The Young Master of the Yakumo Family

The purpose of time travel is to collect the so-called fantasy power, which means that Yakumo can achieve his goal even if he just messes around when the time comes. In several worlds written by the author, the protagonist's participation in the plot seems to do nothing except to relieve boredom and think deeply about the pros and cons. As far as he is concerned, he has gained nothing except two women, happy Dangba, a fox, and a floating city. This is a waste of his unique ability to "travel". In this regard, I hope the author can make Yakumo more proactive. In addition to following the protagonist of the original work, he can analyze and learn the unique features of each world, such as technology, magic, super powers, blood, swordsmanship, onmyoji, etc. These are the real essence of different worlds. Even if it is really useless, it is still good to enrich your knowledge and broaden your horizons. Traveling through time must have a goal. Collecting the power of fantasy and perfecting the world of Gensokyo is Yakumo Murasaki's "Tao". In addition to fulfilling her sister's dream, does Yakumo Murasaki also have to think about what she wants to do? The strongest in the world? Protect the one you love? The world is full of seeds? In short, don't regard other people's wishes as your own dreams. Take a step back, if you have to copy your sister in terms of ideals, please don't continue to copy her in terms of fighting methods and power system. In the gap + umbrella swing + barrage, the author's love for purple is well known, but after all, the protagonist of this book is Mo, not the "male purple". After seeing such a vast universe, does the protagonist still think, "Because I am a monster, I will never waver in my demonic power, and one day I will be exactly like my elder sister"? There is also the issue of strength. Even if he no longer has to rely on soft food and no longer needs foreign aid when encountering strong enemies, Yakumo should find ways to improve his strength. As a man, it is a manly thing to protect women and sisters with his own strength, right? It would be too shameful to summon your sister when you encounter a strong enemy. How about using this as motivation to get stronger? Finally, it is about the creation of the protagonist's image. Although he is Yakumo Murasaki's younger brother, is the author too rigid in this regard? It's very girly to follow her sister's example of using an umbrella and playing with a fan to cover her face on sunny days. Does she even have to have the same oral habits as her sister? Calling herself "we" is far-fetched, and the "ah la" before opening her mouth makes people think she is helping her. How could the soul of a party-state man become so perverted in just a few years? Is it possible that even a little bit of masculinity can lead to the reputation of Yakumo? Ps: The following is my rant. Judging from the behavior of listing the book, the author did not write the book for self-entertainment, but probably wanted to make money. So... Anime fans are originally a niche literature, and there may be a lot of weird otakus among them, but are they the majority who are really passionate about transformation, pretending to be a girl, supporting her, and being gay? I hope the author will think carefully. It may be your taste to be unique, but the general public rarely has unique tastes.

I was also drunk. To the Demon God, destiny is just the result of the collision of the Demon God's thoughts. How could Remilia Hede let the Demon God ask her for advice on fate? Is the author just fooling around and not reading much of the original novel?

The first thing when reading a book: read the introduction of the book. The second thing is to read the book directly. Reading hot comments will insult your IQ. The third thing is to close this chapter to ensure that your IQ is online. Don't lose your IQ and interest in reading because of some people's comments

Let's not talk about the settings. I don't know the settings of those anime. At least I can watch them. Swords and the Index of Forbidden Books seemed good to me. But when Shikon no Tama started, the plot collapsed into a mess. The first was that he became the scapegoat. The miko fought against the darkness in Shikon no Tama until she almost died. Then the protagonist appeared to replace the miko. The cost was that he lost control of his body and went crazy, which led to him being sealed by the onmyoji. Finally, he became a scapegoat. The most important point is that the author did not write out what benefits the Shikon no Tama brings to the protagonist. If it is beneficial, it is not unacceptable even if it is poisonous. The second is that the protagonist was insulted after breaking the seal. The onmyoji threatened the protagonist and wanted to accept the protagonist as a shikigami. The protagonist was also threatened by the miko to self-destruct in the spiritual space and was not allowed to kill. This is the point of ingratitude. The key is that the protagonist still compromised like this! What is the most important thing when writing this kind of daily entertainment article? The most important thing is that the protagonist is able to do everything with ease! ! If you feel aggrieved and compromise when something happens, why not write a daily story or an upgrade story? If you are threatened, you can't do anything. Go back to Gensokyo to find your sister. If you can't do anything, can your sister not be able to do anything? Isn't it possible to travel back and forth as long as you've been to a world? Do you care about this little time when your life is threatened? The third is that he was not decisive enough in killing. How many times have he been insulted from beginning to end? He just killed one person, didn't know how to eliminate the root cause, killed her father in front of others, and his son let them go? Since it is a daily novel, it does not need to be the same as the dark flow, but at least it must be decisive in killing, repaying kindness and repaying hatred. The writing of the fighting is too weak. From the beginning to the end, killing just one person is still mentioned in one stroke. I was distracted while reading it. I wanted to go through it quickly at a glance, but then I ignored it, and the result was nothing. The scene of revenge came back when I saw it. The more I read, the more upset I became. As a result, I got out of control. I scrolled faster and faster until I finally looked at the table of contents to see if there was any plot of going back for revenge. I could endure it, but the key point is that there wasn't. I just passed it. Then I lost my mood to read it and deleted the book.

What can I say after reading it? As an electronic Viet Cong, I am very happy to see Dongfang fan fiction, but I have also stepped on two minefields of Dongfang Zhong, one is the theory of lifespan, and the other is the theory of strength. I personally suggest that the old Viet Cong not read it, or just read it as a general invincible novel.

Really, to be honest, as soon as I read the volume of The Sword Dance of the Elf, I took it off the shelf. Let's not talk about the protagonist becoming an elf, but let's talk about him and Asuna. I was really drunk. A monster from Gensokyo (still the strongest race) was suppressed by the Elf King. . . If you look at their "Second Dimension Lottery", the logical thinking is much better than this novel. It's also a fantasy fantasy. . . Why is the gap so big?

An objective evaluation: The plot of this book is quite good. The male protagonist's personality, behavior and other characters are also different from other Wudi-like diaosi and humanoid self-propelled cannons. It is a perfect character and the writing is not bad. But I really want to say something. I feel that the description of strength and realm in this book is too vague. It is said out of nowhere that the male protagonist is more powerful than before, and he has not been seen practicing. It is also impossible to tell how strong other monsters are. It is just generally written that they are very powerful, and the protagonist is still a long way away from them. So how strong is the male protagonist? I don't know, I didn't write it down; how strong are others? I don't know, and I haven't written it either.

Only now do I realize how much this book degrades the forbidden demon god.

I remember this book, Ben Zimo

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