Football’s Comeback King

Keep up the good work, author! With your talent, this isn't the kind of result you're aiming for. I hope this becomes a masterpiece.

Without any new twists, it's all the same old clichés. The protagonist, struggling in Europe and called a loser, suddenly gains a system and becomes incredibly powerful – this setup is tiresome! Can't it be a little more natural and reasonable?

Your book truly lives up to its title, "Reversal Maniac." The first two-thirds of the book is about the protagonist reversing others' fortunes, and the last third is about others reversing the protagonist's fortunes. Shouldn't you write a section where the protagonist discovers that the child is growing less and less like herself, getting whiter and whiter, and has naturally colored hair, and then realizes that the female lead has reversed the protagonist's fortunes?

A suggestion First, the protagonist's own strength has improved; please be sure to emphasize this point. Second, arrange for the protagonist, who is overpowered, to suffer several defeats. Do you know where the problem lies? First, the protagonist's abilities are poorly portrayed. You've written a striker; if he loses his threat, the entire attacking line will be affected.

Having read up to chapter 443, I've decided not to read any further. Haha, it suddenly dawned on me that this number is a bit ominous, hhhhhhh. General Sturgeon is furious! I glanced at some of the comments under this chapter, and most of them were saying that the author was trying to make it realistic while simultaneously writing about overpowered characters, which was disgusting.

Is it possible that this cheat code will actually help the protagonist grow stronger later on? Otherwise, it's quite frustrating to watch.

I dropped the story when the protagonist rejected his agent. It seems the author completely fails to grasp what a good management team truly means. Is this just a contract issue? It involves the protagonist's contracts, training, endorsements, image management, and more.

It's really frustrating watching the protagonist be so weak; he should at least show some improvement. The last 10 minutes are always boring.

It's getting increasingly boring. I was really looking forward to seeing him at Manchester City, teaming up with De Bruyne to conquer Europe, but instead he went to Manchester United. Let me just say this: what can Manchester United offer that Manchester City can't? Is it the Glazer family or the Middle Eastern tycoons who have more money?

I have no problem with going to Manchester United, if the writing is good. But seeing this chapter, I noticed a reader commented that you're practically the best in the world, taking such a high transfer fee to join a team without discussing your tactical role? After playing twice, are you really just serving the people? Earnestly working for Manchester United and Mourinho?