogastric tube or nutritional supplements? Because this is an important NPC, just like those system NPCs that will not die for hundreds of years as long as the protagonist does not accept the mission and is seriously injured. Why can the protagonist buy food for thousands of people in vain? Because system merchants can sell when they have money, there is no limit. Why are the soldiers of the Imagawa family so brave and brave, even if more than half of them were killed or wounded, they would not retreat? RTS games are like this, as long as a frame of soldiers moves up to A. Why are the Imagawa family's soldiers so powerful that they can achieve a 3:1 exchange ratio? Because the leading general has a passive bonus to the force value of the entire army, he may also have the general's skills activated. The protagonist is an unknown person in history and has no bonus to his opponents. Continued, why do the three combined armies seem to be stronger instead of weaker? Because the passive bonuses of the three generals are superimposed, it is a pure numerical crushing.

I have no desire to complain, because Gou Hai can only write about lolita at most, and lolita is his destiny. Once you step out of your comfort zone, the harder you work, the worse you will get. Japan committed Wenqing disease during the Warring States Period, so you really deserve to die... Humanity, customs and civilization are determined by a geographical and natural environment. You don't intend to use technology to improve the environment, but you also want Japan to change... This is much more cruel than the capitalist flesh and blood factory. And, most importantly, Gou Haihai began to screen readers. I have seen several old readers who have subscribed to Haibiwen. They mentioned a few opinions in the chapters, and they were scolded like "Get out, get out!", "Get out if you don't want to read..." And so on. I usually don't like to speak, and I mostly just join in the fun. Seeing a few guys being sprayed bloody for no offense, I'm a little scared... In the future, submarine readers will probably be these low-quality groups, right? If one day I say something wrong and I get scolded again, I don't want to.

I don't understand what Hai Hai thinks. He always apologizes so lowly, but suddenly cuts off updates without any news, so arrogantly. How does he manage to be completely inconsistent with his words and deeds?

It's a miserable life to be an operations officer for the bottom of the sea. While trying his best to find various excuses for the bottom of the sea, at the same time, he also hypnotized himself to lick the cold pussy of the bottom of the sea with his die-hard fans. . . Then he lied to die-hard fans and told himself that he had no choice but to say it was under the sea. . . Wait a minute, think about it carefully, isn't this a typical top-notch licking dog who won't even kick him away? ! !

I've been following your books since "The Evil Girl" and I'm an old reader. Except for the book about God, I've ordered all the books on both accounts respectively. I like the writing and the popular science about Japan. There are many interesting points and the arrangements are also very good. There are some things that others think are weird, such as the love line of the white horse, such as the East University plot in "The Immortal in the Pot". I'm talking for you. Except for the previous eunuch, I really haven't criticized you much. Even some of the plots in this book, such as killing the monkey. I can accept everything But I really can't swallow this plot now. What the hell are you talking about? Do you have a main plot? Brother You don't want the protagonist to develop technology to promote the progress of daily life, but at the same time you start to emancipate your mind and build a civil system. You also want to build a constitutional monarchy and build modern democracy in the classical feudal era? Do you want to learn how to depose a dragon? Not to mention whether you have the godhead and the fan base that other people have. The book they wrote is from Ancient China at least, and it's all in that state. The godhead earned by Shao Song and Fu Han is almost gone. You also write about the background of your childhood that is more difficult to write Don't you do any market research when writing a book? Even if you want to escape your comfort zone, wouldn't it be good for you to write about immortals, fantasy, and martial arts? Even if you want to keep the background of small life, you can write a Heian period fantasy or a modern Japanese spiritual background. They are also popular categories and easy to write. Just test it on 2ch. It is also out of the comfort zone. Really, I am not typing this to criticize you or post anything. Your book, especially one, I really like it. I have read it countless times. You are completely ruining your relationship with readers by doing this first. In case in the end, the impression in the eyes of book friends is also that of an old eunuch or a middle-school literary youth, you will not be able to write a book. I also have one less author to follow and read. That's why I say so much. I don't know if you can see it, and I don't know if you agree with it. Anyway, out of support, I will still order this book in full, but I will definitely not read it again

nga intercepted it, I don't know what the real situation is.

Have a good journey and may there be no disease in heaven. 😭😭😭

If someone is sick and has to stop updating, you will also be sick and have to stop updating, but they can post a hospital diagnosis certificate. What about you? If you post it, I will believe you, otherwise it is all nonsense and deceiving. Diagnostic certifications by other authors.

Pushing forward to block arrows, detectives repeatedly postponed. The pot fairy was left unfinished and he became a eunuch in the Warring States Period. When I still remember the evil girl, I show my domineering attitude. Not as good as Overlord, at least he has face.

Really, author, you should just write light novels. I really can't stand your view of history. With more than 180 pictures, you can tell what the author's view of history is. One sentence is childish. How many pieces are you talking about dividing Japan into? Do you have that technology? Can you stop the trend of history by yourself? And he wanted to kill Toyotomi Hideyoshi. Although I don't know what happens next, I haven't watched it yet. But that one is true and extremely toxic. If you can't write historical articles, don't write them, because readers of historical articles are generally very picky. A bunch of people in the comment area said it was not about history, so why did you put it in the historical zone? I have no choice but to die from the poison. Don't argue, you are right if you argue. If you don't like it, don't spray it.

Eunuchs, eunuchs, what are you doing to abolish the samurai, give equal rights to the old peasants, and dismember the Japanese? I knew this book would definitely not work. May there be no pain in heaven. The author is a lazy person.

It's very abstract. To hold a parliament at a stage when the people's wisdom is not yet developed? One step ahead is a god, ten steps ahead is a madman. At this time, there is no internal stability and there is no doubt that power should be centralized. Centralize power and integrate construction from top to bottom. Simultaneously improve the constitution and ideological program