The Days of Playing Soccer with a Great Luo

In my memory, what impressed me most about Ronaldo was his golden voice

The character of this protagonist is really disgusting. You are a time traveler and you have experienced so much in your previous life. You should be more mature, right? After time travel, he fought to the death for Ronaldo, and his IQ was almost 0. Kneeling down and licking is not how you lick. If Ronaldo is in Inter Milan, you go to Inter Milan. If Ronaldo transfers to Real Madrid, you will go to Real Madrid next? What do you think of yourself? Just transfer if you want to? And you knew what Real Madrid was like at that time, so you decided to go to Real Madrid to help Ronaldo win the Champions League? ? ? Ronaldo, who was at the top, failed to win the Champions League, but you can do it? What the hell is this? It's a brainless thing to kneel down and lick, throw it away.

Actually, I don't really like writing reviews, but seeing you scolding me like this really scares the readers away. What if the book gets cold and the author stops writing. I think the writing is quite good, at least it avoids most of my shortcomings. First of all, although I am of mixed race, my Brazilian nationality is very safe. Not writing about the national football team is what gave me the courage to read it. Then, the most important on-field description in the competitive text is also quite exciting, which not only reflects the talent and ability of the protagonist, but also does not appear to be too exaggerated. Once the competitive text praises the protagonist for using too much force, it will be really embarrassing and sour. Also, I like Da Luo very much. Being Da Luo's younger brother is one of the golden fingers given by the author. I don't agree with the comments about kneeling and licking Da Luo. Are young people not allowed to have idols? Although the writing style is a bit jerky at the beginning when describing the protagonist's admiration for his brother, in terms of character setting, this really enriches the protagonist's image and makes it more three-dimensional. You can't ask the protagonist to act like he's the best in the world from the beginning, then you can write whatever you want in the finale. However, as a female reader, I really turned on the automatic blocking mode for the emotional scenes in this article (especially love). Fortunately, I have seen ghosts in male videos so many times that I have become accustomed to them. And it seems that there are not many emotional scenes at present, and the author's description focuses on the game on the court. Then let's talk about the problem of the protagonist's mother. Before reading the comments, I didn't feel that this setting was difficult to accept. Maybe it's because I rarely bring it in myself. I can accept the truth given by the author later on. However, if you have a particularly strong sense of immersion, and you have to imagine yourself as the protagonist when reading the novel, a companion who can do anything every day, it is recommended not to fall into the trap. Another point is the author's classification of players' abilities. I don't know if this statement was made by the author or where he came from. I was a little uncomfortable with the classification of "national level" and "intercontinental level" at first, but then I got better after looking at it. If anyone knows the source, please let me know. I am very curious, thank you. Above, at the end, I clasped my hands and prayed sincerely. Please don't let this book get into trouble or be unfinished. It's best not to be interrupted and to have no twists and turns until it's finished!

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I gave up. If you can't write emotional scenes, just don't write them. It's really drunk to write a protagonist who is a scumbag.

There is a lack of empathy for dog licking!

Although Ronaldo plays superior football, Melo is not someone you want to belittle, right?

After reading the first few chapters, to be honest, I couldn't stand it. It's okay to write about Da Luo, but it's a bit too much for you to write like that.

This protagonist lives entirely for Ronaldo, right? From the moment he landed in Europe, he has been following Ronaldo from team to team. He has no ego at all.

For the first time, I saw a brainless male protagonist who lost his independent personality and appeared as a licking dog.

At first, I wrote a bit too much about Ronaldo, as if I couldn't live without him.