Naruto: Chao Yiqianming

To be honest, you are all talking about water. In fact, this novel is very good. I personally think this novel can start all Naruto fans in seconds 😐

If the Sharingan can fuse with Hashirama's cells, and the Sharingan can be done with a small transplant operation, then doesn't the top management of Konoha have a Rinnegan at their disposal? Danzo is holding on to two hands, one hand is doing the Sharingan transplantation test, and the other is doing the Hashirama cell fusion test. If he grabs the Sharingan + Hashirama cells with both hands, isn't it the Rinnegan? And these two sons of Liudao inherited part of his genes respectively. Wouldn't others think of putting them together? If it were that simple, it would have been discovered long ago. The reason why Madara and Obito can successfully reconcile is just because the author gave them a trick, and it has nothing to do with the Sharingan.

After reading it, let me know what you think. The plot is exciting and non-toxic, and the protagonist's IQ is online. Overall, it's a fanfic worth reading. As for the so-called bad ending, my personal feeling is that the author feels that everything that needs to be explained has been explained, and delaying it any longer would be cheating on the word count. It would be better to end it directly. I don't think there is anything wrong with it. Above.

Generally speaking, it is a dark novel. The protagonist has no lower limit to achieve his goals. He will not save Minato until his death, murders the third generation leader, and digs out Hinata's eyes. The most important thing is that the setting and timeline are reasonable. It is a good book. I don't know why so many people criticize it

Abandoned in Chapter 166, it's OK for the protagonist to pursue power, but he only knows how to ask for it and doesn't know what to give in return. Are you sorry? It is said that without the fourth generation, one cannot learn to fly the Thunder God. If one cannot fly the Thunder God, he will be controlled by Orochimaru. After the fourth generation taught the protagonist, what did the protagonist do?_? He just continued to pursue power. After learning senjutsu, he first went to the 3.4 Generations to pretend that he was strong and cute. What about the favor he owed to the fourth generation and Tsunade? Really selfish

I read Chapter 200 and can't stand it. It's too dark and not suitable for me. There is no difference between the protagonist and Orochimaru, Nagato, Danzo, Ban, and Black Zetsu. They all pursue their own endurance and ignore other distortions of values. There are too many ordinary people in the world. We are all ordinary people, not gods. If people have no emotions, are they still human? And it seriously distorts the will of the third generation. If the third generation is a sinister person as the author said, will the third generation still have such great influence? Aren't people all fools? Orochimaru is smart, but everyone else is a fool? In my heart, the first generation, the third generation, the fourth generation, Naruto, their ideological values ​​are correct. Peace is the bond between people. The third generation influenced Iruka. Iruka influenced Naruto. Naruto influenced Sasuke. Nagato. This is not a mouth release. This is a manifestation of the value of ideas. The inheritance of the will of fire. Catching Fire will start a prairie fire forever!

An orphan with no background took the initiative to provoke two chunin on his first day in Konoha. Can you tell me why? I feel like vomiting when I see those bragging in the comment section. Can you add a sentence to the introduction? If you write it without thinking, readers should not read it with thinking.

I think the earth laws and mysteries in Panlong can be used for reference: low-level mysteries: element of earth, earth movement, medium-level mysteries: power, earth pulse, high-level mysteries: gravity space (geocentric magnetism), power of life

In order to follow the plot, I forcibly gave the protagonist a source of chakra. I thought that after Lin was saved, there would be an original plot, but the last two chapters were completely written out. He wanted to save Minato, but ended up having a fight with Kyuubi, but nothing changed. Kill Nagato and don't want the Samsara Eye. Because it will change the plot. He also cooperates with Obito and wants to be reincarnated to support him. Then after you collect the tailed beasts, just don't do anything else. Wouldn't it be better to just wait for Infinite Tsukuyomi. I'm numb. If you don't follow the plot, you won't be able to write?

Overall, it's okay and tends to be more realistic, but the character of the protagonist is as unstable as jumping around repeatedly, and the plot is always written with meaningless things: he first rescued Lin and said it was a conspiracy with Uchiha Madara, and then let Lin die. Isn't it awkward to let this void fight; Later, it was said that he wanted to save the fourth generation couple to repay the kindness of teaching the Flying Thunder God, and then he first stole Xinjuna's sealing technique, and then punched the four major couples with the Nine Tails, but the four couples were still dead. How did he manage to lick his face and say that the poison could save people? It felt like he wanted to follow the plot. Just read this. I can't understand the author's operation. He saved Lin and filtered out a wave of Lin's death and then filtered out a wave of Lin's death. He said that he saved the fourth generation and gave hope and let another wave of people die. After removing (tolerating) these reversals and then reversing them, this book is really worth reading.