Ability Plunder in a Certain Academy City

I think it's well written and it can be seen that it was written with care. There is nothing stupid in the plot. What I dislike the most is that it is clearly written as an anime fanfic, but it always uses China as a point of reference. Talk about how awesome Chinese things are, all kinds of original creations for cultivating immortals, and a bunch of new names and new moves. This is not what we want to see, we just hope that the people in the original work can be happy, the bad guys are crucified, and the tragedy is prevented from happening. The protagonist is like a black knight, holding a shield and sword to protect the princess he loves. However, it is the prince who can marry the princess. MiG, I'm very confused about Aleister's behavior in the plot. Can you please tell me why? It is not necessary to control Kamijou Touma with Misaka Mikoto. Other mental controllers and magic can make him work hard. It is unwise to tell the protagonist Sister Pao that you should not play. Regarding the lack of control over the description of emotional scenes, I don't know why Sister Pao likes the protagonist. The protagonist calls Sister Pao Mikoto, whom she has never met before. This is This is very impolite behavior. Logically speaking, Sister Pao should shock him to the point of jumping and causing his favorability to drop. After all, there are many people who like Sister Pao, and there is no shortage of him. The protagonist is self-righteous and thinks that he can have sex with the gun sister he likes by traveling to the forbidden world. No matter how hard it is, you have to soak it. The protagonist only pays one-sidedly. We all know that unrequited love generally does not have good results in relationships. In the end, the protagonist was so tortured that he was covered in wounds, and Sister Pao seemed inhumane if she didn't appreciate it. Killing dozens of people and destroying dozens of research institutes saved tens of thousands of lives, and these dozens of people were heinous people. I think it was not a loss. If only I could write less about bad gangsters looking for trouble in addition to the main storyline. A bunch of scumbags, no need to describe too much, they were all slapped in the face anyway. MiG, I understand your troubles. You poured your heart and soul into this book. But the results of this book will disappoint you. The cruel reality of life makes you feel confused about who you are now. Don't hesitate and go on firmly. Before success, a cold bench is essential. It was extremely uncomfortable when I was in Carvin. I had it myself. I didn't know how to describe this character's personality. Even just one sentence made me feel anxious and worried that I couldn't fully simulate it. I kept thinking about it over and over again. You can read books to improve your pen control. All I can say is go for it and choose your own path.

From 2017 to now, I am still writing, and it is still the same. I have kept it on the bookshelf for three years, and I have nothing to say. It has outlasted you!

Well, I quit when I saw Cang Ye Wei Liang suddenly popping up. It's not impossible to add original characters. Don't add them at key plot moments. Just forget about the extra people who were influenced by the protagonist. For some reason, there was no more foreshadowing and there was not a sudden addition of a character. The person who traveled through the pig's feet may not be the Magic Forbidden, but a fan of the Magic Forbidden. Maybe there will be an explanation later, but I really couldn't resist and slipped away.

Being conscious of the system is a poisonous point, and relying on the system for everything is also a poisonous point. After reading two or three chapters, the protagonist has no IQ, no charm, and no ability. The character of the protagonist feels quite disgusting. Also, he has not used the system after traveling for two years. Does the author want to show that the protagonist is disdainful of power or that the protagonist is a waste?

Why doesn't the author update? He can't be a eunuch anymore 😭😭😭😭

You have been more diligent these past two days. MiG, what saved your conscience?

I was persuaded to quit by Cang Ye Weiliang

Author, you wrote very well when you wrote about the fight against Accelerator. Unlike that LV0 legend who just made some small talk and stayed in the hospital and passed away, Accelerator was the man closest to obeying God at LV5 no matter what. How could he pass away with such nonsense?

I just finished ordering and found out it was a little pigeon 😥

Are you still updating? Why does it look like I'm committing suicide again?