Hatto-Ryu Love Routine

Can you tell me what's so cute about the daughter of the Supreme Being? He is domineering and does not understand equality. He will make excessive insults or even punish others for minor offenses. Still ungrateful. The protagonist who saved him twice was directly imprisoned and threatened with violence. There's no problem saying he's a villain, right? This kind of persona may exist in Neon, but it's really not likable. Nowadays, tsundere is no longer popular. Why has this kind of Yakuza character, which is much more extreme than tsundere, suddenly become popular in light novels?

This book is non-toxic, feel free to read it. There is a guy in the comment area who can only accept fairy tales but not real society, so don't worry about him.

I wrote and deleted, deleted and wrote again. I found it difficult to summarize, so I chose to just write down my complete thoughts. In terms of plot, the content of this book is of good quality and attractive enough, but overall it is a bit dull. There is no intense emotional point for readers, and it can only create vague expectations. Maybe this is because it's not in the later stage? There are no major mistakes in the writing style, the sentences are smooth, there are no strange and awkward words and sentences, and the dialogue between the characters is relatively natural. But it's a little stiff, and there's a feeling that everything is fine but was delayed by the author. However, if you read it in one go, you can still see the author's progress and developing writing style. It is recommended to refer to Xueman Changan L's prude style of writing. Playing with the memes a little more can adjust the atmosphere of the article and tone up the slightly bland plot. As far as the characters are concerned, the settings are excellent and natural. But the problem lies in the creation of characters. A more specific issue is the depiction of character details. To put it in one sentence, there is something wrong... For example, the eldest lady should be a kind-hearted and serious character like a royal sister. As a result, she was written as a flat-chested lolita character who is fierce and strong, but also has some brains. A top student should be a young girl who looks a little shy on the outside, but is unexpectedly bold, but underneath is a yandere reserve. As a result, the boldness of the writing is a bit like a slut... The painter girl should be a junior character with a weak energy system. The result is a bit confusing... The best writers are my sister and editor Madoka... In addition, the psychological description of the protagonist is still somewhat lacking, and the change of the protagonist's mentality is not well handled. It does not reflect the protagonist's entanglement, distress, conflict and other emotions. Although this is not practical, as the author said, it is better than reading an outline.

Chong Cong Chong

As an old bookworm, I personally feel that the starting point light novel genre has great potential for development. In the past, some books with a small number of words had average or even poor data at the beginning, such as I loaded a love game, my girlfriend is a voice actress, etc. In the end, the results were very good, because of the author's persistence, coupled with the good writing style and a little luck. The same is true for this book. The author's wonderful conception and skillful writing style of GHS, I hope that the author can continue writing and achieve better results. I will try my best to make up for the subsequent subscriptions, haha

The yakuza eldest lady threatens, the man fights back

This book is quite good, but the updates are too slow. The early plot is a bit inconsistent with a certain game, but I can't stop reading it later.

This book is full of flavor! The author doesn't hide his XP at all.

I originally wanted to say that I saw the cover coming in, but then I thought that saying this would make people think that I am a SP, so I better not say it.

The new book was reported and had no choice but to be removed from the shelves. Hope you understand. Book friends who want to join the group can join the group through the book group introduction.

After reading today's chapter, I finally know why I like reading this novel so much (it's definitely not because I am an LSP). I personally like harem themes, but I don't like reading about scumbag men. The male protagonist in this book was a scumbag in his previous life, and the reason for starting a harem in this life is so legitimate and not at all abrupt. Because of the world line correction mechanism, Tian Haicheng must open a harem, handle the relationship between the heroines, and conquer all the heroines. So it looks very comfortable and natural, he is an upright "scumbag", and his emotions are handled very well. At least the emotional lines of Hanasaki and Shiyu are very smooth to me so far. I hope the latter two can also handle them well. Come on, author!

The heroine

I have always been curious, curious, about the description of the feeling of stockings, as well as the feel and touch. How did the author know? Could it be... A cabinet of stockings?

I feel that the writing is quite good. I just want to share the feeling of reading the book from the perspective of a reader, hoping to give the author a little more inspiration. 1. I feel that the four female protagonists are a bit wasted. The love-hate entanglement with the protagonist is not that strong. I feel that the dream can be induced by the diary. For example, the four female protagonists use the diary to trip up each other. 2. I feel that the inner thoughts of the protagonists can be slightly strengthened 3. I feel that the biggest highlight of this book should be the diary. I feel that the diary can have more scenes 🌹🌹

[In a previous life, a certain scumbag tried to escape from being chased by four girls] "Oops, the position was exposed." A certain scumbag saw several girls who looked like Shura coming from behind. Looking around, except for the teaching building, there is open space all around, and there is no half-obstructed person. As long as he dares to run, he will definitely be discovered, and then even if he runs away, Kurosaki Hanasaki will kill him with a phone call. Running is absolutely impossible. He shuddered when he thought of the underworld's methods. Several Shura were approaching, and every step made Tian Haicheng's heart tremble. No! We can't sit still and wait for death! Tian Haicheng gritted his teeth, turned around and rushed into the teaching building. As long as you hide until they leave, you can survive today! ! As for what happens next? Hehe, let's live through today first. In this critical moment, Tian Haicheng calmed down and his brain was working at high speed. Breaking into the teaching building, Tian Haicheng threw the stones he picked up just now at the surveillance camera. "One click, one click" 4 stones, smashed 3 surveillance cameras. The corridor and infirmary on the first floor were liberated and all the stones were recovered. At the same time, several girls entered the battlefield. Asakawa Shiyu entered the teaching building first and saw the debris on the ground and the destroyed surveillance. He frowned, but soon relaxed and smiled sweetly: "Hey, as expected, we are here, so there is no need to adjust the surveillance~." "Sister~, where is Nissan~, I can't help but want to see him~" Kagura China narrowed her dark eyes and said faintly. "Let's talk first, I don't want the rest, the head must be mine." Kurosaki Hanasaki said while playing with the hatchet casually. Arisu Linnai raised the knife without saying a word. "Ding bell bell one" The bell in the teaching building rang, as if announcing the beginning of this cat-and-mouse game. Hey, the cat's claws have been sharpened~ Hey, poor mouse~, Have you got prepared?

Miko costume

Brother, you are writing about Riqing. The flavor of this book is too strong and there is no sense of immersion at all.

This character almost has flaws in terms of personal abilities and mentality, making it almost unbearable to watch. In terms of personal abilities Except for being strong in swordsmanship and good in appearance, there are almost no other commendable abilities mentioned Mental aspects 1. Her opponent has a very loyal boy who is willing to die for her. He almost had his fingers chopped off because he called her "Miss" when he was working as a security guard in the school. In addition, based on the psychological activities of the little brother, it can be inferred that this character treats his subordinates very cruelly, and the little brother feels that his whole family will be sinking into Tokyo Bay. So, she may not have actually done such a thing, but it at least shows thatshe is very harsh on minor mistakes made by her subordinates, with punishments but no rewards. How can anyone follow such a person? ? ? 2. Chapter 134 mentioned that she wanted to interrogate the protagonist, but the protagonist saved her from fire and water twice, and used polygraphs and background checks to verify that the person was not an enemy. At the same time, the protagonist could provide her with information about future dangers. In the end, they still want to imprison and arrest the protagonist. Not only are they ungrateful and indifferent to their benefactor, but they also don't want such a big help? ? It is normal for a gang leader to not follow moral laws, but she has no normal logic at all and is so narrow-minded. How weak must her opponent be to allow her organization to continue to survive? 3. The origin of the love between the protagonist and her is her drunken mistake, so the same thing will happen if she changes to a handsome guy. I don't want to mention the same operations as dog training later, maybe it's the author's preference. Summary: This character is arrogant, and the delicate part is basically invisible; the character is shaped like a psychopath.

Last week's episode was so helpless, I couldn't manage my time, In the end, my poetry failed, I couldn't do anything before I died. Fortunately, this week's project is "complete".

Also wearing stockings and bra🤔

It seems that the author responded to the post very seriously. I will also send one: The author is so handsome🤓🤓🤓

This book is clearly well written, but why is no one reading it?

After watching the finale, some people talked about parallel time and space. The four people who were involved in the hatchet are still living in regret. I don't know how to evaluate it.

"Why did I force those who liked me so much in my previous life to do that?" Looking at the cute sister in front of him, Tianhai City fell into deep thought. "Why on earth did I do those things, forcing all these girls who love me to do that." "Brother, what are you thinking." Tianhai Cheng rubbed Qiannai's head and said "I was wondering why my Qiannai-chan is so cute." "How could Qiannai..." As the voice became smaller and smaller, Qiannai's little face quickly turned red at a speed visible to the naked eye, and bursts of water mist appeared on her head. "Qiannai-chan will always be the cutest in my brother's heart." "Well..." Qiannai's face was flushed at this time, and she couldn't even speak. She could only look at her brother blankly. "But Qianna must remember that no matter what time, my brother always likes Qianna"

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One day, Kagura Qianna came home from school and read comics in the room. Qianna fantasized about the plot of the hand-controlled sister and the foot-controlled brother, and fell asleep on the table. "Where am I?" Qianna's consciousness came to a house she had never seen before. She stood up from the bed, the heavy feeling in her chest was so real. "Have I come to the future? He is indeed a potential stock. In the future, my brother and I will be together forever." Qian Nai thought like this and lowered her head, unable to see her toes at all. Qian Nai weighed the heavy object with her hands. She was really happy. Although she felt like she was in a dream, the feeling was so real. "What will I look like in the future?" Qian Nai searched everywhere in the room and finally found a mirror. "Ah!" Qian Nai exclaimed, "Is this still me? Why do I look so much like my brother's classmate Shiu Asakawa, only I have become more mature." "Hey, what is this? A red book." Qian Nai woke up like this. She saw a wedding invitation that read: "Welcome to the wedding of Tenkai Makoto and Shiu Asakawa." The photo above was exactly my brother and this body. "Fortunately, it's a dream, but why is this dream so real? I must be more vigilant about Sister Shiyu in the future, and have two bottles of papaya milk for dinner! Brother, wait for me!" Qian Nai is full of hope for the future.

I kept reading the new book and suddenly died 🙂

What's going on with the lemon tea? I just saved the new book for two days and it's gone. Why don't I change my vest? I keep getting reported.

What does it mean?

This book is one of the few books that I have ordered and finished. I can't remember whether I read this book last year or the year before. On a whim, I flipped through the bookshelf and found this book. I can no longer remember what it said, but at least it was relaxing and interesting every time I read it. Needless to say, Lemon Tea's writing style is superb. He is a first-rate expert at driving. He has also gone through many tests of review. It is a pity that he is now in a weak position. I may watch it again when I have time, support lemon tea