I Don't Want to Be the King of Football

I saw a lot of people saying it was good, but I really didn't realize it. After reading dozens of chapters, I found it to be rubbish. The writing, story, and rhythm were all bad. It even made me suspect that it was a troll. I don't like the character, he is really a otaku. When he sees the goddess, he is obedient, humble but dusty, free of rent, and takes care of the goddess's brother. What a noble sentiment this is. This is simply the Holy Mother, so great. Emotional drama is extremely toxic. Data errors, system novel, so careless in the data, the values ​​become lower as the personal attributes increase, the author is really good at mathematics. Age makes people lack a sense of substitution. A 25-year-old youth who has never received professional training actually played professional football in a short period of time. This is really nonsense and goes against common sense. Even if there is a system, it is too subversive of the concepts in everyone's minds. Besides, do you really not know how to slice it? Some people think this is a good writing? What a weird thing!

I commented after reading them all. The story was a little tiring in the early stages, but very exciting in the later stages. Although it has a slightly two-dimensional feel, it has a sense of familiarity with comics such as Slam Dunk and Saint Seiya. The author does not say that the writing style is very good, but the football line is very emotional, the supporting characters are also successfully portrayed, and the logic is clear. It is a rare masterpiece.

The Chinese men's football team has not conceded a goal in the World Cup for 15 consecutive years. This is a great record and represents a record that can only be created by a country with a population of more than 1.3 Billion.

There are too many descriptions of the growth process in the early stage. In fact, newcomers read sports novels mainly for the passionate fantasy of winning, scoring more goals, and winning glory for the country. It is best to brutally torture the opponent, but this book is very reasonable and allows the plot to advance bit by bit, and slowly allows the protagonist to gain technical, physical and spiritual sublimation. The later writing is really good, and there are only a handful of sports novels in Qidian. Count one to two. The protagonist's spirit to win made me cry several times. It was really well written. There is no other sports novel like this from Qidian. It can be seen that the author has a very deep foundation. Come on.

I suspect that the system not only changed the protagonist's body to a 17-year-old, but also changed his mind to a 17-year-old.

Reading this book makes me feel frustrated. Every time I shoot, I always describe how awesome the goal is. I feel so happy when I read it. The frame hits the goal post or the door beam. Day, it doesn't matter if it happens once, it happens several times. I still read the yarn. I feel comfortable reading the book and pictures. How can I be in the mood to read it if it is so cruel every time?

The national team's bastard, he ruined his career and didn't even play. He came back with a weak three-pointer. He's really awesome.

As someone who plays a certain national championship football game, I understand the pig's feet as a game fan and pseudo-fan, so I can read the article more smoothly. I won't be like many people who question "senior fans" who don't understand anything. . . In fact, I just joined in the fun of the World Cup. To identify people by country, you can only identify people by club. There is nothing wrong with writing about the national football team. After all, we support our own country (the main thing is that our names are easier to recognize than foreigners). . . To paraphrase another comment in the review, this book is different from the coquettish bitches out there. . . Apart from the slightly awkward relationship scenes (full of malice toward being single), I'm supportive all the way!

This novel is so terrible. Everyone wants to read it in a relaxing way. No one wants to read it in such a complicated way.

Author, as for the national football team, these stinky sweet potatoes, rotten bird eggs, don't be blind, and the stupid football spirit, the national team spirit, a bunch of chickens for nothing, they can't play football, they are terrible at fighting, if you can do it, let's put it here, the national football team wants to enter the World Cup, and wait until China unifies the world in 500 years to watch the show

In current football novels. This book is the most reasonably written and informative. Of course it is also the most immersive. 12 Votes support every day! Monthly passes are given

The protagonist's data in this book is 0, which means that the protagonist's speed, strength, and body are 0. I don't understand. Even a child can't have 0 skills. No matter how bad the ball is, he can't kick it no matter how he aims. The protagonist is air and has no entity. Otherwise, how could it be 0? According to the author's logic, a person with poor physical fitness who has practiced boxing is a hundred times stronger than a person with good physical fitness who has not practiced boxing. Otherwise, what is the author's logic? As an adult, all the data are 0. You are not a human at all, but a ghost.

There are not many skills. When I read the beginning, I thought I was watching a boxing match. Once the protagonist got the ball, there was no breakthrough pass. The author kept describing the protagonist being knocked down and bumped... And fainted twice. The opponent never got a foul, and the people on the sidelines were like watching TV. This isn't like football writing... More like boxing writing. The protagonist was knocked down and got up and continued to be beaten. Rocky is that you?

Sorry, I read the pirated version of Chapter 100 and came back to read the original version. The latter part is well written. It would be better if the pace of the first part was faster.

? ? Is this novel about the chat history between the protagonist and the system? Can you stop talking nonsense?

It's over. . . Looking forward to the author's next book

To be honest, even though I watched pirated copies and don't know much about football, it's a bit awkward to watch him roaring on the field at every turn! I have never seen anyone yelling for no reason in that game. It only happens after a goal is scored or someone commits a foul, right?

What a beginning. .

Fortunately, when I wrote the contract, I wrote the same thing as 💩

Isn't it embarrassing that so many famous football stars help the protagonist, an unknown person, like this? !

There are several literary arts for people who read football novels. It's a pleasure, a word in a novel, but it doesn't feel good to read at all. Stop watching

A woman who drives a sports car and you, a loser, sit together in a shared apartment. Can you use your brain when writing a book? Even if that woman has some special reason or special hobby, what is the probability of this? Why do you write third-rate short sentences?

When writing novels with this kind of theme, try to reduce the domestic length as much as possible. My personal suggestion is

I haven't read this book yet, but I just collected it. I asked if it was written about the national football team, and if it has joined. If it has joined, I will not read it. If not, I will read it.

Why isn't it updated? ! I think the author wrote it very well! ! !

After so long, I finally have more than 600 chapters.

Author, please update quickly. I came across your book inexplicably. Although there was a plot to persuade you to quit in the early stage, you can still endure it. It will become more and more exciting later on! It's a pity that many people nowadays are impatient. When they see a book with 1000 chapters, they don't want to read it anymore, or they find pirated copies! This book is so well written, and the results are indeed like this! What a pity indeed! If there was a great god, things would definitely be different!

It was particularly cool to see the main character still smoking. I don't know why. The urban protagonist always loves to smoke. He still smokes even though he knows it is bad for his health. He is so sick. How can he be successful if he can't even quit smoking?

The book is quite good, but the description of the competition is too homogeneous. They are all restricted and doubted first, and then slapped in the face.

Very well written, very passionate, and fully booked. In addition, adversity is normal, and it is in line with the current team's play style, but I hope to break through this in the future, otherwise it will feel too immediate.