I Am the World's First, Second, and Third

I've read a little bit of it before, but I discarded it because it had too few words. Now I can kill it for this number of words. Manchester United die-hards must support it~

I feel like the author just likes to write some inexplicable conflicts, which makes it very embarrassing. I remember the same thing last time. What is your protagonist's character like? Is he mature and reassuring? He can be passionate, but it must be during critical matches. Now the protagonist feels the same. Is it because I wrote two books at the same time?

Da Tou, what type of new book are you writing? The club is well developed

Although I am not a fan of Messi or Ronaldo, I feel disgusted when I see the author forcibly adding Cristiano Ronaldo and Portugal to the World Cup finals. Why should I favor one over the other? Messi and Argentina should be written according to reality, and Cristiano Ronaldo and Portugal will change history. When writing sports novels, other characters should be neutral except for the protagonist. It is better not to do this for the sake of so-called feelings. It is a bit poisonous.

It's too poisonous. Can the Chinese men's football team still reach the World Cup finals? Can it be more poisonous? Did you eat too much sea cucumber?

The character design does not match the content of the book. It is written by a blind chicken. It is originally aimed at rebirth, mature thinking, and can make good use of its own advantages and foresight. What you write is very far-sighted at one moment, and dumbfounded at the other.

It was recommended by Qidian. Com and give it a try after reading this book. . . Forcibly suppressing the protagonist in the early stage is too clumsy. It can be used several times to hit a goalpost, and it is easy to eat and vomit. If the plot is not well written, then the "Hand of God" forcefully suppresses the level. What else can it show other than the author's incompetence in rationalizing the plot? . . What's even more bizarre is that several consecutive chapters are filled with curses, and the author says they are all begging for votes. How many readers have masochistic tendencies? 😑We are all normal people. In order to suppress ourselves, wouldn't it be better to read Dong Fangzhuo's press releases in reality? Even if you don't enable the invincible char, you still need to enable the enhanced char. The experience of more than 30 years of veteran experience is not used very much. It just looks like a young person.

Is it difficult for an author to create a character nowadays? You connect a real person to a real person and have a sense of immersion. When you become a real person, do you have to recognize his family and relatives? Is it green to pick up a girl? If you are successful in football, it is not you. And the national football team is worth your time?

Cristiano Ronaldo and Messi are both top players, so there is no need to praise Ronaldo over others. The three of them can be each other's rivals. There is no need to unite with Ronaldo to crush Messi.

After reading hundreds of chapters, strictly speaking as a novel, this book does not give people a good impression, because the author's subjective control of the plot is too obvious. In order to facilitate the unfolding of the planned plot later, the protagonist's team will be killed no matter how hard they struggle, even for some ridiculous reasons. However, this kind of writing will obviously be criticized by some readers who are unhappy with it, so we have to find a balance within the controllable range of the plot, so that the protagonist can advance more before killing. Is this cool? Just like Manchester United's Dong became a forward killer and a fulcrum, and then the author made him disappear on the field, describing Rooney and Ronaldo's various performances, and then the protagonist suddenly scored or assisted. It was a completely subjective impression, giving people a strong sense of fragmentation.