What Should I Do If I Look Too Fierce?

I haven't been following the book these days, but I've been busy playing games. Today, I didn't follow up and found out that the author was going to be trolled, and that he was trolled suddenly. Then I followed it and felt that it was normal to be trolled suddenly, because the author has made a fatal mistake in online writing in the past few days, which is what the author calls suppressing first and then promoting! The writing technique of suppressing first and then raising, mostly appears in compositions, prose, and traditional novels. It can well arouse readers' interest in reading. By suppressing, the readers' emotions are underestimated and feeling aggrieved, and then through a moment of rising, the readers' emotions can be vented and erupted, so that the readers can get an ultimate sense of comfort! But I personally feel that this writing method is not suitable for online articles, because in traditional literature, there are ready-made books, and readers can read them from beginning to end. The authors of traditional literature do not have to consider the suppressed emotions of readers at all. However, online articles are serialized, and readers cannot read them from beginning to end. They have to wait for updates during this period. During this time, readers have already developed bad emotions, so readers need to vent, so the author has to bear the readers' bad emotions. Therefore, I feel that this writing method is not suitable for online articles. Of course, this is not the key point for the author to be criticized this time! If this were the case, although the reader's bad emotions would be fed back to the author, they would not be so intense. The key point is that the author's way of writing depression this time gives me the feeling that the author has set a low point of depression, and then in order to reach this low point, the author just went all the way without considering the overall situation! Taking his own will as the first principle and ignoring various other factors, such as logical order and the character of the protagonist he created, Aokiji's character is that of a young man with the soul of a reborn adult. His personality is kind-hearted, mature, rational, methodical and has a golden finger. And such a person becomes an irrational and passionate person during this period of depression. For example, in the stage of fighting Mihashi, although Mihashi is sinister and despicable, it can be seen from how he helped his cousin Teruhashi and tied up salted fish sauce with his partner that he is still very enthusiastic and has a sense of justice! Aokiji knew both of these things, so when Aokiji knew that his brother had been beaten by Mihashi's people, he would definitely have doubts in his heart. Mihashi would also have doubts about this, so based on the doubts, the two sides would definitely have the same conversation to eliminate the doubts and decide whether to have a fight instead of directly doing it with passion! In the second paragraph, after Aokiji was called by the principal, what Aokiji said to his younger brother was what Aokiji said at this moment of imminent danger: "Shinobu, you will be expelled. Don't act. I said you don't act!" These nutritious words can neither boost morale nor eliminate the excitement of the brothers. On the contrary, such tough words will make the brothers feel more aggrieved. Is this really something that the aforementioned Aoki Tsukasa can do? In the third paragraph, he was called home and his coach told him not to take any action and that he would handle it. So, would his coach not know what happened to him? With his coach's connections, power, and social experience, he wouldn't have thought of warning Kaiku's people not to cause trouble for Aoki Tsukasa, or is it something his coach can't do? Putting aside these things, it would be too insulting to Qiong's intelligence to say that Qiong suddenly came over and had a heart attack! Qionghui doesn't know what Aokiji is doing? Qiong doesn't know how much he weighs? Will he be a burden to Aokiji in front of a lot of bad guys? Normally, Qiong should wait at home so as not to cause trouble to Aokiji. If he is really worried, then call the police. Even so, it is understandable that Qiong is still worried about the recurrence of his condition! Then when Aokiji was fighting, he knew that he would not fight quickly near home, so he directly captured the thief first and captured Wang Nongxiangliang fiercely. Instead, he allowed him to win people's hearts and boost morale! What kind of fool would it take to do this! In order to achieve the above descriptions, the author directly forcibly opened the halo of wisdom for the protagonist and supporting characters, and forcibly changed the protagonist's personality. Can readers not be excited? You've ruined the main character that everyone likes and turned you from a fan into an enemy. Can you stop complaining?

If you are bad at writing, write well and get a younger sister. If you have a heart disease or you are too poisonous, you will come to see the bad boy Suzuran Fengxian and the soft and high-ranking ones. If you want to play professionally, it is a chicken. If we want to see professionalism, why don't we go directly to the professional ones?

From this cover, we can see that the author has won the true biography of Big Eyeballs and Lao Wang 🤫

The parts about fighting and dominating the bad guys are still good to watch.

Writing a book is indeed a difficult task. I understand the author's series of operations, whether they are poisonous or unfinished. After reading the author's remarks, the author believes that the "poison" in the middle caused the collapse. In fact, this is not the case. I think part of the reason is that the author himself was not mentally prepared. In fact, there are several types of "poison" in the eyes of current readers, such as writing style, word choice, etc. I will not go into details one by one. The "poison" in this situation is actually that the twist of the plot is too blunt. In the atmosphere at the beginning of the book, the tone has been set. It is a relaxed type of daily life on campus. There may be low points, but the expected low point may be losing the game, or the "misunderstanding" between Yaozi and the protagonist. Of course, it's not impossible. After all, this plot is just a bit over the top, but the author will be scolded as an old thief. The author should be prepared before writing. The impact of this operation is the same as the plot of "Yin Zhiping Dragon Knight". He will definitely be scolded, but if the author can withstand it and plot it well, it is not impossible. It just adds a little authenticity. After all, real life is not smooth sailing, there are always problems of one kind or another. I actually feel sorry for the author's unfinished work. After all, this book is just a passerby in my long career. Maybe it is a special passerby because I took the time to write a book review, but that's it. I may forget it in a few days. However, for the author, it is the crystallization of the author's hard thinking and hard work. For me, the reader, this is just a pity. For the author, I think it is more of a pity. It is the kind of colorful painting when the past life reappears in the dead of night. It's a pity that the author chose to end it badly. The tone of a book was set from the beginning, and a sudden change of direction in the middle will only be unpopular. I said this book review once in "I Place Satellites in Another World", and I will give it to you here. Don't expect a book. Put all your ideas and imaginations in it. Before writing, think about "Does this plot match the rhythm of my book?" That's all I have to say. Finally, those bratty brothers who say "you can do it, you can do it", how mature should your mother be in the kitchen? You can do it, you can do it. First of all, don't mention your own logical errors. Secondly, you are insulting the author's hard work and disrespecting other book reviewers. I have been reading books for so many years, and I despise the sand dollar of "you can do it, you do it" the most.

I want to ask when the zombies will come out?

It's so good. At first I read it as a boring two-dimensional harem novel to kill time, but gradually I became fascinated by it. I was completely amused by the psychological activities of various supporting characters, and I was also moved by the interactions with the women. The funniest thing I still remember is the description of the school teacher which is so funny. The most exciting moment should be the protagonist's tumbler. I have to say that this is an absolutely excellent two-dimensional novel. I hope the author can work hard. I support Qiongmeifu, which is number one in the world in orthopedics.

I quite like this type of book. You wrote it well. I thought I could see it until the end, but I skipped to the ending. Maybe I really couldn't continue writing 😅😅

Come on, the author (ง •̀_•́)ง This is the first time I spent money on Qidian Although it is only 10 yuan s, I really like this book Come on, you are here I will strangle you to death if you dare.

It's a very good book, but it's a pity it's been suppressed. Especially some of the fight scenes feel very exciting and exciting.

The wild sky of spring, the wild sky of spring, the wild sky of spring, the wild sky of spring, the wild sky of spring, ahhhhhhhhhhhh!

I didn't write a review from the beginning to the end of this book, I just read it silently. Including what everyone said about the collapse of Chapter 200, I actually didn't feel much at all. I watched the plot of winning the boxing match in one go from the beginning. I originally wanted to watch it together again, but when I opened it today, I found that it was over in just a few chapters, and it was unfinished. . I have also read a lot of books, and this book is very good among new authors in both creativity and content. In my opinion, the only bad point is actually the emotional drama. The author chose two of the three female protagonists in this book, Qiong, Yaozi, and Xinmei. There is no doubt that in the emotional aspect, the author made the protagonist a scumbag, and there are many emotional dramas. We are here to see how Aokiji became the strongest high school student, not a romance story. The plot of being together with Qiong is not like love at all but like sympathy. It just means that the author prefers this character to force a couple. You can force it, but at least the emotional foreshadowing is well written. Moreover, these three heroines took up too much of the scene, resulting in a lot of interesting plots that were not written. I don't know if the author felt that. It is a pity that classic characters like Saiki Kusuo, Sakuragi Hanamichi, and Takiya Genji all appear, but they have no scenes. If it is not required by the plot, or you are not planning to write a full-length novel, it is really not recommended to write so many female protagonists.

Everyday life is refreshing and a little joyful The key is that the author's inner little theater is so cute and cute...

I really want to know how the relationship between the protagonist and Qiong Mei develops, as well as the relationship development with Saeko. I generally hate romance, but I loved this book. In fact, I think the author should follow his own wishes when writing a book. As long as he expresses his true feelings and incorporates his most sincere expectations, readers will naturally be infected.

The writing is obviously pretty good. . Nowadays, people cannot accept the idea of ​​suppressing first and then promoting 🐴? Can't bear the slightest grievance🐴? It is estimated that it is an Internet giant. Actually, I think the boxing match is very good. This book is about Aoki Tsukasa's own transformation and growth process and the important people in his life. The daily lines are very well written. Becoming the strongest delinquent is too naive and simple as the main line [because there are no superpowers or anything, no matter how strong a delinquent is, he is not as good as an ordinary heavyweight boxer. ], It's good to use a boxing match to develop the plot, but it's a pity that the author seems to be a full-time author and can only work hard to cater to the majority of naive readers. Oh, what a pity, it's a pretty good article. It can be called food and grass. The portrayal of Saeko-senpai is really good. Too many infinity novels made me see Busujima Saeko subconsciously feeling bored. As a result, the author's portrayal made me change my view of senior.

I think this book is quite good, the characters are more delicately drawn and the sense of immersion is quite strong. Maybe it's because I haven't read this type of book before or read comics, so I thought it was quite novel.

I give almost all my monthly tickets to you. You are a good book and very diligent. Come on

In fact, I didn't even plan to vote for this novel about daily life, because the content of the novel is all about trivial matters in daily life, the author is very naughty, and almost every chapter has some risqué words at the end. After thinking about it, I'll give it to you!

Recently I have seen a lot of complaints about physical fitness. . . It is said that the physical fitness of high school students is not as good as that of normal adults, not up to 10 points. . . I am also a student. From what I have come into contact with, many of the 15-year-old students I know have better physical fitness than adults aged 25 to 35. . . Whether it's strength, speed or endurance. . . And the high school students in Hot Blood College and Big Brother University. . As long as you know the relevant series, you should know how strong it is. The author's settings are quite normal. The above is just my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it.

Wow, I found that many people don't know about Qiong Mei. Brother, thank you for reading two-dimensional books. The control is not strict now. Search "The Fate of the Sky" (in reverse) and then read it and you will know. In fact, I cried when I read this for the first time and had no other thoughts (Qiong Mei). After all, my parents passed away and my sister and brother depended on each other. Qiong Mei was so cute. After watching the end, I wanted to wish them well and not to encounter danger. , Live a happy life and so on But when I see so many people who have never seen a certain sky, I realize that I am getting old. It was obviously a myth in the past and it is still the same today. No one knows about one of the representatives of the sister series. Time is really not forgiving In the end, I don't know how many people still remember

Emmm... I kept it on the bookshelf and then it disappeared. The ending was so surprising. To be honest, this book is really good in the two-dimensional world, and the writing style can be read. Maybe it's because I have been poisoned too many times and have become invulnerable to fifty poisons. I have a good tolerance for the plot, and I don't find anything difficult to accept. I think the most talked about boxing match is okay, maybe it's a newcomer. The description of the fight has some flaws, the explanation is not perfect, and the visuals are uncomfortable. Of course, these are acceptable, but I don't know if it is water or what. The description of the appearance of the boxing match is too repetitive, what is the weight, wingspan... Readers don't like to read this kind of data, so just describe it once. Alas, it's rare to find a readable book. The author's mentality exploded and he deleted many heartwarming or passionate plots. It's a bit of a pity (he has a deep resentment towards the Kendo Tournament). Feel sorry for this book The author will try his best in the future

I originally read free books, so I specially registered a Qidian account for the author. Because I am a student party, I only gave a reward of ten yuan. The plots are really wonderful. Although it was a bit uncomfortable when I read it, it really attracted me to read this book. Those who can't stand it should read Mary Sue novels. I really hope that the author can continue to work hard and stick to his own style! !

To be honest, the book is so messed up and you still expect to write a new book? ! I'm really disappointed and I'll never see you again.

After saving for a while, I came back to take a look. It was so bad that it collapsed. I was desperate.

To be honest, this ending is really unacceptable.

The novel is quite good, and the character descriptions are very detailed. However, the character of Busujima Yako is very uncomfortable and irritating. She is stubborn and entangled and is really not suitable for the male protagonist's girlfriend. Qiong is fine, but why should she be Yako?

It's pretty good, I think I can keep writing. It's a pity that it's unfinished.

The subject matter is quite novel, and the protagonist is a bald boss. I also felt that later in the game it was a bit delayed and the writing was useless. Sakuragi Hanamichi should not be released. It will feel better if it is changed to the style of School Apocalypse 🙂

It's great. My favorite Yaozi and Qiongmei, these two characters who rarely appear in fan fiction, have become the protagonists. I like it very much. Unfortunately, with the change of the author's mentality, some of the subsequent plots are not satisfactory, but I still like it very much. I look forward to the author adjusting his mentality and writing another one.

Just echo the image in the article and refer to the 'King of Beasts' Tamao Serizawa. After adoption, it will be the nickname of the protagonist in the novel.