I'm Not a Detective

As an old reader who has not experienced starting point purification, I have read "The Evil Girl" and "Ichiban" written by the author of this book Hai Hai. I have briefly read other books, but due to unclear memory, I will not discuss them. At present, I have read Chapter 30, and I really can't help myself, so I will comment. The author has always written things with the same template. From the special function proficiency template of Mr. Kitahara in the different world in the beginning of the evil girl, to the current super-sensitive perception of Takeshi Nanahara in the different world. There is no doubt that Nanahara will carry forward the spirit of Kitahara and open a harem along the route of Kitahara. The protagonist is actually more important here. Compared with Nanahara, I remember The memories of Kitahara are very similar: financial distress, weak initial constitution, going out to bear the financial pressure alone, being entangled by unreasonable women and starting a wonderful high school life... But here, I must point out that the shortcomings of the heroine Ruri in this article can even be said to be poisonous (compared to the evil girl Fuyumi) 1. The beginning of the conflict Fuyumi hates Kitahara because Kitahara, as the second place, squeezed out the third place Fuyumi, causing trouble to the Fukuhara family (a financial conflict) and as the first place's licking dog, she mocked Fuyumi so hard (this was the main trigger) that Kitahara, who traveled through time, began to inherit the bad fate of her predecessor The conflict between Ruri and Nanabahara began Liuli's semi-forced invitation was essentially based on Liuli's good-natured character, who brought others to the activity room to participate in the murderer-guessing activity regardless of other people's feelings. Her dissatisfaction after being easily exposed led to the subsequent series of events (but here, Qiyuan is quite innocent, and Liuli left a very bad impression on the reader). In a country with a very strict concept of respect and inferiority. In Japan, only high school students with happy families and good backgrounds will do this kind of thing 2. Role compatibility First of all, Mr. Kitahara's life is very involved in the Fukuhara family. Mr. Kitahara needs to achieve his own financial independence. Fuyumi wants to maintain the Fukuhara family. In terms of economic interests, they are very close. The Fukuhara family cannot do without Chef Kitahara. ; And the relationship between Nanahara and Ruri is only an instant one. The author does not describe Nanahara's financial gap positively, and downplays the campus life. It is one-sided and is just a knowledge payment transaction between Ruri and Nanahara. Second, character personality 1. Fuyumi's character is a plus in my book, as she is independent and strong as the head of the family (although However, she is often fragile in front of Mr. Kitahara), she has the tenderness of the eldest sister to her sisters, her characteristics are also very obvious (little carrot head), and she also has shortcomings (irritable, quite irritable) In short, she is a cute character with normal concepts and does not need to be forcibly patched by the author 2. Kitahara and Nanabahara's initial characters are almost the same model, so I won't go into details. , Anyway, no problem, this is what light novels under the sea are like 3. Liuli (Before talking about Liuli, let me state that my position is not neutral, I just try to make my evaluation as objective as possible. I am currently reading Chapter 30) The appearance of a heroine like Liuli in the works of an old author like Liuli makes me very surprised and even disappointed. First of all, Liuli's initial motive was to satisfy her own vanity. Once exposed, she became red-hot and seemed childish and imbecile. After that, Liuli's irritable character is shown. (I counted Liuli's emotional changes in Chapter 27, as shown in Figure 1) Then, the description of Liuli's well-to-do family background, the description of Qiyuan's family situation from the mouth of Liuli's mother, and the difference between the two people's own qualities are shown, which leads to slutty behavior and jealousy. Furthermore, you did a good job writing about Liuli using a "playful" attitude to go through the process of solving the case of a neighbor killing a villain because of a grudge, and then backhand writing a label "Liuli has strong empathy" and hanging it up (angry) Finally, one thing to write about, didn't Liuli have a book written by himself? Well, this is the reason why I wrote about jealousy above. In the world he built, Liuli stole Qiyuan's achievements and belittled his identity just to satisfy his ridiculous vanity.... I'm tired. I've been writing for an hour. This book will be like this. Many, many days have passed. Now, my joy at the book "The Evil Girl" and the "Undersea Walker" in the first column of the search engine have begun to fade from my memory. When I look at the name "Undersea Walker" and the character Liuli's unreasonable troubles, I no longer want to use more words to describe her. I think of Weibo, Little Red Book, Douban, and Douyin. It has crystallized. Book friends are no longer book friends, they are called fans; now under a review, you can only read it if you like it, but don't read comments like Gun's. That's it. The starting point is more than one Undersea Walker, and it doesn't stop at Undersea Walker

Other authors become great gods and even give back to book friends. If you become a great god, you can directly attain enlightenment from the palace... The cauldron! No, this book is really well written.

An incident happened in Osaka in 2018. A prisoner ran out of the police station openly. At that time, there were more than 20 police officers in the police station, but no one noticed that he ran away. A total of 40,000 people were arrested (including 3,000 from Osaka), but nothing was found. In the end, he could only bow and apologize. As a result, he rode with a cyclist in Japan. He met the police more than once on the way, but the police did not recognize him. He also went to government agencies several times to ask for maps, and the staff printed out "Japan Midday" for him. In the end, he was caught stealing because he had no money. Because autopsies and on-site investigations are not taken seriously, black widow incidents occur frequently in Japan. This is when some women specifically find men to marry, or they attack their husbands, and then kill them through various means, and then obtain their husbands' pensions and all their property. For example, Kanae Kijima in Hokkaido killed them one by one by burning charcoal, and made people mistakenly think that they were "suicides." After receiving the call, the Japanese police treated them as suicides and did not conduct autopsies or detailed investigations. But it didn't attract attention once, it didn't attract attention twice, and it attracted attention the third time. After all, the same thing cannot happen one after another. The autopsy finally concluded that it was homicide, and he was arrested and sentenced. Death penalty (not yet carried out) There is another black widow Ji, Chisako can verify that she killed at least seven to eight people, and a fiancé also died in a car accident (but she cannot be sure whether it was She caused the car accident, and the police may not even do an identification), because too many people died, which eventually aroused suspicion. The last person was autopsied and it was found that he died of cyanide (which is the poison that appears most in Japanese related works. It is not clear how they obtained the strictly controlled poison, which also proves that there are problems with the control) The two black widows are extremely representative, proving that a large number of people are judged to have committed suicide, diseases, and accidents every year after the police are called out. Too many of them are likely to be homicides. The most ridiculous thing is that the former Nissan Ghosn escaped from Neon. Japanese security and police did not even conduct the most basic inspection and went out directly in the box. In the Conan movie version, he hid in the box and still used high-tech shielding detection. The reality is that the border inspection did not detect it at all The other thing is that someone with a broad mind knows it.

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Whether you like to write or not is up to you. Just keep it for now, and forget about it until you die... What you said was like farting, and now I can't even make up any excuses.

This book completely destroyed all previous characters.

Don't do to others what you don't want others to do to you You worked for six days (you were so tired that he slept for three hours or so), and you rarely rested on weekends. Your friend asked you to do charity (I can do it casually, but I won't take the initiative to do it. Do you live an easy life? If you do it, you will be better). Go, how do you feel, and this is not even a friend, just an acquaintance, so step in and see what it feels like. Anyway, even if I don't break off the relationship with him directly, I will be alienated in the future. That kind of person just wastes my time for his own satisfaction. Of course, if you can accept it (not just typing on the keyboard, everyone can do it), I really admire it.

From yesterday afternoon, I watched until 6 o'clock in the morning. I slept until 12 o'clock and woke up and watched 2 o'clock in the afternoon. I finally caught up with the latest chapter. I have read all six books on the bottom of the sea. Let me just say that this book is the masterpiece of the bottom of the sea! Personally, I feel that the quality of this new book completely surpasses "The Evil Girl" with the best reputation and "Absolute Ichiban" with the best results. Haihai is famous for his realistic and delicate daily descriptions and excellent character creation. Before "Absolute Ichiban", his books focused on daily life and neglected the main line, or the main line was not very obvious and weak. There is a problem with this, that is, although daily life is good, it is easy to get bored after reading too much, and there is no clear main line, which makes it difficult to attract readers to keep following the novel. Once the number of words is long, it will be difficult to pick up after being dropped for a while. This is how I did not finish "The Evil Girl". When it comes to "Absolute Ichiban", Hai Hai begins to establish a clear main line, which is to achieve career success through literary copying. Along the way, he pretends to be cool and slaps in the face. The audience is shocked. He has a lot of fun playing various online novel routines, and his grades have skyrocketed all the way, becoming the best-performing novel in Hai Hai. But there are still problems, that is, the character creation and daily life cannot keep up, and it does not mean that the underwater skills are not good enough. It is that the description in this aspect is far from "The Evil Girl", so that there are not many impressive characters in the whole book, and it is not even as good as "The God" and "Zero Supervisor". I will not comment on "The Immortal in the Pot", it is indeed not well written. After reading this book, the bottom of the sea seemed to have an enlightenment, and all the previous problems were solved directly! Use each suspense reasoning case as the main task to increase the tension of the plot and attract readers to keep reading. Don't tell me that the case is cliche and easy for readers to guess. As an ordinary reader, I have never read so many mystery stories. If you don't read this chapter, you won't be able to guess the truth of the case! Moreover, each of the three important cases from the beginning of the book to the present, the town referendum case, the fake painting murder case, and the suicide insurance fraud case are written very carefully, and they even have the quality of a Japanese drama! It feels like each case could be used to shoot a 40-minute Japanese drama. In terms of characterization and daily description, Haibi has not fallen behind either. The male protagonist Qi Yuan is a completely different image from the previous protagonists of Hai Hai. Kitahara is a hard-working person who is too serious, Qianyuan has a hard career, and Wuhara is an honest person. I like this Qi Yuan even more because he is full of talk and actions and is not serious! Although the heroine has shadows of the previous heroines, she also gives people a very different feeling. It feels like she has balanced out the advantages of Yukiri and Fuyumi, which can not only promote the plot but also be naive and not so offensive! The heroine is now much smoother and more likable than before! As for the stories of some parents being short-lived, enjoying good food, bickering and quarreling, Haibi easily picked it up. In addition, Haibi deliberately added a lot of funny jokes, which were fun but not blunt. I often laughed out loud in bed in the middle of the night watching it! To sum up, this book is Hai Hai's current pinnacle work, which he created based on the experience and lessons learned from the previous books! I am optimistic that this book can surpass all the previous works under the sea, and help him get the master contract! With this book in mind, Hai Hai has ordered 40,000 copies in a row! Definitely the first person to publish light novels on Qidian! This is too unreasonable not to be explained to a master!

We started to quarrel over the heroine again. The familiar author and the familiar quarrels are all back. My youth is back! ! ! !

It doesn't have to be so difficult to give birth, the cases are basically used for reference, so can't we continue writing like this?🥱

The author's descriptions of food are really nice. I recommend writing more.

I just started reading this book, and it has been added to my book list recommendation. The previous article is very funny, you can try to follow it 🙂

The Bizarre Adventure of Miss Liulimos

It has been updated today! Cheers to the bottom of the sea!

To tell the truth, Hai Hai wrote a book before - Lin Jian and Shen Ming. The whole book is a complete story. It was really talented at that time. Of course, it must be admitted that that style is more suitable for physical writing and not suitable for online writing. Evil Girl is okay. Although it is divided into stages, it is not too routine, because the unit drama is big enough and the plot is full. Although The Immortal in the Pot is unfinished, it looks pretty good because it is in the same category as The Evil Girl and the big unit is complete enough. Ichiban is the most formulaic book under the sea. It is obvious that the whole book is broken down into sections - a script is a unit. "Under the Sea" is comfortable to write, but the readers may feel a little tired of reading it. Especially readers who don't chase more and save more and just make up for it all at once can't stand it. To be honest, this way of writing is a bit awkward. This book "Under the Sea" kind of wants to be treated like Ichiban. The whole book is broken down into individual cases, and each case is a small unit. But unlike Ichiban, the circumstances of each case are different, so the fun can be guaranteed and it will not be as homogenous as Ichiban. But the bottom of the sea may have missed a point. The plot of Ichiban does not require much thinking. The scripts are all ready-made in the real world, so you just have to write them head-down. But when it comes to detective writing, it takes a lot of brainpower to compile a logical case. At the same time, in order to ensure the fun, we should try our best to go against the routine and not let the readers guess what the result will be. Isn't this making things difficult for ourselves... So my suggestion is that there should be fewer cases and more branch lines, such as shogi cooking, antique shopping and a leisurely campus day. When the case cannot be compiled, insert these into the middle of the case to make a big transition. There is no need to write too professionally. Readers come here for Japanese light novels on a daily basis. The logic behind the writing of shogi, cooking, hunting for antiques, etc. Can be a set of templates.... But if there is a corner at the bottom of the sea, a detective's battle of wits... Cavan's days are still to come. Every case is different and the writing must be interesting... Just thinking about it makes my scalp numb.

It's so beautiful. The heroine is being manipulated so hard by 7 Yuan 5 that she feels like an aggrieved little pig. It's quite cute. The reasoning part is also very eye-catching. The tension and bickering of the reasoning and the daily fun are combined in a way that makes me feel that it is not inferior to the Japanese mystery books. The author's writing is so good. I support it!

There is no such thing today. Under the sea, under the sea, it seems that you are going to imitate the dragon rising to the sky. If you don't learn all the good ones, you will learn the bad ones.

The writing style of "Under the Sea" is getting better and better. It keeps improving but it's not good enough. Can it break out?

Well written and very comfortable to watch

Fox

I am writing for the bottom of the sea. As long as the bottom of the sea remains unchanged, what I write will not become distorted. I hope the author can write according to his own ideas! Don't care too much about the complaints of some readers who pursue higher pursuits. As long as the author is still watery, it won't be a big problem. If it's really too watery, the author may feel uncomfortable writing it. I think my views on the case or main line are reflected in the previous article. A detective who is not a detective does not limit the protagonist to being involved in criminal investigation incidents. The pursuit of a high-standard life inevitably requires being born in the world and pursuing 💰. With the help of the identity of time-travelers, one can engage in industries common to time-travelers. The exploration and development of the protagonist's special abilities is a branch. The protagonist's life experience is also a branch that can be developed and explored. You don't have to be stuck in your daily life. As long as you don't touch the tiger's skin, you can express your personal feelings. Writing depends very much on the author's state. If the early setting is good, the state is also very good. Now some readers have some opinions. It is normal. The author should not be entangled, but should be open and accept it in the essay. Just stop when you think of it. The story line is an extension of the early character design. There is no need to impose some content that is difficult for the author to correct. Please don't get entangled in it and just let it go in the future.

If this book is going to have a harem, it must at least come with its own body scent like the Tibetan Fox, otherwise the male protagonist will not be interested no matter how beautiful his physique is.

I feel that the most important issue is the character of the heroine. I hope that after experiencing this kidnapping and helping strangers, I will have to be vigilant when releasing kindness and be cautious. People always have to grow.

In the early morning, Takeshi Nanahara felt something was wrong with the air when he went out. He bought milk and waited at the entrance of the supermarket for the air purifier to go to school with his classmate Qingmi. On the way to school, Qingjian Ruri (crossed out) Qingjian Ruri rides his beloved little bicycle, with his classmate Qi Kuai and Fifty on the back. The working hours became more and more unpaid. For the sake of Qingmi Ruri's health, Takeshi Nanahara asked Qingmi Ruri, who was a little fat, to exercise. Qingmi's classmate, who originally only had to do housework after school in the afternoon, had an extra job - riding a bicycle on the way to school in the morning. According to Takeshi Nanahara, during the process of cycling, you can consume excess energy in the body, burn fat, and achieve the effect of weight loss. Of course, Qingjian Ruri did not agree with this statement: "It's just pitiful to see you go to school alone. The kind-hearted Miss Qingjian, the hidden fox, is very compassionate and accompanies you to school." The girl is riding a bicycle, and the boy in the back seat puts his hand around the girl's waist, like a couple of gods and goddesses, making others envious. "It didn't take long for you to gain weight again." "No way, you lied to me! I'm not fat!" "Don't deceive yourself, I hug you every day Can't you feel it? " "#@%＊￥&... I'll kill you with a dump truck sooner or later!" As an assistant, Qingmi Ruri has to take BOSS to school during working hours. Of course, Assistant Qingmi will certainly satisfy Takeshi Nanabahara's demands during working hours. For example, Takeshi Nanahara said that in order to ride safely, he should hold Qingmi Ruri's waist. Of course, the always reserved classmate Qingmi did not agree immediately, and only reluctantly agreed after Nanabahara Wuran explained a lot of truth. Although Qingmi-san was blushing at the time and didn't hear what Takeshi Nanahara said, it is certain that Qingmi-san is a reserved girl. Well... At least that's what Qingjian Ruri thinks. "Don't think too much, I didn't agree because I liked you." Takeshi Nanahara added a few more words in the "Tibetan Fox Observation Diary": Only the mouth of the Tibetan fox is hard, except when touching with the mouth. Of course, these are all written in Chinese, and Takeshi Qihara knew that Ms. Liuli Moss's level of education would definitely not be able to understand them. … In the evening, Takeshi Nanabahara was squeezing Liuli again while his eyes were not yet healed: "Oh, my back always hurts after being injured by bombs. It would be great if someone could give me a hammer. Alas, it's a pity that the person I rescued was a white-eyed wolf... " Qingjian Liuli was still fishing in the kitchen when he heard the dog Qi Yuan barking again. He walked out and waited for him angrily: "Where is the sourness!" Qing Yuan, who was wearing sunglasses, put his hands behind his back and pointed to a random place. "Hiss! You are trying to kill me." "Let you bully me again..." Liuli muttered softly. Although Liuli said so, the strength in her hands gradually decreased. Gou Qiyuan deliberately made trouble again: "You haven't eaten, haven't you? You have so little strength. You eat more than a pig every day, and your back is still soft even if you beat it." Liuli glared at him fiercely again, but now she could only see the back of Gou Qiyuan's head, and the more she looked at him, the more she wanted to hit him. Takeshi Nanabahara enjoyed the back-beating service of the Tibetan fox. When he raised his head to drink water, he saw a mirror not far away. The full-length mirror was moved by Liuli two days ago. Gou Qiyuan asked her to place it near the recliner, saying that it was more convenient for BOSS to supervise the maid in cleaning. Through the full-length mirror, Qi Yuan keenly noticed that Liuli's dark circles had worsened again. "Why are you staying up late again?" Of course the reason for staying up late is because our Miss Liuli Moss is continuing to write the story between her and the idiot Nanabahara Watson. The incident she encountered two days ago was reasonably adapted by Miss Liuli Moss and written into the book. "Ah? Of course it is to be written..." The naive Tibetan Fox almost told the truth, "I want you to take care of it!" After finishing speaking, Liuli felt that it was a bit bad to say this. After all, Gou Qiyuan still has some conscience, and he knew Dao cared about her: "Okay, okay, I swear I won't stay up late anymore..." Of course Liuli really swore, but the second half of the oath was said in her heart: I swear I won't stay up late anymore. If I stay up late again, I will swear again! {"TopicId":"833042723669540864","TopicName":"New Year's Eve Award"}

Tibetan Fox

According to the chat information, there have been few recent updates on Hai Hai because he has no time to write. He has been busy during this period, so updates will be intermittent. The recovery time is probably uncertain. It is not that Kawen cannot be written, and it does not require eunuchs. It is estimated that it will take a long time. It's definitely not because the author didn't pay and was reported, probably (should). (It feels like it's easy to overdo it, just pretend you didn't see the last sentence)

I think this picture really suits Liuli

AI Painting Tibetan Fox Glaze This should be what it looks like! Full of confidence~

Many people have asked, so I will make a separate post to talk about it now. A lot of things have happened in the life under the sea this year, but it has passed, and it is also related to the privacy of the sea, so I won't talk about it, just talk about the situation of this book. Hai Hai tried to continue writing this book several times in the past year, but failed. There are many reasons, but it is true that there is no way to continue writing, and the Taoist heart is almost broken again. I finally tried for a while some time ago, but it seems that I really can't save it (sad). I am probably preparing a new book now. When the new book comes out, I may post the outline of the book. For the book friends who have been waiting for a year, I really feel extremely guilty, because I have said several times that I can update it, but in the end I have failed and betrayed everyone's trust. I want to say to everyone here: I'm sorry. I'm really sorry everyone.

Angry LiuliAI Painting