Qingdu Shanshuilang

I haven't even finished writing "The Patrol Captain" yet, and I've started a new book.

A journey of unrestrained asceticism, a unique way of getting along with the good monsters. The monsters are all quite eccentric, with the fun of a fairy raising a pet and the satisfaction of the protagonist as a worldly master. The protagonist lives in a group of monsters and opens his own dojo, which is quite interesting. The visuals are particularly good, the transitions are comfortable, and the characters are rich and vivid.

A few more chapters

Why does the main character on the cover have a tattoo on his face?

You can only talk about fake Taoist priests who look good, or you can kill them all the way and encounter a female swordswoman who raises cannibal foxes, and then catch and release them.

What should I say? The author's aesthetic may be a little different from the public's. I can't imagine an immortal wearing a white gauze (movies and TV dramas have led to the subjective belief that it is a female-only prop), and then having large scars or birthmarks on his face. (That's the cover character) It doesn't feel like a monk, more like a knight. But when the two are combined, the author is most likely a young man, and the plot is relatively immature. So far, what I have read is that the donkey leads the way back to the dojo. It feels like a hoe here and a hoe in the west. The protagonist portrays Brother B, and then the knight's pleasure. Anyway, that's all I feel subjectively. It's so high on the new book list, but there are less than 100 reviews. I feel like it's also due to the appearance of the protagonist.

It's strange these double-labeled authors! People can kill and eat demons at will, and they are also called to eliminate demons and subjugate demons! Monsters can't eat people, and eating people is a heinous crime? ? Is it fair? What do you let them eat if they don't eat meat? ?

With all due respect, do the characters in this novel all have mania? Facing a big monk who can hold you to death with one hand, one or two of them are like missing a brain, they just draw their swords and cut them without any reason. Isn't that a bit crazy?

It's very fragmented. The core of the underworld cultivating immortals is covered with the skin of traditional immortals.

How long has it been on the shelves for a Taoist, but not an immortal? Just so many emotional scenes?

I rambled on without knowing what the theme was, and the progress of a complete plot was too slow. It felt like writing a diary.

In these two hundred chapters, the protagonist does not look like the same person. In the first half, he is like a fool, killing decisively. In the second half, he suddenly enlightens and becomes polite, and does not look like a person.

The protagonist is just like a beast with power, there is no difference, so proceed with caution

This introduction has no desire for people to read it. It is nothing more than the second child of God and the third child of you.

It seems like it was written in a flash, and I feel like there is no outline...

This issue of Sanjiang is too watery, and this book is actually the best among them.

Why do I have the impression that I've seen it before, but it's vague and a little different?

The protagonist, who has a lot of opportunities and no background, is very arrogant outside, but no one kills him to seize the opportunity. The logic does not match up!

The protagonist is constantly killing and killing, mainly because he doesn't have a few pounds, so his survival depends entirely on God's will.

The orthodox sect lives next to demons and is surrounded by demons. It is inconvenient for those who seek immortality and the disciples of the sect to get in and out, and they even give birth to people who live in harmony with the demons. They are not demonized cultivators like Fangxian heretics, and they are orthodox cultivators. What is the point of this? What are the pros and cons?

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I am a Shanshui man from Qingdu, and I am naturally lazy and arrogant. He Yu wrote the wind edict and asked Yunyong to borrow the moon chapter. Thousands of poems, thousands of cups of wine, caring about gods and waiting kings. Returning lazily from the Jade Tower and Golden Tower, Luoyang is intoxicated by placing plum blossoms.

This dog and donkey caused trouble for the protagonist, why don't you deal with it?

The author should change the cover, this picture really doesn't look good.

The introduction is not very good and a bit cliché.

The plot is too clear and lacks water, and there is no tension, just like a running account 🙂

So far it's good, but what's the point of two chapters a day? Too little.

Isn't it two chapters a day? It's not on time 🙂

Brother, give me an accurate estimate, I don't dare to chase you

The first book I ordered in full is Your Monk in the Mountains. It's a book I like very much. I'm a bit confused about it. Come on for the new book!