I Want to Be the King of Football

After seeing Chapter 411, I haven't decided about the national team yet, but I am sure that I will go to Barcelona first. With all due respect, for me, this is second only to the national team. Everyone, see you soon.

The main line is not very clear, it would be better to refine it a little more. I highlighted the theme and read more than twenty chapters. I felt like I couldn't find what I wanted. I was about to give up the book, but suddenly I found that thing appeared again. I was tired. I was very tired from reading. . You are still far away from being a great god, so work hard, Saonian. . .

It looked okay at first, but when I saw the transfer to Barcelona, ​​I thought I would form teammates with Ronaldinho and kill everyone, but it turned out to be full of intrigues everywhere. Please, I came to watch football, not politics. I feel like the author magnified the intrigue just because other book friends didn't like Barcelona. It's poisonous. It's gone.

I seriously suspect that all the comments are made by boys.

I originally wanted to take a look, but then I saw that Pig's Feet went to Barcelona, ​​and I instantly lost motivation. To be honest, Ronaldinho's departure from Barcelona made me feel a little bit natural against Barcelona.

There are too many dialogues, too little plot, and the writing of the game is too bland. Football is a very fierce competition, and the plot of the game should be written more. I have read about twenty chapters. There are too many dialogues, and the system settings are also slightly confusing.

After reading this book, I no longer have to work hard to catch up.

What's the point of staying in a small team if you're sick?

I haven't seen the ones from Barcelona yet, they are all from Real Madrid, so I'll collect them first.

I thought it was OK after seeing something. I looked at the catalog and went to Barcelona. Goodbye. Men's sports shouldn't go to the diving team.

After reading Chapter 34, I feel so confused! I don't feel anything at all! Water doesn't look like water, and ghosts don't look like ghosts.

This book is really one of the best ways to torture the heart

I've read Chapter 83, and I've been describing the various performances of the team members and the protagonist's inaction. I don't know what the author's purpose is in writing like this? Is it to suppress first and then lean back? But it is impossible to suppress more than 80 chapters. It is rare to see one or two chapters in which the protagonist can play the role to the fullest. The protagonist is simply a pain! This is the first time I have read a sports and football novel like this! No wonder there are no "best comments"! The author's thinking is so strange.

I can only say that the protagonist or the author writes with the same brain circuit as Yiba Shen. I endured it for 3 days and got to chapter 95! Abandoned the book

Historical data proves that by introducing Beckham, Real Madrid gained hundreds of millions of euros in commercial development profits and expanded his popularity around the world. Just like the current Antetokounmpo, the milkless, and the real middle-aged and elderly James (NBA), even if they are old and their abilities have declined, their commercial appeal makes them still the targets of every team manager, and you can make money if you buy them.

When I first started reading it, first of all, the name of the protagonist was very annoying. It would be better to call his dad as the book friend said... Also, I wanted to know if he finally made it to the German national team. If he did, keep reading. If he made it to the Chinese men's football team... It would be okay if the arrangement was reasonable, but at first it seemed that the protagonist had German nationality?

It's useless to give up on yourself. The reason why you have so few subscriptions is because you didn't get the point of competitive writing. Readers come to your novel for the protagonist, not for Eto'o or Ronaldinho, so the novel is centered on the protagonist. But you wrote this novel as an ensemble cast, and the role of the protagonist in the game. To be honest, if you hadn't always said that the protagonist and Ronaldinho are the world's strongest wingers, this book would really be unreadable. The most intuitive reflection of whether he is strong or not is the data. The protagonist's performance of more than ten goals in that season is really not that good. To be honest, I don't remember whether the protagonist has scored goals in your book. Thinking about it carefully, there are still some, but they are few and far between. Moreover, when he often scores goals, the writing is not passionate enough. It feels like writing about the protagonist passing a ball and passing a ball. You write without passion in this way. Readers will naturally see no passion. If there is no passion, they will not subscribe. In addition, there are roughly three types of Qidian readers. One is those who only read genuine editions, which goes without saying. The other is those who only read pirated editions. You cannot win over this type. But there is another type who only partially read genuine editions. This type is something you can strive for. Just like me, if I particularly like a book, I will subscribe to it. I only read the genuine ones, which feel a little weaker, and the genuine and pirated ones are random. However, there are not many books in the first two types, so I will also read some other books. These are just for casual reading to pass the time. I often look at these kinds of books and feel completely lost. Then I stop reading them, and naturally I won't spend money to subscribe. However, for someone like me, the number of subscriptions is quite large at the starting point. This is why some books have anti-piracy editions, and the subscription can increase a lot or even double. Regarding your book, I originally planned to subscribe to it, but I ran into the plot of Barcelona. The plot here really didn't make sense at all. The protagonist of the previous team had a sense of existence, but when he arrived at Barcelona, ​​he became a stranger. After two chapters, I really lost my mood, because I really couldn't see where the protagonist was. Just because there are few subscriptions now does not mean that it is really hopeless. Author, you should work hard to improve. If you write well later, there will still be people who read pirated copies in the past and will come to support you. There are still many books that collapsed in the early stage and then rose up in the later stage. But if you fail, there is really nothing you can do. What's more, even if this book really doesn't work, there can still be another one. It's better to find your own weaknesses in this one and improve it than to continue taking the same detours in the next one, right?

It's not that the national football team is not good, it's that the system reform is not good. Just think about Evergrande. It's not just about making money.

I think, don't worry about anyone's opinions about this book now, just write it according to your own ideas until it is finished, and for the next book, be sure to balance the content and your own ideas.

In fact, if there is such a very capable football player who can play in the World Cup, there will be no problem in changing his nationality. Seeing a Chinese in the World Cup will also give fans some confidence.

The content was dry, it was just a game, and after arriving at Liverpool, the fans still had no sense of presence.

A very boring book with no passion.

Was the article deleted at the beginning? I find it baffling.

There's really nothing to write home about about football. Even if every player practices Lingbo Weibu, they can't save the national football team.

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I think the writing is okay. I only watched the protagonist after he transferred to Barcelona. Unfortunately, the protagonist is not reborn.

After seeing about forty chapters, I thought it was a system flow, but it turned out that it was an Eastern fantasy sports, and it slipped away. .

A simple novel, the plot jumps constantly in the middle. When I saw a certain team kneeling down, I immediately gave up the book. It is recommended not to read it.

The current national team is only 71. How come the national team was 79 20 years ago?

The least satisfying thing about this book